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So far I like this. But I REALLY HOPE THERE IS NO HAREM!!!! LIKE PLS!! NO!! but other than that I look forward time what comes next in the story. UT's very interesting. It satisfy my Potter verse cravings very well.
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Interesting development for this story . In one moment its becomes confusing and the next fun. The story line is good and its very well written just hope there will be an upload soon
The only reason I am posting this is because he hasn't updated for a long time............................................... 140 characters..................................................................................
Hmm.... Honestly I love the Harry Potter series. But this series simply seems to be boring to me. Of course this is only my opinion. From the other reviews it's obvious that others seems to like it. Anyway I'll continue reading a few more chapters and see how it goes.
Very well written and fun to read, I got hooked on reading very easily and stayed up to 4am without realizing when I was reading The story is fun, captivating and also 'compared to other fanfics' very new, although I have to point out that around chapter 7-9 it takes a bad turn which I personally did not enjoy where he got stuck in a spacial storm or wormhole and got transported to another dimension, parallel to his current HP world which for me interrupted the story and was completely unnecessary
It's an interesting story. The only thing that I don't particularly appreciate is how much of a show-off (even while he said he didn't want attention) is Harry, the first situation that comes to mind his the situation in the library, he had to show off to the librarian how much of a genius he was just for let her help him find some book???! And it's too god damn fast-paced, he goes from killing Quirrell AKA Voldemort (And e even let his soul escape even though he could probably fund a way to destroy or at least trap his soul with the F*ucking "LIBRARY OF HEAVEN'S") from barely escaping with his life from a Dyrad that was apparently his mother killer... why in name of all that is Unholy was she in the forest of death? She didn't have any reason to be there, no one explained anything about her. Then he goes to an alternate dimension... just like that, this isn't even the wors of all, during the course of the story the protagonist seems to want to maintain the canon story as much as possible even while interfering in other things, for example, why didn't he just killed Quirrell the first day of school once he was in his room? He could have simply ordered MICASA to stab his brain while he was asleep and spare himself the headache. And don't even let me start on "that" alternate dimension, let me be clear I didn't read the Fanfiction where you pick up the plot, but from what I've understood, that world Voldemort wants to evocate Cthulhu for some idiotic reason... and Harry seems to already know this, then... why.... why has he waited till the last goddamn second to stop him? And he even stopped something like "CTHULHU" with a Patronus? (even a modified one should not have that strong of an effect on an entity stronger than gods) and the worst of all? the same entity that the book said to be the entity to end all creation in all the multiverse. Said that he would have his revenge on him... maybe you didn't understand how "powerful" an entity like Cthulhu is, but to gain his wrath just because the protagonist wanted to follow the script?... that just a foolish choice. In the end though I like the story I hope the author will check these minor things an improve if story.
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It would be great if the author makes the story a bit fast paced. It will increase the excitement. But still I enjoyed it very much. I hope the author doesn't drop it.
Reveal Spoiler I really like this. Wish I could read more novels like this. I like how long the chapters are. The conversation becomes better as you keep reading. Hope the writer will update soon.
Great beginning to a story that has many possibilities. Interesting development for this story. In one moment it became a little confusing but now it is alright.
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Sorry guys for the late update! I had studies to finish. I hope the next chapter will be uploaded on schedule though. And don't worry though I won't turn this novel into an erotic one. And please review the novel!
I really like this novel but if he has all this knowledge he should be out using it by either becoming a ceo of a company or a king so he can use that influence to either gain more power or train more people to help him.
Ha shame on you, i know this isn't your first nove because I read you other 2 novel on fan fiction haha. Wait you are the original author right? If not it will be awkward hehe. Anyway I really like this novel. Even on fanfiction.net this is one of the novel I always wait for the updates. So cheers your novel got a fan~
I'm not trying to sound like an asshole but come on! We get it. Your mom died. Stop bringing up in every chapter. Also, the MC feels like it is forced to interact with other people.
I like the story, it would be better if the crossover to another world such as "fate stay night" to learn "true magic" or "marble reality" especially if you can make "noble phantasm" ... please continue the story ... I'll wait for the next
Reveal Spoiler I am rating my own novel. I think it's good for a first try. First of all English isn't my native language, so mistakes can be made.................... .... ...................
nice storyline and character are more real and believable the mc is not op and his power is progressing with time nice touch of multiverse also.
