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Pj77
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fast paced but well developed. do not read if you're sensitive. hilarious and satisfactory while not leaving you hanging through extrapolated chapters. some spelling and Grammer errors but so well written that you simply ignore them.

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wynema01

I cannot finish reading this book, it is just too vulgar. There are so many satisfying ways to get revenge, but this author loves sexually harassing the characters. I am out of here!

2yr
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Shaiza_Apple

this novel is really funny🀣😝🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣 🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣

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kattorney

this is a hidden gem. the pacing is good. so is the storyline. i am hoping that we can get more chapters. mass release please. thanks author-nim in advance.

3yr
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Jovi_Line

This story is so hilarious it will really give you a good laugh πŸ€£πŸ˜† The fl is so shameless hahaha. Even the emperor us so funny especially when he forget about people (who they are, what they are doing there) Hahaha. It's like he's an airhead πŸ˜… Good job author πŸ‘

3yr
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Ikemen_Lover

I am hooked on this story. The female lead is very funny always talking about her meat buns. πŸ˜‚ I hate her family which all treat her horribly but at least the male lead seems to care a lot about her. I can't wait to read more.

3yr
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venice_

i had a good time reading this story. it's kind of unique. the romance between the fl and ml is not as dramatic as the romance in other story it's kinda fast paced. all in all, i enjoy it. . WARNING: this story has a lot of dark humor (including rape disguised as joke). if u, the one who's reading this, is conservative then this story is not for you.

3yr
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Krazy
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I love this bOok. It made me pull 2 All Nighters to read this book. I like how she got back at people who pick on her. She learn to forgive and love her man.

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Knight_Fearless

the most amazing story ive read in webnovel. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† fl is shameless and excellent at swindling 🀭🀭🀭🀭🀭🀭🀭🀭🀭🀭🀭🀭🀭🀭🀭🀭🀭😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏

3yr
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Eislek_Danish

I love this story and i was dying the entire time i read it. Im sad that the fan base wasnt there, and that i didnt know about it before. I enjoy basically all of invayne's stories. Hopefully a time will come when you continue this story. OR! If you publish it into an actual book!! id buy it!!

3yr
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saly_rosha

iliked the fl but is just mooving to fast😏😏😏 and language definetly shocked me🀭🀭🀭 but its fun read and made me laugh cant wait for the revenge part🀩

3yr
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Readingaddict

Really loved the wHole novel and kr was teally funny aswell. Its not extra long so it makes it easier tl handle as a whole. Has a lot of explicit content but overall Its ok.

3yr
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nicolericky

this book was so good that I had a very hard time going to bed because it was so interesting to read about thus young woman. she us strong willed that she over came the odds

3yr
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Duckfero

Overall, it's a good story but there are also many problem (which also happen in the author's others novel). The romance happen way too fast!! I would like to see a FL rising to greatness with her own abilities (she has the abbility btw), but everything is given to her on a silver plate by the ML... Other than that, the comedy is good, the characters are funny, and the plot is ok. This author has talent, but pleaseee, make a novel with late romance!!! And a real independant FL!!

3yr
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nyariee

well for someone like me the language is a bit vulgar but damn this is the funniest novel l have ever read if u want to have a good laughter this novel is for u, author u are great I almost died of laughter πŸ˜‚ l would spend minutes crying and rolling on the floor to the extent that my family thought l was crazy thumps up it deserves a five star rating for making my day

4yr
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nicolericky

this book it's so funny amazing it the point I'm laughing so hard that I almost see myself from laughing. almost every chapter is funny and also has a serious side too

4yr
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nicolericky

this book is funny Charming cute and just really funny reborn book so far I really love this book I'm not completely done it's just this one is probably one of the best I've read

4yr
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xavkit63

This story needs to be read! Straight up; like stop, do not pass Go and do not collect $200... Sit down and take some time to read. This story is such a wonderful take on the usual cultuvatuon-transmigration-face slapping novels out there. It’s so funny, quIrky, and charming that I could not stop laughing through most of It at our wounderful female lead and her antics. This novel needs more traction and more views, and hopefully one day it can continue again, because our dear FL has a lot more to story to tell.

