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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact keraringdom@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
I feel like this was a mad rush. The MC just knows he is reincarnated. How? He has no reaction at all to his death. His reaction to waking in a new world is to comment on the cieling. Everything just felt too fast and too poorly put together. The author seems to have a big plan for his world and setting but is in too much of a rush to get there. If I could make a recommendation, pay more attention to pacing and characters. Introduce people, who they are, why they are doing what they are doing, and so on.
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact keraringdom@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
I feel like this was a mad rush. The MC just knows he is reincarnated. How? He has no reaction at all to his death. His reaction to waking in a new world is to comment on the cieling. Everything just felt too fast and too poorly put together. The author seems to have a big plan for his world and setting but is in too much of a rush to get there. If I could make a recommendation, pay more attention to pacing and characters. Introduce people, who they are, why they are doing what they are doing, and so on.
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?