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I don't appreciate yanderes who target women who get close to the MC; that's not truly yandere. I prefer yanderes who are physically possessive of the MC, where if another woman approaches, it's the MC who faces mistreatment, as a couple's relationship concerns only them. I fail to comprehend why many novels, like yours, portray this version of yandere; it's a distorted interpretation. If you'd like, I can suggest novels with genuine yanderes to read.
Beautiful Yandere Novel. Author please come back it’s been well past those 6 months
Sentences don’t make sense always, you can read it but there are glaring mistakes everywhere. The heroines fall in love to fast, and it is to fast paced. Is the MC an idiot. (I read 10 chapters before dropping.)
Me gusta mucho encaja perfecto con mis gustos, y la historia y conportamiento de los personajes tambien me gusta, ademas de como se esta desarrollando la historia y las relaciones
Ceritanya sangat bagus dan menarik untuk dibaca karena menjelaskan berbagai karakter yang ada di dalamnya dan juga yandere merupakan karakter kesukaan saya
Trash story where the main character lets his women walk all over him, and never even uses the system. Dude is bowing to a little girl because she’s stronger than him. This is the problem with making the MC weak and the girls strong.
The only sad thing is that I've reached the end ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ, I only see improvements in the story, in the yanderes and in the romance. I recommend this story and I want this story to be a big hit going forward.
Writing quality: can be improved. Stability of Updates: stopped ... Story Development: not bad. Character Design: nice World Background: the truth is that it is very interesting good story to pass the time, and the quality improvement is very noticeable, keep it up, the story is beautiful. <3
Great story, please continue author ✍️ 🙏🙏……,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,…,,,,,,.,.,….,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
the pace of the story is too fast and the heroines fall in love too easily so there is no fun in mc's relationship with heroine. that's all for the review.
Tem cada cena "educativa" nessa webnovel hehehe ,fiquei triste por n haver mais capítulos ,pois viciei nessa obra , é uma das poucas webs q eu li no site
Yandere is love. This story os really nice. Waiting for author to start this story again ............................................................................
Amazingly good. Yanderes and more yanderes. story doesn’t drag and pacing is great. turns cliche happenings nto hilarious situations You must try this
I liked it very much I found it very interesting, the story and plot is very good the author knows how to write, the protagonist's personality is evolving and adapting better to crazy women around him, the harem is amazing and as you are creating it is good
well the story development is to fast if author can make the development a more creative and in steady pace than this story can be very good and interesting I read first some chapter the story development the character development with each other characters just to fast I hope author can understand what I want tell
Excellent story and concept ruined by bad writing skills. Most of the sentences don't make sense and are grammatically incorrect. Like this from CH-6: "And the astonishing fact is that in this world and women are born equal and whoever trains can become strong regardless of their gender." This sentence can be written a lot better..... Is this MTL? The only time I've ever seen something written this bad was using MTL, and that's compared to bad MTLs. I hope author improves his writing skills. Try running it through Grammarly or a proofreader. This novel has a lot of potential.
Very nice novel. .those who love yandere should watch it and those who don't they should also watch it cause this may lead him to love a yandere or how to manage yandere.. .Pretty funny. ..i guess comedy should also be added in genre...
The updates are fairly quickly and the novel is fleshed out enough that the story doesn't feel like it is grinding to a halt, and the plot moves along at a steady pace. Though the characters are charming, but their personalities could be more than what they are and excluding a few quirks a lot of the yandere's personality traits overlap one another.
The story so far has been really good and I have enjoyed it but I feel the author has rushed many different concepts and skipped over many different important details. Another thing is the grammatical errors, there are many and the flow of the sentences don't add up all that well. Don't get me wrong this story is worth a read but a few things could be fixed.
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Yes, yandere! Will read after this has many chaps. ....................................................................................................
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The story is good and all, but the punctuation error is a nightmare because you can never dive into the story. I just "read" the text, not imagine it happening.
Everything about this is very well put together. Not to mention the author is interacting with the readers and I really appreciate that. This is one of if not the best novels I have read.
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nice.....great yayandere story[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Your author here and after one month of writing I wrote this review. You will get all the yandere women you want and proper harem with enough character development. While there will be adventures and action the main part will be romance and relationships. As well this novel will contain a lot of mythologies from all cultures. So if you are either from harem or no harem sect give it a try as it has fairly good romance in it.
