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Spanish Review. En lo general es un fic decente de Waifu catalogue con problemas de caracterización y un MC que no puede aceptar sus propias decisiones buscando justificarse y si no has leido ninguno esta más o menos para empezar a leer este tipo de fic. Primero que nada para los que no saben cuales son los poderes del MC o porque el autor no lo pone en un capitulo al inicio es porque esta usando el "Waifu Catalogue" se puede decir que es un CYOA largo, tu trabajo es conseguir o esclavizar waifus con el metodo que elegiste (hay como 6 hasta la ultima actualización que leí), donde los mundos de anime, juegos y libros estan calificados de 1-10 según la dificultad para sobrevivir en esos mundos, despues de eso le dan un presupuesto para gastar en poderes y habilidades, incluso waifus de otras obras y puedes obtener más al vender las waifus que no quieras. RWBY es considerado un mundo de Tier 6 o 7 en el Waifu catalogue, no muy bajo ni muy alto, sin embargo las habilidades y poderes estan hechas para que sobrevivan en mundos de tier 10 como W40k/Marvel 616/DC (especifican cual pero se me olvido)/Supernatural por lo que es muy facil abusar de ellas en RWBY ya que las amenazas más fuertes del mundo no te cazaran y el mayor problema seria juntar waifus para vender hasta alcanzar el dispositivo para ir a otros mundos o la waifu que pueda hacerlo. Esta es una de las razones por las que se puede iniciar en RWBY si planean hacer multicross ya que no tiene que gastar puntos en muchas protecciones conceptuales de otros mundos de tier 7+. El autor queria ser original al hacer que el MC no sea un completo bastardo esclavizando gente a diestra y siniestra pero falla al plantearlo y termina siendo otro fic más con un protagonista que se niega a usar su poder correctamente por dilemas morales que debio plantearse antes de firmar el contrato y no despues. Más adelante se siente hipocrita al vender a ciertos villanos por ser villanos pero quedarse con otro por ser util cuando los primeros eran incluso más utiles lo que llevo al hiatus que tuvo el fanfic en el capitulo 68.
you get thrown in the story without any idea about his power or whats happening , the story was editted and some paragraphs dosent make sense . chapter comments confuse you cause they are all the old version and talking about something not in the chapter the story needs a rewrite or a chapter with the mc powers atleast stopped reading at chapter 11
Its really good keep up the good work please don't drop it like your other fanfic which was really good as well................................
everyone should really give this a try it's great. The quality of writing is far better than what you will see on this site in the fanfic section. And as men of culture it would be such a shame to miss out on this absolute work art. So go ahead give it a try and you can thank me later when you fall in love with the series. It's fine though just a like will do. Stay safe wear a mask and use sanitizer before doing the deed 😉
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You get thrown into the story and nothing gets explained. It seems like its based on some random CYOA, but there is no explanation for that either. The story feels plastic at best and holliw at worst. I hope the author sees this and makes some changes because it seems lazy and sad compared to his other Work.
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Honestly, at first I wanted to put a unit because of broken expectations in chapter 8. But then I thought about it and decided to be more objective in my assessment. The story itself is good. High level text. Not the linearity of the plot, which sometimes suffers from many fanfics. An attempt to reveal the identity of the characters. All this is a plus. There is only one minus, that in Chapter 8 the moral compass of the character is too overturned. Not what I can accept. in fact, one point is reduced precisely because of a sharp change, even 7 chapters are read about one, and from 8 about the other. Thanks for the story anyway.
Its Fanfiction.net quality, thats all I have to say Noja. But I cant, because of the minimum amount of words is still not fulfilled. Noja...
no lo leo y ya tengo altas expectativas, solo espero que no sea de eso dónde el MC está roticimo. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I have high hopes sir [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
ate agora esta otimo minha unica reclamação é o autor não ter dado sequer um resumo da situação dele so precisava de meio capitulo ou pelo menos ele poderia explicar uma coisa aqui ou ali no decorrer dos capitulos. PS: a resenha esta em portugues e assim vai ficar.
