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Alright I love the concept of this and wish that there was some peir editing, but not going any further on that subject. I was just wandering if there is going to be anymore chapters or if it is being posted somewhere else because I would love to continue reading this.
The story had a cliche plot from the beginning but that's generally okay. Good plots are used over and over because people like them. My issue was terrible writing quality and an insensible amount of plot armor. There's far too little world background, and our main character seemingly caught up to people with a 2 year head start in like 4 chapters. Now he's participating in world events he shouldn't be strong enough to touch. Entire guilds. These people should vastly out level him.
Even though it is was repeated plot that was okay but when all that is focused on is the main character killing and taking revenge. Half of the first 50 chapters is all about killing the cliche revenge son to father villain. Its not interesting to only read about that.
The biggest issue with this story is that every enemy he faces happens to have an uncontrollable rage that makes them completely stupid and kill their own allies. Not just one or two people, but almost every enemy with a name has this issue. The story is not bad, but the people are rather poorly written personality wise (the sister is also way too childish and naive. I do not see how old she is, but the author was laying the sweet little sister way too thick). Side note: There is another issue with grammar. There are a ton of small errors, but the story is readable as a whole
Yeah it seems good so far I recommend Filler song again…… Gunter, why did you gunt my fries? I gunted them, and they were mine. What kind of gunt gunts his Gunter's fries, And doesn't even gunt him in the eyes? Gunter, there were tears there. If you gunted them, would you even care? Gunter, do you even love me?
We're off to the good start....... ........... ........ .. ............. More............................. ............ ..................
great story great mc great battles not so great writing quality with lots of wrong words ana gramma but it dose not affect how good the story and fights are
it got to a stage all the fight scenes just got repetitive all you see is swish swish, clank, swisssh,swash. it get tiring fast 😪..........
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This novel is complete plagiarism, and not worth your time. Just read the original version which title "Player Who Returned 10,000 Years Later".
Is there gonna be more chapters.. It is added in my pending list as i think the writer as dropped it. 3 stars as I haven't read it yet. Do let me know.
I would like to the author for increasing my ability to read jumbled words. I can guess what mostly the words are supposed to be in this translation. I can actually follow the story, but at the cost of rereading certain passages. Story is good, but you got it on hard mode to read. I would not recommend the audio version, even though I have not attempted to try to. I bet it sounds horrid 😂😂😂
hey there are a lot of questions I want answered from chapter 1 like •how did he lived 400 years as a human •how did he kill all those demons something like those author San please answer for I am still reading but I like the story keep up the work
My poor braincells, my poor eyes, my poor head, the headache ..................................... Bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla, screw minimum word review
the grammar doesn't bother me, its more of the redundant word usage, I understand what the writer trying to do. overall, its very promising, stopped at 50, going to let it build some more before continuing to read author, if one thing I can point out, you mentioned HP and the fights seem smooth, but its hard to grasp the idea of one hit kill, when damage is suppose to be fixated, or does it only apply when they are in the dungeon maybe make a side chapter covering this information, like key notes or something thanks
book is filled with a tonne of useless cliche filler content. the book becomes a lot shorter after you skip all the fight scenes caused by some young master wanting to kill MC because the MC was minding his own business. yet to see if I'm gonna continue reading
Illogical and cliché, this novel doesn't bother with developing a world that makes any sense. The characters are caricatures without interesting traits. The description of the fights is childish with absolutely no weight to actions, it is very clear that this author is modelling the fights after video games without ever considering what a real fight is like.
I am "dumb folded" while reading this.. Super "dumb folded" indeed with the events happEning......,,,,,,..... i hope u get an editor.. that will prevent readers from getting dumb folded
Extremely derivative and bland background for the story. I couldn’t finish even the 5th chapter because it constantly tries to copy Solo Leveling or other more original power fantasy leveling novels. Writing quality is not good to say the least. At some points making it feel like a badly translated clone of Solo Leveling, which I could at least tolerate if I liked the premise and thought it could change to be different in an aspect from the standard. However; it does not deviate from the formula and could use an editor and much better introduction that can get the reader to stay for the development of the characters and storyline. As it is, the idea is uninspired and the writing is worse. For context, I immediately dropped any desire to read further after the decision to pick the daggers for the hunter test. Especially after the detail about the shadow making me think that this was just a Solo leveling fanfic.