I don't appreciate yanderes who target women who get close to the MC; that's not truly yandere. I prefer yanderes who are physically possessive of the MC, where if another woman approaches, it's the MC who faces mistreatment, as a couple's relationship concerns only them. I fail to comprehend why many novels, like yours, portray this version of yandere; it's a distorted interpretation. If you'd like, I can suggest novels with genuine yanderes to read.
Beautiful Yandere Novel. Author please come back it’s been well past those 6 months
Sentences don’t make sense always, you can read it but there are glaring mistakes everywhere. The heroines fall in love to fast, and it is to fast paced. Is the MC an idiot. (I read 10 chapters before dropping.)
Me gusta mucho encaja perfecto con mis gustos, y la historia y conportamiento de los personajes tambien me gusta, ademas de como se esta desarrollando la historia y las relaciones
Ceritanya sangat bagus dan menarik untuk dibaca karena menjelaskan berbagai karakter yang ada di dalamnya dan juga yandere merupakan karakter kesukaan saya
Trash story where the main character lets his women walk all over him, and never even uses the system. Dude is bowing to a little girl because she’s stronger than him. This is the problem with making the MC weak and the girls strong.
The only sad thing is that I've reached the end ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ, I only see improvements in the story, in the yanderes and in the romance. I recommend this story and I want this story to be a big hit going forward.
Writing quality: can be improved. Stability of Updates: stopped ... Story Development: not bad. Character Design: nice World Background: the truth is that it is very interesting good story to pass the time, and the quality improvement is very noticeable, keep it up, the story is beautiful. <3
Great story, please continue author ✍️ 🙏🙏……,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,…,,,,,,.,.,….,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
the pace of the story is too fast and the heroines fall in love too easily so there is no fun in mc's relationship with heroine. that's all for the review.
Tem cada cena "educativa" nessa webnovel hehehe ,fiquei triste por n haver mais capítulos ,pois viciei nessa obra , é uma das poucas webs q eu li no site
Yandere is love. This story os really nice. Waiting for author to start this story again ............................................................................
Amazingly good. Yanderes and more yanderes. story doesn’t drag and pacing is great. turns cliche happenings nto hilarious situations You must try this
I liked it very much I found it very interesting, the story and plot is very good the author knows how to write, the protagonist's personality is evolving and adapting better to crazy women around him, the harem is amazing and as you are creating it is good
well the story development is to fast if author can make the development a more creative and in steady pace than this story can be very good and interesting I read first some chapter the story development the character development with each other characters just to fast I hope author can understand what I want tell
Excellent story and concept ruined by bad writing skills. Most of the sentences don't make sense and are grammatically incorrect. Like this from CH-6: "And the astonishing fact is that in this world and women are born equal and whoever trains can become strong regardless of their gender." This sentence can be written a lot better..... Is this MTL? The only time I've ever seen something written this bad was using MTL, and that's compared to bad MTLs. I hope author improves his writing skills. Try running it through Grammarly or a proofreader. This novel has a lot of potential.
Very nice novel. .those who love yandere should watch it and those who don't they should also watch it cause this may lead him to love a yandere or how to manage yandere.. .Pretty funny. ..i guess comedy should also be added in genre...
The updates are fairly quickly and the novel is fleshed out enough that the story doesn't feel like it is grinding to a halt, and the plot moves along at a steady pace. Though the characters are charming, but their personalities could be more than what they are and excluding a few quirks a lot of the yandere's personality traits overlap one another.
The story so far has been really good and I have enjoyed it but I feel the author has rushed many different concepts and skipped over many different important details. Another thing is the grammatical errors, there are many and the flow of the sentences don't add up all that well. Don't get me wrong this story is worth a read but a few things could be fixed.
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Yes, yandere! Will read after this has many chaps. ....................................................................................................
Reveal Spoiler The story is good and all, but the punctuation error is a nightmare because you can never dive into the story. I just "read" the text, not imagine it happening.
Everything about this is very well put together. Not to mention the author is interacting with the readers and I really appreciate that. This is one of if not the best novels I have read.
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nice.....great yayandere story[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Your author here and after one month of writing I wrote this review. You will get all the yandere women you want and proper harem with enough character development. While there will be adventures and action the main part will be romance and relationships. As well this novel will contain a lot of mythologies from all cultures. So if you are either from harem or no harem sect give it a try as it has fairly good romance in it.