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Moonyani

Hello readers, I’m the author of this book. I hope you enjoy it. Maybe the first parts arent so good because it’s my first book but don’t judge too hard. Read it further so you can understand the Story development better. Check out my other book; The female emperor is two-faced✨ Thank you.

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jj_aqua

Just read some chapters and I want to read more but I'm here to give my honest review and I gotta say Wow the characters the plot the theme everything is perfect Good work Author👍👍

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ameer_hassan

Hey there!Perfect plot. I absolutely love this book. You can actually get paid by distributing this work. DM me ameerhassangarba*@*gmail.com

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LivingVoid

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Sky_Li

It's a great book to begin with, the story flow is enough for one to truly indulge I, not too fast paced oe slow♥️ It's a really good book and i recommend itv5o all readers out there!🥰💕

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Chuck45Single

This is a nice, contemporary book. I like the storyline and the way the author tries to describe the characters and environment. I think a bit more personality depth would be cool. Nice writing style and good flow. Keep it up! :)

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mirxkewl

In the little I've read, this book is surely a pleasant read. The important characters were introduced early in the story and the protagonist's backstory as well, which really makes us feel connected with her from the get-go. While I think the reveal could've been slightly later, it ultimately doesn't hinder the story. The protagonist's friends are so nice to see and I love the way that their relationships are written, I can just about imagine how joyful and pretty they are! Can't wait to finish the book, great work author, I can't believe this is only your first :O

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SUNIL_KUMAR_SETHI

Interesting plot with a good creativity. I liked the way the author scripted the story. You will like as you progress the story. Try it and you will get it.

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Venusean

Good story, and an author who is very open to feedback and has undergone massive improvements in their writing skill, which I congratulate them for. The pace can vary somewhat irregularly, but it wasn't glaring. Good work!

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SelfProclaimedNerd

Honestly, it's not that bad. There are a few mistakes in grammar but you can still read the story regardless. It is a bit off-putting at times, but it is what it is. The way the MC reacts after being betrayed is questionable, but it makes the story move faster so it's not a big deal. Although the ML's actions are highly erratic, who even brings a person they just met into their house or office? Usually, these bosses will just call their subordinates and make them deal with the situation. It is a bit forced but it helps the story develop, so there's not much I can say. Overall, it was a good read. Keep it up!

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MiuNovels

i like the story where the 1st ml died and the plot took a second chance in romance. my only concern is the pacing. it lack descriptions and emotions and the important scenes r fast paced that readers wont be emotionally invested T_T overall, dont stop writing and reading [img=recommend]

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MichelleLeeee

Wow! So a Revenge story that takes place right from the start. This novel is a definite worldwind that throws you in and take you on a ride. Mei, the MC, is relatable if you were in the same circumstances. There are decisions made that would make you either love her or hate her for choosing them, but Author does a good job in punching out more and more plot. Well done author and a recommend!

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theforce1579

Really good story with great potential. Really loved the female lead and the interaction between her and the male lead. looking forward to more of this because the romance is really nice. Best of luck to the the author.

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Kamali_S

Nice story, I'm just loved it. The romance between between the female lead and male lead is amazing. The writing way also good [img=coins] 💜👍🏻

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Soun_Phavin

I'm addicted to this story XD. Love it so much especially the romance between the female lead and the male lead. It's fluffy and romantic. The plot is a five stars from me

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nanmenxing

A cute and unusual story like the main heroine. Character development, writing style and spelling are well enhanced by the characters' development. This book could become one of my favorites.

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Devanshi_Rathod

Awesome !! starting point of story was cool and catchy. Loved the story so far!! Amazing work author, keep up !! Upload more chapters , readers want more !!😇😇

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Xiaoru
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Okay .I loved the story ..puppy love after marriage ..I hope FL teaches good lesson to her uncle's family .Very good story with high potential .Keep it up author !

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Zero2567

I've read some chapters and I must say that the world and the characters in which the story is set in is very well described and it gave me some classic romantic drama vibes. All in all a great story

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Sunny_Shad0w

I like the story, it's more of a romance type than anything, which is rather good. Although, I do feel that it is kind of complicated in reading some conversations due to absence of saying anything in between. There should be verb sentences to give more depth on conversations, what they feel inside their minds, and what is spoken out loud. Other than that, this is a great novel for romance lovers.

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Erfan_Sh

While I was reading the novel, I was very shocked because I didn’t expect it to be very amusing. I recommend this novel to readers who like romance. keep up the good work.

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Ashaaa_Lim

I like the story, it's so cute and fluffy(between ML and FL) and I can't wait for more update, keep it up, authornim! I will be waiting for more update💪🏻✨🤍

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ClaisiceLouice

The story is so cute. I love it. this is the type of relationship that could make my heart melt, cuties. It has a lot of questions in the beginning that will be answered while reading the story, which is somehow exciting!

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Lancee

The book has great potential, the picture created is well crafted along with the plot. With all that said I still believe a little work is needed on ensuring that the characters are well described so that as the reader's we can get to know them well. Overall it's a good read

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Eshal_Shahnawaz

The story is overall pretty good and the story development is great too. The characters are well set but you cam describe them a little more in detail. Writing quality is not bad so good job author!

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Juan_2032

The story is very interested but i think you should have give an explain about mentality of the character . overall this Is a good story' and i can't wait for next chapter

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Hiria
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The plot is quite interesting... But you can improve the story more by giving a deep detail of the characters and taking it a little slower..

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Yukina_Yamekui

You should probably write more about her mental state and describe her physics more. How she looks like, and so on. And the physics of the other characters you’re adding into the story along with what surrounds them, description of the background.