It's kind of pointless to read. MC is boring and too op. There is not world building, no character design. Its more of battle log than a book.
not sure why it is discontinued, but I really liked this book. the writing could use some improvement but overall I had fun reading this. would love to buy it if it is available in any other location
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Everything's pretty much perfect and well written. If there were more chapters I would be a lot happier but sadly I haven't seen any new chapters for the past week or so maybe even month.
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A good LN that has a pretty decent story it's nothing special it's just I like because it's just a turn your brain off and read kind of story and those are my favorite type and there's a whole lot of decapitations 👍
read up to 58 chapters. I liked how the story starts but later on, the story became bland. mc does nothing but kill, interrogate, find the place, and kill again. he just massacres everyone in his way, but in almost the last 20 chapters that I've read the same repeats. I've lost motivation to read anymore.
The number of angry 80-year-olds is much lower than the number of angry under 30-year-olds. In all theory, a 418-year-old should be a very patient person. Likewise, if you spend 400 years in "hell" and you lean on something that you don't have, and which gradually becomes a mirage, a distant memory (Like a family) you become crazy to a fairly high speed. I always thought that the novel where the goal of the mc was something passive (here "to protect his family") the novel could only be boring. Just watch all the best anime, imagine if naruto didn't want to be Hokage, if Gon (HxH) didn't want to find his father, if Songoku didn't want to fight powerful opponents, if Light didn't want to kill all the criminals... A goal is at least half of a character, if he doesn't have one then it's a half empty character. In short, let's talk more concrete, the main character could be interesting if he had the will to do something. The world is basic and nothing special. The secondary characters are at least as boring as the protagonist. the writing quality is rather good if we forget the fact that the author does not proofread. the rhythm of the chapters is good.
ive read a few chapters, and its got a lot of potential, the only problem is the writing quality imo, the descriptions of every action seems almost bland and monotone, it kinda kills the excitement for me. really great backstory for the character should you go more into detail with it. like I said though, it has a lot of potential to be good.
Hey author, want some free edits? I am bored to death here in my house and I want to help edit some stories, reply here if you're interested.
Alright I love the concept of this and wish that there was some peir editing, but not going any further on that subject. I was just wandering if there is going to be anymore chapters or if it is being posted somewhere else because I would love to continue reading this.
The story had a cliche plot from the beginning but that's generally okay. Good plots are used over and over because people like them. My issue was terrible writing quality and an insensible amount of plot armor. There's far too little world background, and our main character seemingly caught up to people with a 2 year head start in like 4 chapters. Now he's participating in world events he shouldn't be strong enough to touch. Entire guilds. These people should vastly out level him.
Even though it is was repeated plot that was okay but when all that is focused on is the main character killing and taking revenge. Half of the first 50 chapters is all about killing the cliche revenge son to father villain. Its not interesting to only read about that.
The biggest issue with this story is that every enemy he faces happens to have an uncontrollable rage that makes them completely stupid and kill their own allies. Not just one or two people, but almost every enemy with a name has this issue. The story is not bad, but the people are rather poorly written personality wise (the sister is also way too childish and naive. I do not see how old she is, but the author was laying the sweet little sister way too thick). Side note: There is another issue with grammar. There are a ton of small errors, but the story is readable as a whole
Yeah it seems good so far I recommend Filler song again…… Gunter, why did you gunt my fries? I gunted them, and they were mine. What kind of gunt gunts his Gunter's fries, And doesn't even gunt him in the eyes? Gunter, there were tears there. If you gunted them, would you even care? Gunter, do you even love me?
We're off to the good start....... ........... ........ .. ............. More............................. ............ ..................
great story great mc great battles not so great writing quality with lots of wrong words ana gramma but it dose not affect how good the story and fights are
it got to a stage all the fight scenes just got repetitive all you see is swish swish, clank, swisssh,swash. it get tiring fast 😪..........
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This novel is complete plagiarism, and not worth your time. Just read the original version which title "Player Who Returned 10,000 Years Later".
Is there gonna be more chapters.. It is added in my pending list as i think the writer as dropped it. 3 stars as I haven't read it yet. Do let me know.
