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ITS VERY GOOD!! EVEN IF HE DOESN'T HAVE CHEATS, BECAUSE HE IS THE CHEAT!!! ITS VERY GOOD WOULD RECOMMEND !! TO READ IT!!! DON'T LISTEN TO THE AUTHOR!! THIS FAN FIC IS GOLD!!!! all though I'm kinda worried from the updates, but i hope this has a stable chapter updates
I came here from the main story, so I know it's gonna be a good read. Apart from some mistakes in spelling here and there, which is natural, you can understand the story. Haru is such a lovable and funny MC. Lots of memes and Jojo references. Soviet Yunyun.
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este fanfic es muy bueno y tiene mucho potencial tal vez mas que tu otro fanfic por favor autor no lo dejes caer
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I changed the story and write another. It's also a Konosuba Fanfic but a different one. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏😅😅😅😂😂😅🔎
SuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuperSuper
Worst Fanfic I ever read, just drop it.🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🙏✌️👌🖖
It's bad. Nit the worst but still bad. I don't like the writing quality, the stupid plot. You lack the creativity in my opinion. You should read more Storys and learn from them.
ITS VERY GOOD!! EVEN IF HE DOESN'T HAVE CHEATS, BECAUSE HE IS THE CHEAT!!! ITS VERY GOOD WOULD RECOMMEND !! TO READ IT!!! DON'T LISTEN TO THE AUTHOR!! THIS FAN FIC IS GOLD!!!! all though I'm kinda worried from the updates, but i hope this has a stable chapter updates
I came here from the main story, so I know it's gonna be a good read. Apart from some mistakes in spelling here and there, which is natural, you can understand the story. Haru is such a lovable and funny MC. Lots of memes and Jojo references. Soviet Yunyun.
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Nothing to say, here's a five star. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
este fanfic es muy bueno y tiene mucho potencial tal vez mas que tu otro fanfic por favor autor no lo dejes caer
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I changed the story and write another. It's also a Konosuba Fanfic but a different one. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏😅😅😅😂😂😅🔎
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Worst Fanfic I ever read, just drop it.🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🙏✌️👌🖖
It's bad. Nit the worst but still bad. I don't like the writing quality, the stupid plot. You lack the creativity in my opinion. You should read more Storys and learn from them.