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I've read this story multiple times and I love how you truly expanded on Midoriya as a teenage boy. I don't think I can criticize this story as it was written with no grammar errors and was a lovely delight!
This was good. The best part was that the story was completed. That is rare these days.
I loved this story, I have been searching for a good what if for a while and I found a amazing one. The development of Izuku’s power is steady and I love all of the drama, I just wish it had lasted a little longer. A top tier fanfic and I hope to see more like this from you thanks for the story.
it's one of the good fics of mha. tho i got bored at the end. spoiler.... mc gets cucked. tho he gets over it quickly. but it is a warning for those who hate ntr.
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amazing fic. please do give it a try if u find it buried in all of these stupid top ranked fics
Nice little story to read if you want something new for a short while, it's not too long and can be read fast but that's what makes it nice for me.
Me encantó, un historia genial, gracias por trabajar en ella. 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻 Aunque le faltó más desarrollo me gustó mucho.
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this is one of the best mha fanfics I have ever read. really enjoyed it and I hope that you have a nice day! ...............................
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I have to say this is probably one of the top 3 fanfictions on this site/app. be it spelling, grammar, character development, the story, even the background. all well above average for this site/app. it pains me to know that the next book I read is going to feel like listening to nails on a chalkboard in comparison. I wish this book was the standard. I do not regret the time spent reading this book.
I just started the story but i just wanna ask if this turns into a harem bcs if it does I'm just gonna drop this
It is very good fic, revolving around MC i.e. Izuku with his original quirk (power of all three haki in one piece) and One for All quirk which he got from All Might. My only problem is that why did reason for kendo cheating was not specified and why MC didn't ask for why and just broke up, he should've asked her so that he can, if learn form it, correct it in future relationship.
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i have nothing to say except ITS AMAZING FANFIC!!!!! .......................................................................................
I wanted to keep it simple with just a 'loved it', but I gotta write 140 words so here we are. The development good, I felt the itsuka thing was a bit forced but I get why you did it.
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Thanks for the history, I love the concept of haki and when someone else uses them I need to read that history, and your use of the haki is great. You will use the concepts of advance haki? I think that it could be amazing.
i like this hahaha but the cheating lolololol . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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If you love oc izuku, if you love a powerful izuku, if you wanna read something unique... Read this story! It's quite brilliant, the writing quality is among the better ones in Webnovel and you would be hard pressed to find too many better MHA fics than this one!
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Very enjoyable story. The combination between haki and one for all turned out quiet good. Looking forward to you other fanfictions. I have already read the one about got and hp even if they are not at the same level at this one still a good read. All in all thank you for the hard work ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
..........….......................................................................................................................... get well soon Author
Очень интересно. Развитие способностей и сами способности мне больше всего интересны . Ооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооо
I've read this story multiple times and I love how you truly expanded on Midoriya as a teenage boy. I don't think I can criticize this story as it was written with no grammar errors and was a lovely delight!
This was good. The best part was that the story was completed. That is rare these days.
I loved this story, I have been searching for a good what if for a while and I found a amazing one. The development of Izuku’s power is steady and I love all of the drama, I just wish it had lasted a little longer. A top tier fanfic and I hope to see more like this from you thanks for the story.
it's one of the good fics of mha. tho i got bored at the end. spoiler.... mc gets cucked. tho he gets over it quickly. but it is a warning for those who hate ntr.
Reveal Spoiler .................. NOT Bad .................. .................. .................. .................. .................. .................. ..................
amazing fic. please do give it a try if u find it buried in all of these stupid top ranked fics
Nice little story to read if you want something new for a short while, it's not too long and can be read fast but that's what makes it nice for me.
Me encantó, un historia genial, gracias por trabajar en ella. 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻 Aunque le faltó más desarrollo me gustó mucho.
Reveal Spoiler this is one of the best mha fanfics I have ever read. really enjoyed it and I hope that you have a nice day! ...............................
suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
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I have to say this is probably one of the top 3 fanfictions on this site/app. be it spelling, grammar, character development, the story, even the background. all well above average for this site/app. it pains me to know that the next book I read is going to feel like listening to nails on a chalkboard in comparison. I wish this book was the standard. I do not regret the time spent reading this book.
I just started the story but i just wanna ask if this turns into a harem bcs if it does I'm just gonna drop this
It is very good fic, revolving around MC i.e. Izuku with his original quirk (power of all three haki in one piece) and One for All quirk which he got from All Might. My only problem is that why did reason for kendo cheating was not specified and why MC didn't ask for why and just broke up, he should've asked her so that he can, if learn form it, correct it in future relationship.
Reveal Spoiler i have nothing to say except ITS AMAZING FANFIC!!!!! .......................................................................................
I wanted to keep it simple with just a 'loved it', but I gotta write 140 words so here we are. The development good, I felt the itsuka thing was a bit forced but I get why you did it.
................................................................................................................................................
Thanks for the history, I love the concept of haki and when someone else uses them I need to read that history, and your use of the haki is great. You will use the concepts of advance haki? I think that it could be amazing.
i like this hahaha but the cheating lolololol . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Reveal Spoiler If you love oc izuku, if you love a powerful izuku, if you wanna read something unique... Read this story! It's quite brilliant, the writing quality is among the better ones in Webnovel and you would be hard pressed to find too many better MHA fics than this one!
Reveal Spoiler Very enjoyable story. The combination between haki and one for all turned out quiet good. Looking forward to you other fanfictions. I have already read the one about got and hp even if they are not at the same level at this one still a good read. All in all thank you for the hard work ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
..........….......................................................................................................................... get well soon Author
Очень интересно. Развитие способностей и сами способности мне больше всего интересны . Ооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооо
was a fun ff to read,not perfect but pretty good