4yr
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Chang_mie

πŸ§‘πŸ’˜πŸ€πŸ’žβ™₯️πŸ₯°πŸ’•πŸ§‘πŸ’•πŸ–€πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ€Žβ€οΈπŸ’“πŸ’πŸ’–πŸ˜πŸ’–πŸ˜πŸ§‘πŸ€πŸ₯°πŸ€πŸ’žπŸ˜˜πŸ₯°πŸ’ŒπŸ–€πŸ’ŒπŸ’žβ™₯οΈβ£οΈπŸ’˜πŸ’•πŸ’πŸ₯°πŸ’πŸ§‘πŸ’πŸ§‘πŸ’™πŸ’–πŸ’™πŸ§‘πŸ’ŒπŸ₯°πŸ’“πŸ’žπŸ˜β£οΈπŸ’˜πŸ§‘β€οΈπŸ§‘πŸ’›πŸ§‘πŸ’›πŸ’–πŸ’ŒπŸ§‘πŸ’“πŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’˜β£οΈπŸ’˜πŸ₯°πŸ˜˜πŸ§‘πŸ˜˜πŸ’–πŸ’™πŸ–€πŸ’™πŸ’“πŸ’˜πŸ₯°

4yr
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Mimky
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This novel is by far one of my favourites. The characters are very shameless πŸ˜† and funny. This novel is always able to make me laugh and I have really enjoyed this. although the ending was a bit rushed, I didn't care as it was very fitting. I would definitely recommend, and would guarantee that it would lift your mood by how shameless they are. πŸ˜πŸ˜„ πŸ’›β€πŸ’›β€πŸ’›β€

4yr
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lucy_Heartfilia

[img=update][img=update][img=update] πŸ€—πŸ˜Šβ˜Ί [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins] 😘😚πŸ₯° [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp] [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp] πŸ’‹πŸ’žπŸ’•

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Katarina_Halen

πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Bree_De_Ocampo

A little unrealistic, yes, but hilarious. I wish people held on longer so the storyline wasn’t jam packed at the end and we got to explore more of the world. Super OP FL. Wish there had been more about her past life. Loved the naughty bits. Overall I enjoyed it.

4yr
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ipohtown

This novel is really amusing. I enjoy it and the FL is very funny. I was having really good time ready it. I’m not done yet, will leave review again when I did. 😍

4yr
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JungleJerri

This story was great. I highly recommend it. It’s probably the funniest book I’ve ever read. Every chapter will have your sides splitting from laughter.

4yr
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JayJ23
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I have.mixed view about this one. On one hand, it's funny and pretty nice story. But I felt that it's lacking in some area, for example, we really don't get much information about the family background. There is also quite a lot of obscene scenes in this book. Nevertheless, it's funny and I'm still reading it

4yr
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Min_Taehyung

Love it!!!❀️ I love the characters and their shameless attitude and how Yu’er and her FiancΓ© get along. Love the story development can’t wait to see how the story will finish and wait to see how will Yu’er get to punish her father. Like I really can’t wait to see how shameless she gets.I really love πŸ’• Yu’er character and if I was apart of this story then Feng Jie will have to Compete with me for Yu’er love, but we all know that Yu’er is for Feng Jie and I really love their cute/embarrassing moments. Love good work and can’t wait to see what other stories you’ll have after this.❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️

4yr
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Bethreevesx

One of the funniest stories I’ve read in a long whileπŸ˜‚ absolutely love the FL and ML they were written so well including ML family ❀️❀️ whole story is full of the funniest thingsπŸ˜‚β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ

4yr
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Sweet_Clementine

Nice plot even though I feel its fast development but I like it. I hope the author can at least update us once a day chapter πŸ₯°πŸ˜­

4yr
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MaskedWitch16

I like it because it's not like the other webnovels, it's not the same plot as always, this is a funny story without all the roundabout ways of getting revenge.

