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Write a reviewIts good that you put the MC joins a peerage tag cause i was about to read it. You saved me. Also, he's a demigod, how is he in a peerage. Aren't gods/buddhas or dragon gods or people with godly blood in them unable to join peerages?? Your synopsis and tags need work. Peace out...
I really did like the concept to this fan fic and character development but it’s seems he dropped and that was kinda sad cause I really liked it
Too many plot holes in this story They were childhood friend since 11?? Rias and her peerage still in the underworld at that time And what do you mean by rias can't force mc to do something that he didn't want to do? Of course she can, even though mc is demigod he still her peerage. King can order anything. If he didn't do it, he will become stray you moron
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If you don’t like reading about mc joining Rias peerage despite being a demigod then drop now, press that back button on your screen and leave . Author confirmed it himself by the way. Don’t see anything interesting happening. Author himself also said it’s just the typical revenge story. Do I need to say more ?
As a die hard High school DXD fan your story has too many issues. One Poseidon is not dead, he's in the contaiment field fighting Trihexa (666 beast). Two If he is 18 and his father died when he was 3, it puts him in Kuoh academy 13 yrs after Kiba and Isse have graduated and Isse is married to Rias, Akeno, Asia, Shirone(koneko), XEnovia, Irina, Roesvissa, Ravel, Kuroka........ and all have kids. Do i need to continue. Read the series.
"ravel" phoenix and grayfia = harem. ......................................................................................................
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the sad thing is that history was abandoned. ....................................................................................................................................
Its good that you put the MC joins a peerage tag cause i was about to read it. You saved me. Also, he's a demigod, how is he in a peerage. Aren't gods/buddhas or dragon gods or people with godly blood in them unable to join peerages?? Your synopsis and tags need work. Peace out...
I really did like the concept to this fan fic and character development but it’s seems he dropped and that was kinda sad cause I really liked it
Too many plot holes in this story They were childhood friend since 11?? Rias and her peerage still in the underworld at that time And what do you mean by rias can't force mc to do something that he didn't want to do? Of course she can, even though mc is demigod he still her peerage. King can order anything. If he didn't do it, he will become stray you moron
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Writing Quality: 4/5 Stability of Updates: 3/5 Story Development:2/5 Character Design:3/5 World Background:3/5 ----------------------------------------------------------------------------
If you don’t like reading about mc joining Rias peerage despite being a demigod then drop now, press that back button on your screen and leave . Author confirmed it himself by the way. Don’t see anything interesting happening. Author himself also said it’s just the typical revenge story. Do I need to say more ?
As a die hard High school DXD fan your story has too many issues. One Poseidon is not dead, he's in the contaiment field fighting Trihexa (666 beast). Two If he is 18 and his father died when he was 3, it puts him in Kuoh academy 13 yrs after Kiba and Isse have graduated and Isse is married to Rias, Akeno, Asia, Shirone(koneko), XEnovia, Irina, Roesvissa, Ravel, Kuroka........ and all have kids. Do i need to continue. Read the series.
"ravel" phoenix and grayfia = harem. ......................................................................................................
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the sad thing is that history was abandoned. ....................................................................................................................................