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Hi shameless author here, just letting everyone know that this is one of my first works to be put out in public for review and criticism. I have the main story beats planned out and major events I want to take place but this is hopefully a fun and gritty isekai romp without the whole reincarnation bit in a world I built for a d&d game I run. It's kind of a solo session for myself just to see how the world feels and how a boy from the land of snow and maple syrup would survive. Grammar and English should not be a problem for me so no worries about bad translation or misuse of him/her like some things I've seen
Hi shameless author here, just letting everyone know that this is one of my first works to be put out in public for review and criticism. I have the main story beats planned out and major events I want to take place but this is hopefully a fun and gritty isekai romp without the whole reincarnation bit in a world I built for a d&d game I run. It's kind of a solo session for myself just to see how the world feels and how a boy from the land of snow and maple syrup would survive. Grammar and English should not be a problem for me so no worries about bad translation or misuse of him/her like some things I've seen