4yr
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Pj77
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fast paced but well developed. do not read if you're sensitive. hilarious and satisfactory while not leaving you hanging through extrapolated chapters. some spelling and Grammer errors but so well written that you simply ignore them.

1yr
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wynema01

I cannot finish reading this book, it is just too vulgar. There are so many satisfying ways to get revenge, but this author loves sexually harassing the characters. I am out of here!

2yr
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Shaiza_Apple

this novel is really funny🀣😝🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣 🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣

3yr
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kattorney

this is a hidden gem. the pacing is good. so is the storyline. i am hoping that we can get more chapters. mass release please. thanks author-nim in advance.

3yr
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Jovi_Line

This story is so hilarious it will really give you a good laugh πŸ€£πŸ˜† The fl is so shameless hahaha. Even the emperor us so funny especially when he forget about people (who they are, what they are doing there) Hahaha. It's like he's an airhead πŸ˜… Good job author πŸ‘

3yr
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Ikemen_Lover

I am hooked on this story. The female lead is very funny always talking about her meat buns. πŸ˜‚ I hate her family which all treat her horribly but at least the male lead seems to care a lot about her. I can't wait to read more.

3yr
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venice_

i had a good time reading this story. it's kind of unique. the romance between the fl and ml is not as dramatic as the romance in other story it's kinda fast paced. all in all, i enjoy it. . WARNING: this story has a lot of dark humor (including rape disguised as joke). if u, the one who's reading this, is conservative then this story is not for you.

3yr
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Krazy
LV 15 Badge

I love this bOok. It made me pull 2 All Nighters to read this book. I like how she got back at people who pick on her. She learn to forgive and love her man.

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Knight_Fearless

the most amazing story ive read in webnovel. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† fl is shameless and excellent at swindling 🀭🀭🀭🀭🀭🀭🀭🀭🀭🀭🀭🀭🀭🀭🀭🀭🀭😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏

3yr
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Eislek_Danish

I love this story and i was dying the entire time i read it. Im sad that the fan base wasnt there, and that i didnt know about it before. I enjoy basically all of invayne's stories. Hopefully a time will come when you continue this story. OR! If you publish it into an actual book!! id buy it!!

3yr
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saly_rosha

iliked the fl but is just mooving to fast😏😏😏 and language definetly shocked me🀭🀭🀭 but its fun read and made me laugh cant wait for the revenge part🀩

3yr
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Readingaddict

Really loved the wHole novel and kr was teally funny aswell. Its not extra long so it makes it easier tl handle as a whole. Has a lot of explicit content but overall Its ok.

3yr
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nicolericky

this book was so good that I had a very hard time going to bed because it was so interesting to read about thus young woman. she us strong willed that she over came the odds

3yr
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Duckfero

Overall, it's a good story but there are also many problem (which also happen in the author's others novel). The romance happen way too fast!! I would like to see a FL rising to greatness with her own abilities (she has the abbility btw), but everything is given to her on a silver plate by the ML... Other than that, the comedy is good, the characters are funny, and the plot is ok. This author has talent, but pleaseee, make a novel with late romance!!! And a real independant FL!!

3yr
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nyariee

well for someone like me the language is a bit vulgar but damn this is the funniest novel l have ever read if u want to have a good laughter this novel is for u, author u are great I almost died of laughter πŸ˜‚ l would spend minutes crying and rolling on the floor to the extent that my family thought l was crazy thumps up it deserves a five star rating for making my day

4yr
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nicolericky

this book it's so funny amazing it the point I'm laughing so hard that I almost see myself from laughing. almost every chapter is funny and also has a serious side too

4yr
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nicolericky

this book is funny Charming cute and just really funny reborn book so far I really love this book I'm not completely done it's just this one is probably one of the best I've read

4yr
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xavkit63

This story needs to be read! Straight up; like stop, do not pass Go and do not collect $200... Sit down and take some time to read. This story is such a wonderful take on the usual cultuvatuon-transmigration-face slapping novels out there. It’s so funny, quIrky, and charming that I could not stop laughing through most of It at our wounderful female lead and her antics. This novel needs more traction and more views, and hopefully one day it can continue again, because our dear FL has a lot more to story to tell.