So far I like this. But I REALLY HOPE THERE IS NO HAREM!!!! LIKE PLS!! NO!! but other than that I look forward time what comes next in the story. UT's very interesting. It satisfy my Potter verse cravings very well.
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Interesting development for this story . In one moment its becomes confusing and the next fun. The story line is good and its very well written just hope there will be an upload soon
The only reason I am posting this is because he hasn't updated for a long time............................................... 140 characters..................................................................................
Hmm.... Honestly I love the Harry Potter series. But this series simply seems to be boring to me. Of course this is only my opinion. From the other reviews it's obvious that others seems to like it. Anyway I'll continue reading a few more chapters and see how it goes.
Very well written and fun to read, I got hooked on reading very easily and stayed up to 4am without realizing when I was reading The story is fun, captivating and also 'compared to other fanfics' very new, although I have to point out that around chapter 7-9 it takes a bad turn which I personally did not enjoy where he got stuck in a spacial storm or wormhole and got transported to another dimension, parallel to his current HP world which for me interrupted the story and was completely unnecessary
It's an interesting story. The only thing that I don't particularly appreciate is how much of a show-off (even while he said he didn't want attention) is Harry, the first situation that comes to mind his the situation in the library, he had to show off to the librarian how much of a genius he was just for let her help him find some book???! And it's too god damn fast-paced, he goes from killing Quirrell AKA Voldemort (And e even let his soul escape even though he could probably fund a way to destroy or at least trap his soul with the F*ucking "LIBRARY OF HEAVEN'S") from barely escaping with his life from a Dyrad that was apparently his mother killer... why in name of all that is Unholy was she in the forest of death? She didn't have any reason to be there, no one explained anything about her. Then he goes to an alternate dimension... just like that, this isn't even the wors of all, during the course of the story the protagonist seems to want to maintain the canon story as much as possible even while interfering in other things, for example, why didn't he just killed Quirrell the first day of school once he was in his room? He could have simply ordered MICASA to stab his brain while he was asleep and spare himself the headache. And don't even let me start on "that" alternate dimension, let me be clear I didn't read the Fanfiction where you pick up the plot, but from what I've understood, that world Voldemort wants to evocate Cthulhu for some idiotic reason... and Harry seems to already know this, then... why.... why has he waited till the last goddamn second to stop him? And he even stopped something like "CTHULHU" with a Patronus? (even a modified one should not have that strong of an effect on an entity stronger than gods) and the worst of all? the same entity that the book said to be the entity to end all creation in all the multiverse. Said that he would have his revenge on him... maybe you didn't understand how "powerful" an entity like Cthulhu is, but to gain his wrath just because the protagonist wanted to follow the script?... that just a foolish choice. In the end though I like the story I hope the author will check these minor things an improve if story.
Reveal Spoiler It would be great if the author makes the story a bit fast paced. It will increase the excitement. But still I enjoyed it very much. I hope the author doesn't drop it.
Reveal Spoiler I really like this. Wish I could read more novels like this. I like how long the chapters are. The conversation becomes better as you keep reading. Hope the writer will update soon.
Great beginning to a story that has many possibilities. Interesting development for this story. In one moment it became a little confusing but now it is alright.
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Sorry guys for the late update! I had studies to finish. I hope the next chapter will be uploaded on schedule though. And don't worry though I won't turn this novel into an erotic one. And please review the novel!
I really like this novel but if he has all this knowledge he should be out using it by either becoming a ceo of a company or a king so he can use that influence to either gain more power or train more people to help him.
Ha shame on you, i know this isn't your first nove because I read you other 2 novel on fan fiction haha. Wait you are the original author right? If not it will be awkward hehe. Anyway I really like this novel. Even on fanfiction.net this is one of the novel I always wait for the updates. So cheers your novel got a fan~
I'm not trying to sound like an asshole but come on! We get it. Your mom died. Stop bringing up in every chapter. Also, the MC feels like it is forced to interact with other people.
I like the story, it would be better if the crossover to another world such as "fate stay night" to learn "true magic" or "marble reality" especially if you can make "noble phantasm" ... please continue the story ... I'll wait for the next
Reveal Spoiler I am rating my own novel. I think it's good for a first try. First of all English isn't my native language, so mistakes can be made.................... .... ...................
nice storyline and character are more real and believable the mc is not op and his power is progressing with time nice touch of multiverse also.