Spanish Review. En lo general es un fic decente de Waifu catalogue con problemas de caracterización y un MC que no puede aceptar sus propias decisiones buscando justificarse y si no has leido ninguno esta más o menos para empezar a leer este tipo de fic. Primero que nada para los que no saben cuales son los poderes del MC o porque el autor no lo pone en un capitulo al inicio es porque esta usando el "Waifu Catalogue" se puede decir que es un CYOA largo, tu trabajo es conseguir o esclavizar waifus con el metodo que elegiste (hay como 6 hasta la ultima actualización que leí), donde los mundos de anime, juegos y libros estan calificados de 1-10 según la dificultad para sobrevivir en esos mundos, despues de eso le dan un presupuesto para gastar en poderes y habilidades, incluso waifus de otras obras y puedes obtener más al vender las waifus que no quieras. RWBY es considerado un mundo de Tier 6 o 7 en el Waifu catalogue, no muy bajo ni muy alto, sin embargo las habilidades y poderes estan hechas para que sobrevivan en mundos de tier 10 como W40k/Marvel 616/DC (especifican cual pero se me olvido)/Supernatural por lo que es muy facil abusar de ellas en RWBY ya que las amenazas más fuertes del mundo no te cazaran y el mayor problema seria juntar waifus para vender hasta alcanzar el dispositivo para ir a otros mundos o la waifu que pueda hacerlo. Esta es una de las razones por las que se puede iniciar en RWBY si planean hacer multicross ya que no tiene que gastar puntos en muchas protecciones conceptuales de otros mundos de tier 7+. El autor queria ser original al hacer que el MC no sea un completo bastardo esclavizando gente a diestra y siniestra pero falla al plantearlo y termina siendo otro fic más con un protagonista que se niega a usar su poder correctamente por dilemas morales que debio plantearse antes de firmar el contrato y no despues. Más adelante se siente hipocrita al vender a ciertos villanos por ser villanos pero quedarse con otro por ser util cuando los primeros eran incluso más utiles lo que llevo al hiatus que tuvo el fanfic en el capitulo 68.
you get thrown in the story without any idea about his power or whats happening , the story was editted and some paragraphs dosent make sense . chapter comments confuse you cause they are all the old version and talking about something not in the chapter the story needs a rewrite or a chapter with the mc powers atleast stopped reading at chapter 11
Its really good keep up the good work please don't drop it like your other fanfic which was really good as well................................
everyone should really give this a try it's great. The quality of writing is far better than what you will see on this site in the fanfic section. And as men of culture it would be such a shame to miss out on this absolute work art. So go ahead give it a try and you can thank me later when you fall in love with the series. It's fine though just a like will do. Stay safe wear a mask and use sanitizer before doing the deed 😉
Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.
is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem?
You get thrown into the story and nothing gets explained. It seems like its based on some random CYOA, but there is no explanation for that either. The story feels plastic at best and holliw at worst. I hope the author sees this and makes some changes because it seems lazy and sad compared to his other Work.
Yes yes I yes yup yup yes yup yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes yup yes I yes yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yup yes I yes yup yup yes yes
Honestly, at first I wanted to put a unit because of broken expectations in chapter 8. But then I thought about it and decided to be more objective in my assessment. The story itself is good. High level text. Not the linearity of the plot, which sometimes suffers from many fanfics. An attempt to reveal the identity of the characters. All this is a plus. There is only one minus, that in Chapter 8 the moral compass of the character is too overturned. Not what I can accept. in fact, one point is reduced precisely because of a sharp change, even 7 chapters are read about one, and from 8 about the other. Thanks for the story anyway.
Its Fanfiction.net quality, thats all I have to say Noja. But I cant, because of the minimum amount of words is still not fulfilled. Noja...
no lo leo y ya tengo altas expectativas, solo espero que no sea de eso dónde el MC está roticimo. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I have high hopes sir [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
ate agora esta otimo minha unica reclamação é o autor não ter dado sequer um resumo da situação dele so precisava de meio capitulo ou pelo menos ele poderia explicar uma coisa aqui ou ali no decorrer dos capitulos. PS: a resenha esta em portugues e assim vai ficar.