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The writing is really bad, It try’s to be something good but the author just can’t do it. There are parts that just don’t make sense; or really unclear pov’s and character dialogue. The Harry Potter spells kinda ruined it for me, It just doesn’t fit in smoothly. Interactions between mc and love interest is really poorly written too, so be aware of that.
only thing bad I can say is the updates apart from that it is a great story so far. keep up the good work
It's pretty difficult to read for a book (almost unreadable), stability of updates is rather an unstability of updateskm, story development, character design and world background is meh. Nevertheless I read every chapter available to date, so at least it's not super boring (that doesn't mean that it isn't boring at all). 2,1,3,3,3
This is one of the stories that I love the most and I really wish there were more updates, I miss it so much, the plot is incredible and the development they had in Harry's story is wonderful, I can't wait to read what happens next
Author you are in dire need of a proof reader, an editor and couple of beta readers. Idea excellent. Writing atrocious. Anyway please do finish this story.
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It's really very good. I thought that after they went to another world it would end up ruining the story a little, but it actually made it much better. I hope she doesn't get abandoned
autor, você descartou a história? já faz muito tempo que não atualiza, a história é muito boa, eu gosto bastante. ________________________________________
It's great! Just wanna ask though, are you going to continue the story or are you dropping it?
Pure chaos and to chaotic The powers are cool and I like the idea bad sadly the author couldn‘t write it down
amazing book and storyline so far. i like the overpowered mc while changing characters like klaus to be good and changing fates of other great characters. only wish i have is for more updates a week lol thanks for the great work
До арки Гарри Потера фанфик был отличным ! вддыдвдвддвдвдвдвдвддвдвдвдвдвдвдвдвдвдвдвддввдвддвдвдвдвдвдвдвдвдвдвдвддввдв вддыдвдвддвдвдвдвдвддвдвдвдвдвдвдвдвдвдвдвддввдвддвдвдвдвдвдвдвдвдвдвдвддввдв
Everything happens so fast that I hardly understand anything, Mister is mastering these powers at an alarming rate but that's not the point, the fact is the actions started way too early, the MC got into trouble in less than a week and he is so mastered, the idea is really great, I hope there will be a rewrite, just to fix it, I would really like to read a better version Thanks to the author for taking his time to write it to us..
good quality waiting for more hope to continue writing and make some epic fighting scenes also like getting them to level up their strength
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I don’t remember the last time I read something of this magnitude. You’ve created a masterpiece with this. 💓💓💓💓 You’re a wordsmith! I’ve never even heard of half the words you use, and yet I seem to understand every single one of them! Some people think that writing on computers is easy. But I know how difficult it is to come up with ideas and turn them into meaningful and interesting content. Never give up, bro!💕
It’s really interesting, I love it for Unique story. I really enjoyed it reading it Good work ❣️ 💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛 I can’t wait for next update
this fanfic story about Alex in the original.hope is mc in this novel and Alex (mc fanfic) his babysitter.alex giving the best help for hope to grew up and this fanfic is quite good .thanks for the Chinese toist who give fake review and coment.
Now congratulations to the author. Now I haven't watched legacies. Maybe that's why I didn't like it and tried to read it. Now let's start by talking about things I should consider a failure. How is it possible for Hope to learn so many spells in 1 month when it has to be taught over the years to the students at Hogwarts. Another thing you said that the spells were more powerful than in their original world. Logically they should then have more difficulty to be used. The romance between Hope and the MC would have been more interesting if it hadn't been so rushed not to mention taxed. It's like romance isn't 100% the MC and Hope's choice. When you date someone you spend time with them and want them to be able to protect themselves. I don't know why Mc was compelled to teach Hope his spell collection. She already has a lot to learn from her own world and prepare for her different possible race evolutions. Bon other than that I found it a little annoying too since I don't like it when MC becomes a nanny for the original main character of the world.
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I always hated the argument "english isnt my first language", it isnt mine either and i can still write on an understandable level...furthermore there are plenty of free websites/programms to help on with the grammar :/ To the Story: i kinda dislike that there are a lot of unlogical plotholes and that some of the original character act totally different to their "series-selves" for example: Klaus is too understanding as a father and doesnt get his common trust issues etc. with mc...
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Really good so far. love how he doesn't know what's gonna happen and he seems smart and prevented Hope's Heart break. Can't wait for him to meet Klaus.
