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It has great potential but theres no uppdates for 8 months. This is sad becuse i really liked the way the story was going. I personly think that i harem would be good. For many reson. But one of the more inporatant is that he will probly have a massive stamina pool *If you get my meaing* and he one girl might not be able to hold him. *maby a god?* but then theres the cha stat. So he unless there is someone wathcing him at all time he might cheat just becuse.
It's got promise but it needs some more chapters I'll review again after 20 chapters and hopefully as I hope it will we will be into the thick of things of so.ething at least
Really well put together story, the twist in the story is amazing and it goes with what happens in the original books. I would definitely recommend this book if you want to read Percy Jackson with a twist
very good hahahahhahahahahhahahahahhahahahhahahahagahhahahahahhahhahahahahahhahahahhahagagaggahahahahhahahahhahahahahhahahahahhahahahahhahahahahhahahahahha๐
Can you hurry up and please come back?!?!! I like this story. It shows the potential to create its own story based on the Percy Jackson series. Can you show some updates and make it so we know whether or not to expect more. The quality of the work was great in every way and I just want to see more.
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Gรผzel bir roman gibi gรถzรผkรผyor umarฤฑm hฤฑzlฤฑ bir ลekilde yeni bรถlรผmler gelir yeni bรถlรผmler iรงin ลimdiden teลekkรผrler kardeลim bรถyle devam edersin umarฤฑm
Hello this is the author. Like everyone else I will give myself a 5 star review๐๐๐๐๐๐๐. I wrote this to make a character of the values that I felt were missing from many other stories. This character will be overpowered, no doubt about.I have always enjoyed overpowered characters who give zero ****s. This character may or may not be a harem it simply depends upon my readers at the time.Also donโt expect many anime powers as I intend to have a mostly unique system beside the necessities of a system novel.๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ก๐ฎ๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐๐คญ๐๐ง๐คซ๐คญ๐๐ฌ๐ฅ๐ค๐๐ค๐๐ฌ๐ฅ๐คญ๐ค๐๐คซ๐ฐ
This Novel is beyond Amazing. I'm surprised it only has two chapters, this is the most UNDERRATED novel I've seen so far. Pls make more, there is so much possibilities with this one!!!๐๐๐๐๐๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ
It has great potential but theres no uppdates for 8 months. This is sad becuse i really liked the way the story was going. I personly think that i harem would be good. For many reson. But one of the more inporatant is that he will probly have a massive stamina pool *If you get my meaing* and he one girl might not be able to hold him. *maby a god?* but then theres the cha stat. So he unless there is someone wathcing him at all time he might cheat just becuse.
It's got promise but it needs some more chapters I'll review again after 20 chapters and hopefully as I hope it will we will be into the thick of things of so.ething at least
Really well put together story, the twist in the story is amazing and it goes with what happens in the original books. I would definitely recommend this book if you want to read Percy Jackson with a twist
very good hahahahhahahahahhahahahahhahahahhahahahagahhahahahahhahhahahahahahhahahahhahagagaggahahahahhahahahhahahahahhahahahahhahahahahhahahahahhahahahahha๐
Can you hurry up and please come back?!?!! I like this story. It shows the potential to create its own story based on the Percy Jackson series. Can you show some updates and make it so we know whether or not to expect more. The quality of the work was great in every way and I just want to see more.
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Gรผzel bir roman gibi gรถzรผkรผyor umarฤฑm hฤฑzlฤฑ bir ลekilde yeni bรถlรผmler gelir yeni bรถlรผmler iรงin ลimdiden teลekkรผrler kardeลim bรถyle devam edersin umarฤฑm
Hello this is the author. Like everyone else I will give myself a 5 star review๐๐๐๐๐๐๐. I wrote this to make a character of the values that I felt were missing from many other stories. This character will be overpowered, no doubt about.I have always enjoyed overpowered characters who give zero ****s. This character may or may not be a harem it simply depends upon my readers at the time.Also donโt expect many anime powers as I intend to have a mostly unique system beside the necessities of a system novel.๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ก๐ฎ๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐๐คญ๐๐ง๐คซ๐คญ๐๐ฌ๐ฅ๐ค๐๐ค๐๐ฌ๐ฅ๐คญ๐ค๐๐คซ๐ฐ
This Novel is beyond Amazing. I'm surprised it only has two chapters, this is the most UNDERRATED novel I've seen so far. Pls make more, there is so much possibilities with this one!!!๐๐๐๐๐๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