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Im suprised theres not more fans or votes. It had amazing quality it pulls me into investing in the characters. βββ ββ βββ βββββ¦β¦β³ββ βββ βββ«βββββ©β« βββ βββ©ββ»ββ©ββ β βββ ββββ£ββ¦β³β ββββ£ββββ β β β βββββ»ββ
Oh I love Silva and how the plot progresses, it took a bit of a long time to get to Beacon which did annoy me quite a bit but it was still really fun. The upload speeds a bit slow but itβs fine since itβs kind of like a background series for me, when it appears I get happy and remember all the events and then read it forget about it until it appears again which seems to work for me here.
great story so far for me but my only problem is that some times there are skips in the story,small skips,like chapter 10 he boards the train and fights the robot then he suddenly has a robot's sword arm it's just confusing sometimes but other then that its a great story so far
I'm enjoying this story, the world feels more fleshed out then canon rwby. The sense of adventure is good, relationships despite moving fast are entertaining. Im hoping the harem is kept under 10 people though. I would like the story to get to canon but I can live with the author taking their time. This review is based on the 48 chapters I've read. keep up the great work author im definitely a fan.
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the story plot is good but the character relationships development aren't executed well enough it feels too forced and fast I suggest taking it slow, maybe even make it seem like the people see the mc as being weird for being too friendly too fast cause we know the mc is a reincarnated person and he will know who he wants to get close to although I like the fights and the plot but the relationships just put me off this review is made as only after reading up to chapter 10 so I don't know if there is an improvement for later chapters
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Geat fanfic this is probably my favorite of the ones I have read............................................................................
Its really not bad at first but then its draggs longer and longer there what now 68 chaps??? and still no start of the Canon so when you want to read it because you see Hey its a RWBY Fan-Fic forgett it. Otherweiss as i sad not bad but when you here to read about RWBY Academy and stuff dont bother wait till the canon starts at dont now chap 200 ??? maybe ???
A delightful read. Lots of world and character development that canon didn't have, a few OC's that don't take away from the source material and a slow build up that not enough fan-fics utilize to build anticipation :)
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Its pretty good ............................................................................................................................................
Before the review I just want to say that I didn't watch or read the original I only know the basics of it cuz I looked it up on wiki so my review will be from perspective of someone who knows almost nothing about series and it's original story. So about the story of your work, I just fell in love with it, it's interesting and engaging although I don't see any bigger goal of our MC as he just kinda wonders here and there exploring the world and well I really like the journey part of the story with him being hunted down and when he finally settled down a bit it makes sense with the story being as enjoyable as the travel part. Another thing is our MC, he is a Faunus so discrimination is a must and I think you really nailed this part down, the racism is there and we feel it through the whole time but our MC is strong and mature enough to just not give a f*ck also the political background with White Fang and all is really well done but I think it was already in original but well at least you didn't f*ck it up by changing it too much and making it more complicated than necessary. But coming but to our MC or his character I just like him he is human(Faunus) and he makes mistakes he has his regrets and sorrows but the best thing is that throughout the story he grows and his character changes in justifiable way and we can understand why he thinks like that. Other characters shown in there are also good and they to feel human and your interactions are well done dialogues feels natural and not forced. The world around is interesting and full of things to explore the places you go to just seem real enough to imagine them well. Ps. Harem is good doesn't feels forced, and I really didn't expect Pyrrha to seriously do that good job with that. And SERIOUSLY BRING THE F*CKING LEMOS WE'VE WAITED LONG ENOUGH!!!! I like that he doesn't break promises but but just...I'm really torn apart by your decisions...and I don't even remember names of those two just let them meet or what idk...
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i love lolis................................................................................................................................
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it's not that good grammar 6/10 story 6/10 I just don't see the appeal in it. not the worst fan fic I've read but could be better. I love rwby
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great fanfic........................................................................................................................................................................................................... ............. . .....
I'm enjoying that the mc is taking time to explore the world and build up some lore that will later serve as a foundation for who the mc is and his motivations once we get to canon
Awesome novel, you won't regret reading it guaranteed, the only complaint is it doesn't have enough chapters to validate the cannon taking too long to start. Other than that it is an awesome book.
