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i love the way stark and the protagonist get along and their little games. I'm looking forward to her showing herself to him and revealing her past.
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＜(“0”)＞ （☆ω☆*） (*^Д^)ノ。・：＊゜★，。・゜☆ More please 人´∀｀) I love this story, i cant wait to see what comes next. The are only a few grammatical errors, and the comedy and story is good so far
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very cool story details very well-developed characters are interesting and finally everything is very cool. I wish you only good health, happiness and quick hands so that new chapters are often announced with love your reader
Surprised this book truly surprised me. I wish for more chapters. I havent checked the update rate. The Main character is fun and cautious. Maybe a flipside version of Tony stark....... this is just my own thoughts. This is fun to read
Love it and the relationship between stark and the female lead and their game of cat and mouse. Can’t wait for them to finally meet face to face and for him to find out about her past if she decides to tell him. Maybe they can help each other, she gives him a health potion so he has enough time to find a new element and he helps remove the bomb from her brain. Just an idea, but I love how the story has played out so far. keep up the good work and please don’t drop this.
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Hi, I am the author. So I noticed there is a tradition to give oneself a 5 star rating. I am taking up this tradition and give myself 5 star! Because I think if I don't believe in myself, why should anyone else? Nevertheless please vote for my novel. I love constructive criticism but please refrain from being mean. Thank you for reading my novel. I am very grateful to all my readers!
I really enjoy your story and I would really like if you would continue this story. I love the writing and how you put it all together to make it different then others along with the relationship aspect but I would really like if you continued as you haven't posted in a long time.
i love the way stark and the protagonist get along and their little games. I'm looking forward to her showing herself to him and revealing her past.
Reveal Spoiler ＜(“0”)＞ （☆ω☆*） (*^Д^)ノ。・：＊゜★，。・゜☆ More please 人´∀｀) I love this story, i cant wait to see what comes next. The are only a few grammatical errors, and the comedy and story is good so far
Looks good.Great. Update more please.Looks good.Great. Update more please.Looks good.Great. Update more please.Looks good.Great. Update more please.Looks good.Great. Update more please.Looks good.Great. Update more please.
very cool story details very well-developed characters are interesting and finally everything is very cool. I wish you only good health, happiness and quick hands so that new chapters are often announced with love your reader
Surprised this book truly surprised me. I wish for more chapters. I havent checked the update rate. The Main character is fun and cautious. Maybe a flipside version of Tony stark....... this is just my own thoughts. This is fun to read
Love it and the relationship between stark and the female lead and their game of cat and mouse. Can’t wait for them to finally meet face to face and for him to find out about her past if she decides to tell him. Maybe they can help each other, she gives him a health potion so he has enough time to find a new element and he helps remove the bomb from her brain. Just an idea, but I love how the story has played out so far. keep up the good work and please don’t drop this.
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Reveal Spoiler Hi, I am the author. So I noticed there is a tradition to give oneself a 5 star rating. I am taking up this tradition and give myself 5 star! Because I think if I don't believe in myself, why should anyone else? Nevertheless please vote for my novel. I love constructive criticism but please refrain from being mean. Thank you for reading my novel. I am very grateful to all my readers!
I really enjoy your story and I would really like if you would continue this story. I love the writing and how you put it all together to make it different then others along with the relationship aspect but I would really like if you continued as you haven't posted in a long time.