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Writing this to encourage people to read the last chapter. It's a somewhat announcement somewhat question. Had to go that route since I had marked the book as complete
wasn't rimuru asexual??................................................................................................................................................................................💀💀💀
I don't know if i am missing out but I'm probably dropping this.............. MC and other characters are just so one dimensional and has no depth, even if I just read this to pass time I just can't immerse myself to actually read it.
This is one and only my favourite fanfic, why can't other authors write something similar
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while it did had some ups and downs the overall story was a nice read and well executed.
I don't find fault with writing quality. Regular updates. I can't say anything about world background. Good protagonist just a little boring as story goes on. Overall good story if you want to spend time reading and relaxing
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Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
great story though the lina part did bother me you just picked her at start and end she didn't play any important role throughout the series millim and rimuru relationship was great i love that Velgrynd was unexpected
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The best Rimuru fanfiction I've ever read. Although, to be honest, this is my first normal fanfic for this fandom. Too bad they never added Luminous... I hope it's just left behind the scenes!
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(Plot spoilers ahead) Would rate it 5/5.1 but I can't do that here because webnovel has a horrible rating system. Reasons for my rating are below. I love this Rimuru fan fiction because it felt very fulfilling seeing him be the most efficient rimuru possible collecting skills, building the town, killing bad subordintes of dead people and I loved reading it as it didn't have Rimuru getting skills and not using them he had a fun merge mobile game. with his skills to give the best skills. It gave him the skills to become god, and he played a wonderful god. He didn't just sit around and do nothing, he made stuff, and rebuilt a dead universe staying to his morals of the innocent should be helped and the guilty should be put down. The last seven chapters felt like fun adventures that were part of the story and had to be written, they were lovely, just perfect. I wish it didn’t end but the author had good points his health is important and he should really enjoy writting not feeling like he has to sacrifice something to pump out chapters for us. I would change the first twenty chapters as I just wish he didn’t get the world record time in the 1-4 light novel any% category. It was nice seeing the changes in the story that you made but I kind of wanted a more in depth anaylisis of the days so, I loved your side chapters which felt needed as they helped fleshing out the story in points we didn't get to see. I thank you as we are the mere mortals that can't see past the walls that nature allows us to see. while you the author can see past that and feel the story in the walls, and you have to pity us and tell us that story as we aren't like you. So thank you for making this wonderful story that I would love to see a sequel to.
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Writing Quality = 4/5 Stability of Updates 2/5 Story Development 1/5 Character Design 2/5 World Background 2/5 Loved it when I first read 80-90 chapters, came back to it after more released and it just became boring. I couldn't find myself enjoying anything and it felt like the MC was the side character not to mention uninteresting.
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I am here for one reason...............................................................................................................................to read.
Looks good came here from ttigraasinw from crossover did not regret.Looks good came here from ttigraasinw from crossover did not regret.Looks good came here from ttigraasinw from crossover did not regret
It is quite a good fanfic especially since "That Time I Got Reincarnated as a Slime" doesn't have many fanfics to begin with. Though the grammar and spelling mistakes could be corrected but it is good enough for a read. The start of the story is similar but does diverge afterwards. Also for those who aren't up to date with the manga and novel it is quite a good way to know more about it.
fun to read, I think the story is good, the romance is also good, there is a harem, but the writer at the beginning said the harem will be like a profance prince of domination, I think there will be that many, but not that many, there are only a few girls if I'm not mistaken. and the action is pretty good too
Obligatory author review. I gotta say that this is my first time writing any actual story(even if it is a fanfic) so in my opinion, I am not that great at writing yet. However, I am trying my best. I know the dialogue and descriptions may seem a bit weird but I am learning as I go. I do try to make as much research as I can(Having the wiki, the manga, and the light novel open at the same time) to write something without creating plotholes. I am going to change the story up but it will follow a similar track until after he gives the spirits to the kids since many important things have to happen for what I want to write in the future to happen. It's hard not to fall into the trap of following exactly what the Original did since it did such a good job at it but I am trying my best. For updates, I try to update as regularly as I can but there may be some times I won't be able to since I do have a full-time job and I may be too tired or busy to write some days. For story development, I have most of the changes planned out after he gives the kids their spirits. I personally think it is pretty good but it is obviously biased as it is my story. Time will tell how that goes as chapter 12 is the most recent chapter as of writing this. For character design. I am trying to write Rimuru as a creative person. Often using spells combinations to create the most effective attack method. He is a bit of a good guy with a "Sense of justice" but when the time comes to be ruthless he is more than willing to do it. Just because he is good doesn't mean he will be obsessed with being a good guy and being a hero though. As for world background, it is Tensura's world so I cannot take credit for it. I think it is a pretty good world with a good story and that is why I decided to write a fanfic in it. Hopefully you enjoy reading the story.