The writing is really bad, It try’s to be something good but the author just can’t do it. There are parts that just don’t make sense; or really unclear pov’s and character dialogue. The Harry Potter spells kinda ruined it for me, It just doesn’t fit in smoothly. Interactions between mc and love interest is really poorly written too, so be aware of that.
only thing bad I can say is the updates apart from that it is a great story so far. keep up the good work
It's pretty difficult to read for a book (almost unreadable), stability of updates is rather an unstability of updateskm, story development, character design and world background is meh. Nevertheless I read every chapter available to date, so at least it's not super boring (that doesn't mean that it isn't boring at all). 2,1,3,3,3
This is one of the stories that I love the most and I really wish there were more updates, I miss it so much, the plot is incredible and the development they had in Harry's story is wonderful, I can't wait to read what happens next
Author you are in dire need of a proof reader, an editor and couple of beta readers. Idea excellent. Writing atrocious. Anyway please do finish this story.
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Reveal Spoiler It's really very good. I thought that after they went to another world it would end up ruining the story a little, but it actually made it much better. I hope she doesn't get abandoned
autor, você descartou a história? já faz muito tempo que não atualiza, a história é muito boa, eu gosto bastante. ________________________________________
It's great! Just wanna ask though, are you going to continue the story or are you dropping it?
Pure chaos and to chaotic The powers are cool and I like the idea bad sadly the author couldn‘t write it down
amazing book and storyline so far. i like the overpowered mc while changing characters like klaus to be good and changing fates of other great characters. only wish i have is for more updates a week lol thanks for the great work
До арки Гарри Потера фанфик был отличным ! вддыдвдвддвдвдвдвдвддвдвдвдвдвдвдвдвдвдвдвддввдвддвдвдвдвдвдвдвдвдвдвдвддввдв вддыдвдвддвдвдвдвдвддвдвдвдвдвдвдвдвдвдвдвддввдвддвдвдвдвдвдвдвдвдвдвдвддввдв
Everything happens so fast that I hardly understand anything, Mister is mastering these powers at an alarming rate but that's not the point, the fact is the actions started way too early, the MC got into trouble in less than a week and he is so mastered, the idea is really great, I hope there will be a rewrite, just to fix it, I would really like to read a better version Thanks to the author for taking his time to write it to us..
good quality waiting for more hope to continue writing and make some epic fighting scenes also like getting them to level up their strength
Reveal Spoiler I don’t remember the last time I read something of this magnitude. You’ve created a masterpiece with this. 💓💓💓💓 You’re a wordsmith! I’ve never even heard of half the words you use, and yet I seem to understand every single one of them! Some people think that writing on computers is easy. But I know how difficult it is to come up with ideas and turn them into meaningful and interesting content. Never give up, bro!💕
It’s really interesting, I love it for Unique story. I really enjoyed it reading it Good work ❣️ 💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛 I can’t wait for next update
this fanfic story about Alex in the original.hope is mc in this novel and Alex (mc fanfic) his babysitter.alex giving the best help for hope to grew up and this fanfic is quite good .thanks for the Chinese toist who give fake review and coment.
Now congratulations to the author. Now I haven't watched legacies. Maybe that's why I didn't like it and tried to read it. Now let's start by talking about things I should consider a failure. How is it possible for Hope to learn so many spells in 1 month when it has to be taught over the years to the students at Hogwarts. Another thing you said that the spells were more powerful than in their original world. Logically they should then have more difficulty to be used. The romance between Hope and the MC would have been more interesting if it hadn't been so rushed not to mention taxed. It's like romance isn't 100% the MC and Hope's choice. When you date someone you spend time with them and want them to be able to protect themselves. I don't know why Mc was compelled to teach Hope his spell collection. She already has a lot to learn from her own world and prepare for her different possible race evolutions. Bon other than that I found it a little annoying too since I don't like it when MC becomes a nanny for the original main character of the world.
The grammar is atrocious. The grammar is atrocious.The grammar is atrocious.The grammar is atrocious. The grammar is atrocious.The grammar is atrocious.The grammar is atrocious. The grammar is atrocious.The grammar is atrocious.
I always hated the argument "english isnt my first language", it isnt mine either and i can still write on an understandable level...furthermore there are plenty of free websites/programms to help on with the grammar :/ To the Story: i kinda dislike that there are a lot of unlogical plotholes and that some of the original character act totally different to their "series-selves" for example: Klaus is too understanding as a father and doesnt get his common trust issues etc. with mc...
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Really good so far. love how he doesn't know what's gonna happen and he seems smart and prevented Hope's Heart break. Can't wait for him to meet Klaus.