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Im suprised theres not more fans or votes. It had amazing quality it pulls me into investing in the characters. βββ ββ βββ βββββ¦β¦β³ββ βββ βββ«βββββ©β« βββ βββ©ββ»ββ©ββ β βββ ββββ£ββ¦β³β ββββ£ββββ β β β βββββ»ββ
Oh I love Silva and how the plot progresses, it took a bit of a long time to get to Beacon which did annoy me quite a bit but it was still really fun. The upload speeds a bit slow but itβs fine since itβs kind of like a background series for me, when it appears I get happy and remember all the events and then read it forget about it until it appears again which seems to work for me here.
great story so far for me but my only problem is that some times there are skips in the story,small skips,like chapter 10 he boards the train and fights the robot then he suddenly has a robot's sword arm it's just confusing sometimes but other then that its a great story so far
I'm enjoying this story, the world feels more fleshed out then canon rwby. The sense of adventure is good, relationships despite moving fast are entertaining. Im hoping the harem is kept under 10 people though. I would like the story to get to canon but I can live with the author taking their time. This review is based on the 48 chapters I've read. keep up the great work author im definitely a fan.
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the story plot is good but the character relationships development aren't executed well enough it feels too forced and fast I suggest taking it slow, maybe even make it seem like the people see the mc as being weird for being too friendly too fast cause we know the mc is a reincarnated person and he will know who he wants to get close to although I like the fights and the plot but the relationships just put me off this review is made as only after reading up to chapter 10 so I don't know if there is an improvement for later chapters
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Reveal Spoiler Geat fanfic this is probably my favorite of the ones I have read............................................................................
Its really not bad at first but then its draggs longer and longer there what now 68 chaps??? and still no start of the Canon so when you want to read it because you see Hey its a RWBY Fan-Fic forgett it. Otherweiss as i sad not bad but when you here to read about RWBY Academy and stuff dont bother wait till the canon starts at dont now chap 200 ??? maybe ???
A delightful read. Lots of world and character development that canon didn't have, a few OC's that don't take away from the source material and a slow build up that not enough fan-fics utilize to build anticipation :)
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Its pretty good ............................................................................................................................................
Before the review I just want to say that I didn't watch or read the original I only know the basics of it cuz I looked it up on wiki so my review will be from perspective of someone who knows almost nothing about series and it's original story. So about the story of your work, I just fell in love with it, it's interesting and engaging although I don't see any bigger goal of our MC as he just kinda wonders here and there exploring the world and well I really like the journey part of the story with him being hunted down and when he finally settled down a bit it makes sense with the story being as enjoyable as the travel part. Another thing is our MC, he is a Faunus so discrimination is a must and I think you really nailed this part down, the racism is there and we feel it through the whole time but our MC is strong and mature enough to just not give a f*ck also the political background with White Fang and all is really well done but I think it was already in original but well at least you didn't f*ck it up by changing it too much and making it more complicated than necessary. But coming but to our MC or his character I just like him he is human(Faunus) and he makes mistakes he has his regrets and sorrows but the best thing is that throughout the story he grows and his character changes in justifiable way and we can understand why he thinks like that. Other characters shown in there are also good and they to feel human and your interactions are well done dialogues feels natural and not forced. The world around is interesting and full of things to explore the places you go to just seem real enough to imagine them well. Ps. Harem is good doesn't feels forced, and I really didn't expect Pyrrha to seriously do that good job with that. And SERIOUSLY BRING THE F*CKING LEMOS WE'VE WAITED LONG ENOUGH!!!! I like that he doesn't break promises but but just...I'm really torn apart by your decisions...and I don't even remember names of those two just let them meet or what idk...
is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem?
i love lolis................................................................................................................................
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it's not that good grammar 6/10 story 6/10 I just don't see the appeal in it. not the worst fan fic I've read but could be better. I love rwby
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Very good thanks for writing...................................................................................................................
great fanfic........................................................................................................................................................................................................... ............. . .....
I'm enjoying that the mc is taking time to explore the world and build up some lore that will later serve as a foundation for who the mc is and his motivations once we get to canon
Awesome novel, you won't regret reading it guaranteed, the only complaint is it doesn't have enough chapters to validate the cannon taking too long to start. Other than that it is an awesome book.
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