Writing this to encourage people to read the last chapter. It's a somewhat announcement somewhat question. Had to go that route since I had marked the book as complete
wasn't rimuru asexual??................................................................................................................................................................................💀💀💀
I don't know if i am missing out but I'm probably dropping this.............. MC and other characters are just so one dimensional and has no depth, even if I just read this to pass time I just can't immerse myself to actually read it.
This is one and only my favourite fanfic, why can't other authors write something similar
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while it did had some ups and downs the overall story was a nice read and well executed.
I don't find fault with writing quality. Regular updates. I can't say anything about world background. Good protagonist just a little boring as story goes on. Overall good story if you want to spend time reading and relaxing
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Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
great story though the lina part did bother me you just picked her at start and end she didn't play any important role throughout the series millim and rimuru relationship was great i love that Velgrynd was unexpected
Reveal Spoiler The best Rimuru fanfiction I've ever read. Although, to be honest, this is my first normal fanfic for this fandom. Too bad they never added Luminous... I hope it's just left behind the scenes!
Reveal Spoiler (Plot spoilers ahead) Would rate it 5/5.1 but I can't do that here because webnovel has a horrible rating system. Reasons for my rating are below. I love this Rimuru fan fiction because it felt very fulfilling seeing him be the most efficient rimuru possible collecting skills, building the town, killing bad subordintes of dead people and I loved reading it as it didn't have Rimuru getting skills and not using them he had a fun merge mobile game. with his skills to give the best skills. It gave him the skills to become god, and he played a wonderful god. He didn't just sit around and do nothing, he made stuff, and rebuilt a dead universe staying to his morals of the innocent should be helped and the guilty should be put down. The last seven chapters felt like fun adventures that were part of the story and had to be written, they were lovely, just perfect. I wish it didn’t end but the author had good points his health is important and he should really enjoy writting not feeling like he has to sacrifice something to pump out chapters for us. I would change the first twenty chapters as I just wish he didn’t get the world record time in the 1-4 light novel any% category. It was nice seeing the changes in the story that you made but I kind of wanted a more in depth anaylisis of the days so, I loved your side chapters which felt needed as they helped fleshing out the story in points we didn't get to see. I thank you as we are the mere mortals that can't see past the walls that nature allows us to see. while you the author can see past that and feel the story in the walls, and you have to pity us and tell us that story as we aren't like you. So thank you for making this wonderful story that I would love to see a sequel to.
Reveal Spoiler Writing Quality = 4/5 Stability of Updates 2/5 Story Development 1/5 Character Design 2/5 World Background 2/5 Loved it when I first read 80-90 chapters, came back to it after more released and it just became boring. I couldn't find myself enjoying anything and it felt like the MC was the side character not to mention uninteresting.
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I am here for one reason...............................................................................................................................to read.
Looks good came here from ttigraasinw from crossover did not regret.Looks good came here from ttigraasinw from crossover did not regret.Looks good came here from ttigraasinw from crossover did not regret
It is quite a good fanfic especially since "That Time I Got Reincarnated as a Slime" doesn't have many fanfics to begin with. Though the grammar and spelling mistakes could be corrected but it is good enough for a read. The start of the story is similar but does diverge afterwards. Also for those who aren't up to date with the manga and novel it is quite a good way to know more about it.
fun to read, I think the story is good, the romance is also good, there is a harem, but the writer at the beginning said the harem will be like a profance prince of domination, I think there will be that many, but not that many, there are only a few girls if I'm not mistaken. and the action is pretty good too
Obligatory author review. I gotta say that this is my first time writing any actual story(even if it is a fanfic) so in my opinion, I am not that great at writing yet. However, I am trying my best. I know the dialogue and descriptions may seem a bit weird but I am learning as I go. I do try to make as much research as I can(Having the wiki, the manga, and the light novel open at the same time) to write something without creating plotholes. I am going to change the story up but it will follow a similar track until after he gives the spirits to the kids since many important things have to happen for what I want to write in the future to happen. It's hard not to fall into the trap of following exactly what the Original did since it did such a good job at it but I am trying my best. For updates, I try to update as regularly as I can but there may be some times I won't be able to since I do have a full-time job and I may be too tired or busy to write some days. For story development, I have most of the changes planned out after he gives the kids their spirits. I personally think it is pretty good but it is obviously biased as it is my story. Time will tell how that goes as chapter 12 is the most recent chapter as of writing this. For character design. I am trying to write Rimuru as a creative person. Often using spells combinations to create the most effective attack method. He is a bit of a good guy with a "Sense of justice" but when the time comes to be ruthless he is more than willing to do it. Just because he is good doesn't mean he will be obsessed with being a good guy and being a hero though. As for world background, it is Tensura's world so I cannot take credit for it. I think it is a pretty good world with a good story and that is why I decided to write a fanfic in it. Hopefully you enjoy reading the story.