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The System (Harry Potter)

Author: whitefordr21

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Chapter 1: This is my first time writing a story any tips would be appreciated don't forget to tell me if you want anything added

"BOY!!! get in here NOW" Vernon Dursley roared from the kitchen

"C... coming uncle" he hastily replied silently sneering rushing from within his cupboard his hands shaking as he tried to control his ever-increasing rage slowly bubbling beneath the surface waiting to be released

[SCANNING... SCANNING... POTENTIAL HOST FOUND!] a monotone voice sounded in Harrys head

"W... what!" Harry almost shouted

"WHAT WAS THAT BOY!!" Vernon shouted spit flying from his purpling face

*maybe uncle Vernon really has knocked some screws loose after all, just you wait I'll get you back he silently promised*

"N... nothing uncle Vernon " Harry hastily spoke

"Chores boy! And none of your freakishness or back in the cupboard with no food" Vernon threatened

"But I can't do all these I have school!" Harry said panicking

Harry didn't have time to react before his vision blurred as his head collided with the door of his cupboard, the wood splintering from the force, getting to his knees he was hit with a fist that broke his nose, his glasses sliding across the floor only to be destroyed under Vernon Dursleys immense weight.

"Stop please" Harry tried to say while coughing up blood his earlier rage forgotten in place of the blinding pain, slowly an almost silent wind picked up around him getting stronger with every passing moment of pain

[WARNING! WARNING!]

"BOY ILL HAVE NONE OF YOUR FREAKISHNESS IN MY HOUSE" Vernon boomed noticing the now noticeable wind picking up speed centred around Harry's broken form.

With a roar of hatred, Vernon continued to beat his small malnourished from his leg snapping from Vernon jumping on his kneecap, another punch sends him into blissful unconsciousness unaware of Vernon beating his still unconscious form only stopping when his rage had calmed finally stopping by throwing his mangled body back in his cupboard locking the door as he left for work.

[HOST IN CRITICAL CONDITION!]

[SCANNING... HOST VITALS DROPPING... FINDING SOLUTION... SCANNING HOST... ERROR!! ERROR!... ENERGY FLUCTUATION DETECTED...]

Meanwhile in Hogwarts headmaster office for the past hour, various monitors have been slowly getting louder until the point where if not for the various enchantments if could have been heard from Hogsmeade

"Stupid Dursleys I told them not to get carried away I still need him alive so he can sacrifice himself" he spoke a vicious glint present in his eye, near silently disappearing from where he previously stood only a caged Phoenix glaring at the now empty spot.


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This is just something I'm doing in my spare time but if it does for some reason got popular then I will probably upload more often

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