I would like to the author for increasing my ability to read jumbled words. I can guess what mostly the words are supposed to be in this translation. I can actually follow the story, but at the cost of rereading certain passages. Story is good, but you got it on hard mode to read. I would not recommend the audio version, even though I have not attempted to try to. I bet it sounds horrid 😂😂😂
hey there are a lot of questions I want answered from chapter 1 like •how did he lived 400 years as a human •how did he kill all those demons something like those author San please answer for I am still reading but I like the story keep up the work
My poor braincells, my poor eyes, my poor head, the headache ..................................... Bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla, screw minimum word review
the grammar doesn't bother me, its more of the redundant word usage, I understand what the writer trying to do. overall, its very promising, stopped at 50, going to let it build some more before continuing to read author, if one thing I can point out, you mentioned HP and the fights seem smooth, but its hard to grasp the idea of one hit kill, when damage is suppose to be fixated, or does it only apply when they are in the dungeon maybe make a side chapter covering this information, like key notes or something thanks
book is filled with a tonne of useless cliche filler content. the book becomes a lot shorter after you skip all the fight scenes caused by some young master wanting to kill MC because the MC was minding his own business. yet to see if I'm gonna continue reading
Illogical and cliché, this novel doesn't bother with developing a world that makes any sense. The characters are caricatures without interesting traits. The description of the fights is childish with absolutely no weight to actions, it is very clear that this author is modelling the fights after video games without ever considering what a real fight is like.
I am "dumb folded" while reading this.. Super "dumb folded" indeed with the events happEning......,,,,,,..... i hope u get an editor.. that will prevent readers from getting dumb folded
Extremely derivative and bland background for the story. I couldn’t finish even the 5th chapter because it constantly tries to copy Solo Leveling or other more original power fantasy leveling novels. Writing quality is not good to say the least. At some points making it feel like a badly translated clone of Solo Leveling, which I could at least tolerate if I liked the premise and thought it could change to be different in an aspect from the standard. However; it does not deviate from the formula and could use an editor and much better introduction that can get the reader to stay for the development of the characters and storyline. As it is, the idea is uninspired and the writing is worse. For context, I immediately dropped any desire to read further after the decision to pick the daggers for the hunter test. Especially after the detail about the shadow making me think that this was just a Solo leveling fanfic.
It's kind of pointless to read. MC is boring and too op. There is not world building, no character design. Its more of battle log than a book.
not sure why it is discontinued, but I really liked this book. the writing could use some improvement but overall I had fun reading this. would love to buy it if it is available in any other location
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Everything's pretty much perfect and well written. If there were more chapters I would be a lot happier but sadly I haven't seen any new chapters for the past week or so maybe even month.
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A good LN that has a pretty decent story it's nothing special it's just I like because it's just a turn your brain off and read kind of story and those are my favorite type and there's a whole lot of decapitations 👍
read up to 58 chapters. I liked how the story starts but later on, the story became bland. mc does nothing but kill, interrogate, find the place, and kill again. he just massacres everyone in his way, but in almost the last 20 chapters that I've read the same repeats. I've lost motivation to read anymore.
The number of angry 80-year-olds is much lower than the number of angry under 30-year-olds. In all theory, a 418-year-old should be a very patient person. Likewise, if you spend 400 years in "hell" and you lean on something that you don't have, and which gradually becomes a mirage, a distant memory (Like a family) you become crazy to a fairly high speed. I always thought that the novel where the goal of the mc was something passive (here "to protect his family") the novel could only be boring. Just watch all the best anime, imagine if naruto didn't want to be Hokage, if Gon (HxH) didn't want to find his father, if Songoku didn't want to fight powerful opponents, if Light didn't want to kill all the criminals... A goal is at least half of a character, if he doesn't have one then it's a half empty character. In short, let's talk more concrete, the main character could be interesting if he had the will to do something. The world is basic and nothing special. The secondary characters are at least as boring as the protagonist. the writing quality is rather good if we forget the fact that the author does not proofread. the rhythm of the chapters is good.
ive read a few chapters, and its got a lot of potential, the only problem is the writing quality imo, the descriptions of every action seems almost bland and monotone, it kinda kills the excitement for me. really great backstory for the character should you go more into detail with it. like I said though, it has a lot of potential to be good.
Hey author, want some free edits? I am bored to death here in my house and I want to help edit some stories, reply here if you're interested.
The grammar and conversations are unreadable