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Moonyani

Hello readers, I’m the author of this book. I hope you enjoy it. Maybe the first parts arent so good because it’s my first book but don’t judge too hard. Read it further so you can understand the Story development better. Check out my other book; The female emperor is two-faced✨ Thank you.

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jj_aqua

Just read some chapters and I want to read more but I'm here to give my honest review and I gotta say Wow the characters the plot the theme everything is perfect Good work Author👍👍

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ameer_hassan

Hey there!Perfect plot. I absolutely love this book. You can actually get paid by distributing this work. DM me ameerhassangarba*@*gmail.com

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Sky_Li

It's a great book to begin with, the story flow is enough for one to truly indulge I, not too fast paced oe slow♥️ It's a really good book and i recommend itv5o all readers out there!🥰💕

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Chuck45Single

This is a nice, contemporary book. I like the storyline and the way the author tries to describe the characters and environment. I think a bit more personality depth would be cool. Nice writing style and good flow. Keep it up! :)

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mirxkewl

In the little I've read, this book is surely a pleasant read. The important characters were introduced early in the story and the protagonist's backstory as well, which really makes us feel connected with her from the get-go. While I think the reveal could've been slightly later, it ultimately doesn't hinder the story. The protagonist's friends are so nice to see and I love the way that their relationships are written, I can just about imagine how joyful and pretty they are! Can't wait to finish the book, great work author, I can't believe this is only your first :O

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SUNIL_KUMAR_SETHI

Interesting plot with a good creativity. I liked the way the author scripted the story. You will like as you progress the story. Try it and you will get it.

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Venusean

Good story, and an author who is very open to feedback and has undergone massive improvements in their writing skill, which I congratulate them for. The pace can vary somewhat irregularly, but it wasn't glaring. Good work!

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SelfProclaimedNerd

Honestly, it's not that bad. There are a few mistakes in grammar but you can still read the story regardless. It is a bit off-putting at times, but it is what it is. The way the MC reacts after being betrayed is questionable, but it makes the story move faster so it's not a big deal. Although the ML's actions are highly erratic, who even brings a person they just met into their house or office? Usually, these bosses will just call their subordinates and make them deal with the situation. It is a bit forced but it helps the story develop, so there's not much I can say. Overall, it was a good read. Keep it up!

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MiuNovels

i like the story where the 1st ml died and the plot took a second chance in romance. my only concern is the pacing. it lack descriptions and emotions and the important scenes r fast paced that readers wont be emotionally invested T_T overall, dont stop writing and reading [img=recommend]

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MichelleLeeee

Wow! So a Revenge story that takes place right from the start. This novel is a definite worldwind that throws you in and take you on a ride. Mei, the MC, is relatable if you were in the same circumstances. There are decisions made that would make you either love her or hate her for choosing them, but Author does a good job in punching out more and more plot. Well done author and a recommend!

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theforce1579

Really good story with great potential. Really loved the female lead and the interaction between her and the male lead. looking forward to more of this because the romance is really nice. Best of luck to the the author.

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Kamali_S

Nice story, I'm just loved it. The romance between between the female lead and male lead is amazing. The writing way also good [img=coins] 💜👍🏻

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Soun_Phavin

I'm addicted to this story XD. Love it so much especially the romance between the female lead and the male lead. It's fluffy and romantic. The plot is a five stars from me

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nanmenxing

A cute and unusual story like the main heroine. Character development, writing style and spelling are well enhanced by the characters' development. This book could become one of my favorites.

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Devanshi_Rathod

Awesome !! starting point of story was cool and catchy. Loved the story so far!! Amazing work author, keep up !! Upload more chapters , readers want more !!😇😇

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Xiaoru
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Okay .I loved the story ..puppy love after marriage ..I hope FL teaches good lesson to her uncle's family .Very good story with high potential .Keep it up author !

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Zero2567

I've read some chapters and I must say that the world and the characters in which the story is set in is very well described and it gave me some classic romantic drama vibes. All in all a great story

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Sunny_Shad0w

I like the story, it's more of a romance type than anything, which is rather good. Although, I do feel that it is kind of complicated in reading some conversations due to absence of saying anything in between. There should be verb sentences to give more depth on conversations, what they feel inside their minds, and what is spoken out loud. Other than that, this is a great novel for romance lovers.

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Erfan_Sh

While I was reading the novel, I was very shocked because I didn’t expect it to be very amusing. I recommend this novel to readers who like romance. keep up the good work.

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Ashaaa_Lim

I like the story, it's so cute and fluffy(between ML and FL) and I can't wait for more update, keep it up, authornim! I will be waiting for more update💪🏻✨🤍

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ClaisiceLouice

The story is so cute. I love it. this is the type of relationship that could make my heart melt, cuties. It has a lot of questions in the beginning that will be answered while reading the story, which is somehow exciting!

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Lancee

The book has great potential, the picture created is well crafted along with the plot. With all that said I still believe a little work is needed on ensuring that the characters are well described so that as the reader's we can get to know them well. Overall it's a good read

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Eshal_Shahnawaz

The story is overall pretty good and the story development is great too. The characters are well set but you cam describe them a little more in detail. Writing quality is not bad so good job author!

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Juan_2032

The story is very interested but i think you should have give an explain about mentality of the character . overall this Is a good story' and i can't wait for next chapter

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Hiria
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The plot is quite interesting... But you can improve the story more by giving a deep detail of the characters and taking it a little slower..

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Yukina_Yamekui

You should probably write more about her mental state and describe her physics more. How she looks like, and so on. And the physics of the other characters you’re adding into the story along with what surrounds them, description of the background.

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