GoT: The Black Wolf of Winterfell

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BukanOrang

The beginning is a bit illogical and seems absurd knowing the kingdom building was too fast and the age of him doing all of wonderous things was inappropriate. Well, what can I say, it's fantasy fanfic of course. But as soon as he grew up the plot compensate itself, it gets better but the thing was I can't seem to move on from the introduction and it affected me reading the rest of the chapters 😭. Great concept by the way, not many ASOIAF fanfic choose a pre-canon timeline. I say again, it's too fast, it might better if just started from his teenage years while having a bit of flashback of his childhood. Uh, one more, he seems born with no gifts or something but he just being godlike for the rest of the fic. Sorry, I hope that was only me who felt that or I might just skipped some things while reading it.

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Will_Caruso

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Lucif3r_069

I think he should become the King of Westeros with Stannis as Hand, Melisandre as Master of Whispers, Manderly for Coin and Tarly for Laws. Varys could be seen as a Blackfyre man who will work in Essos to get the blackfyres back on throne. Dont really care about the Targs.

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Mahruf_Hassan

The idea is good, but it's poorly written. basically it's shet 💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩

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Gd_Sys

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Frizepize

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FlexioCZ

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starking

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Will_Caruso

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Bwoi_Guru69

Moaaarrrrrrr . .... I can only say simply magnificent , great background story and while his development is fast ,it doesn't really show him being too OP .

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DarkDei

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Infinit

quick, well-written story that stays a lot in the important parts, in short so far I really liked it.

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Oleg_Nikitin

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Marshall0lee

Autor, você tem que parar de fica fazendo questionários, você cria a historia e escolhe o futuro dela, foda-se oque os leitores pensa, é sua e ponto final. 7 capítulos só de auxilia fazendo pergunta, que saco, pelo amor de deus! Tirando isso eu gostei da obra!😊

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Kirse

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Dragonfenixx

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