4yr
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Chang_mie

πŸ§‘πŸ’˜πŸ€πŸ’žβ™₯️πŸ₯°πŸ’•πŸ§‘πŸ’•πŸ–€πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ€Žβ€οΈπŸ’“πŸ’πŸ’–πŸ˜πŸ’–πŸ˜πŸ§‘πŸ€πŸ₯°πŸ€πŸ’žπŸ˜˜πŸ₯°πŸ’ŒπŸ–€πŸ’ŒπŸ’žβ™₯οΈβ£οΈπŸ’˜πŸ’•πŸ’πŸ₯°πŸ’πŸ§‘πŸ’πŸ§‘πŸ’™πŸ’–πŸ’™πŸ§‘πŸ’ŒπŸ₯°πŸ’“πŸ’žπŸ˜β£οΈπŸ’˜πŸ§‘β€οΈπŸ§‘πŸ’›πŸ§‘πŸ’›πŸ’–πŸ’ŒπŸ§‘πŸ’“πŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’˜β£οΈπŸ’˜πŸ₯°πŸ˜˜πŸ§‘πŸ˜˜πŸ’–πŸ’™πŸ–€πŸ’™πŸ’“πŸ’˜πŸ₯°

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Mimky
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This novel is by far one of my favourites. The characters are very shameless πŸ˜† and funny. This novel is always able to make me laugh and I have really enjoyed this. although the ending was a bit rushed, I didn't care as it was very fitting. I would definitely recommend, and would guarantee that it would lift your mood by how shameless they are. πŸ˜πŸ˜„ πŸ’›β€πŸ’›β€πŸ’›β€

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lucy_Heartfilia

[img=update][img=update][img=update] πŸ€—πŸ˜Šβ˜Ί [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins] 😘😚πŸ₯° [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp] [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp] πŸ’‹πŸ’žπŸ’•

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Katarina_Halen

πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Bree_De_Ocampo

A little unrealistic, yes, but hilarious. I wish people held on longer so the storyline wasn’t jam packed at the end and we got to explore more of the world. Super OP FL. Wish there had been more about her past life. Loved the naughty bits. Overall I enjoyed it.

4yr
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ipohtown

This novel is really amusing. I enjoy it and the FL is very funny. I was having really good time ready it. I’m not done yet, will leave review again when I did. 😍

4yr
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JungleJerri

This story was great. I highly recommend it. It’s probably the funniest book I’ve ever read. Every chapter will have your sides splitting from laughter.

4yr
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JayJ23
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I have.mixed view about this one. On one hand, it's funny and pretty nice story. But I felt that it's lacking in some area, for example, we really don't get much information about the family background. There is also quite a lot of obscene scenes in this book. Nevertheless, it's funny and I'm still reading it

4yr
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Min_Taehyung

Love it!!!❀️ I love the characters and their shameless attitude and how Yu’er and her FiancΓ© get along. Love the story development can’t wait to see how the story will finish and wait to see how will Yu’er get to punish her father. Like I really can’t wait to see how shameless she gets.I really love πŸ’• Yu’er character and if I was apart of this story then Feng Jie will have to Compete with me for Yu’er love, but we all know that Yu’er is for Feng Jie and I really love their cute/embarrassing moments. Love good work and can’t wait to see what other stories you’ll have after this.❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️

4yr
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Bethreevesx

One of the funniest stories I’ve read in a long whileπŸ˜‚ absolutely love the FL and ML they were written so well including ML family ❀️❀️ whole story is full of the funniest thingsπŸ˜‚β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ

4yr
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Sweet_Clementine

Nice plot even though I feel its fast development but I like it. I hope the author can at least update us once a day chapter πŸ₯°πŸ˜­

4yr
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MaskedWitch16

I like it because it's not like the other webnovels, it's not the same plot as always, this is a funny story without all the roundabout ways of getting revenge.

4yr
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