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no problem in writing quality for me. the story is developing fabulously and smoothly. character is clear with no sign of hypocrisy more like a perfect anti-hero. updates are mostly on time don't know about future chapter uploads in fact I don't think anyone knows. not sure about what kind of marvel world it is but it is shaping into a picture slowly and perfectly. looking forward to reading more chapters. it is a successful system based fanfiction.keep writing and never think of dropping.
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tem muito potencial contanto que o autor não abandone tem uma boa chance de estar no topo desse site. Claro se o autor conseguir equilibrar o protagonista o bastante pra ele não ser considerado hipocrita, que geralmente é o erro mais comum em fanfics com karma bom e karma ruim.
A well-prepared backstory and a great character sketch. I hope you don't drop this fan-fiction author. It's a good read and has a great origin story. Thank you for sharing this amazing fan-fiction with us.
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I see that this story has great potential, the writing is fluid and fun, the downside is that there are very few chapters.I hope the updates are constant or at least don't let it fall
plzzz dont droppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp lol ok ill stop nowwwwswwww bruh aight this is really intertsing plzz dont i recommend to give it a try
It is good novel i liked it pls never drop Good luck😀😀😀👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
What a shame it was quite the good read it a shame it was dropped I hope that one day you will eventually remake this story until than I look forward to your other work of art or should I say good story's
I quite linked these first 5 chapters. I'm sorry to see that it's been a month since the last update. The story has potential, its fluently written and reads naturally. I recommend the author to continue the story.
I liked it it was vary vary refreshing I would like to to read more the whole hero villain thing is awesome keep it up 😍 It reminds me of the arrow with steet wise smarts unlike the arrow show were it's got it's Rich boy bules type
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A creative take on the Marvel world. I can appreciate that the author is taking time to develop the character and his struggles. A gritty anti-hero tale is a nice approach.
Woe what a story i used to be in the system but 18 years later here i am baby free to expose my self in the comfort of my own home whos gonna tell me to stop no one thats who not the government not the police not that two bit hissy that broke my heart at fudruckers nobody. Im getting stronger but ye it good read should read it.
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This is an outstanding novel I’d recommend to anyone. Aside from the updating speed and the few chapters this novel could be counted among the best I’ve seen. I particularly enjoy how the protagonist starts out with dealing with street level threats rather than the more unrealistic rendition of joining the avengers or high level marvel organizations or groups right if the bat. If you’re a fan of dc or marvel this is a must read this guy really knows his stuff and both the pace and world building is on point.
Hello, Unfortunately I see signs of Hiatus. I have no doubt that this quite interesting Fan-fic is going to be ( has been ) dropped. Enjoy reading those few chaps and then go cry.
good novel but removing characters has large influences on the later part on the story like friend whit the psyik girl that my be destroyde by this part
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Cool, awesome, tops, number one, blue ribbon material, gold medalist, first place, the best, aged to perfection, Five Stars, Ten out of Ten, must read!
This story is great, I hope it doesn’t get dropped. This is the first redhood fan-fic I have ever read and I am not disappointed. It’s very interesting seeing how red hood thrives in the marvel universe.
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This story is unique in this webnovel things!So i went more.......i'll edit my review after you quicken your pace of update...also i want to tell the author that we love your work.....it's worth our time so guys give it a try......for now chps are not much so can't tell much but plz author don't make MC op too fast ,it's just i liked the mc who work hard and earn what he work for and there are many novel where mc is OP too fast and destory the story interest(just my opinion) i'm not judging the author work or whatsoever...... i'm just expressing my feeling for this work.....Still Hope You Update fast cause i don't know when will i die??? GOOD JOB AUTHOR!
Read the story to chapter three. The character development was unique, the concept of persona infusion is something I've seen before, but not in such a literal way. Grammar mistakes are pretty common, replacements of the words and with an, and an with a; are common. They're minor, but they do detract from the story. As for the actual story, if try to describe what it is exactly you're adding. I haven't read much of the D.C comics, so I'm unfamiliar with the first character introduced. So not much to say about that, though the off hand remark about the second robin does give information. Contradicting myself, i'd say not to go over the top with descriptions or asinine plot points. The blend of Marcel and mcu is nice. It'd be nice to see the Juggernaut because he is definitely one of my favorite characters. Some information about the system would be appreciated. As Im unsure if it is just reserved for DC characters, or if It pulls from other sources of not. No big detractions from the novel so far, keep up the good work! Wrote a 'review' a day or so ago pretty much right after my dog I'd had for 13 years died. Wanted to write an actual review cause I wasn't myself that day.
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I love system novels! I can't wait to start reading this one. Wish there were more chapters, but what are you going to do? Waiting for a chapter can be fun, especially when testing one's own imaginations. As an author here, I find it to be a good pass time to read other's work for inspiration when stuck between a rock and a hard place. 5/5 until further notice! cx
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I need more I need more I needed more..hoped this is dropped.it really good. ........great story.deeez nut Soo never gonna give you up
no problem in writing quality for me. the story is developing fabulously and smoothly. character is clear with no sign of hypocrisy more like a perfect anti-hero. updates are mostly on time don't know about future chapter uploads in fact I don't think anyone knows. not sure about what kind of marvel world it is but it is shaping into a picture slowly and perfectly. looking forward to reading more chapters. it is a successful system based fanfiction.keep writing and never think of dropping.
It's back!!! Woohoo let's go, that's what I'm talking about! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
tem muito potencial contanto que o autor não abandone tem uma boa chance de estar no topo desse site. Claro se o autor conseguir equilibrar o protagonista o bastante pra ele não ser considerado hipocrita, que geralmente é o erro mais comum em fanfics com karma bom e karma ruim.
A well-prepared backstory and a great character sketch. I hope you don't drop this fan-fiction author. It's a good read and has a great origin story. Thank you for sharing this amazing fan-fiction with us.
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I see that this story has great potential, the writing is fluid and fun, the downside is that there are very few chapters.I hope the updates are constant or at least don't let it fall
plzzz dont droppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp lol ok ill stop nowwwwswwww bruh aight this is really intertsing plzz dont i recommend to give it a try
It is good novel i liked it pls never drop Good luck😀😀😀👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
What a shame it was quite the good read it a shame it was dropped I hope that one day you will eventually remake this story until than I look forward to your other work of art or should I say good story's
I quite linked these first 5 chapters. I'm sorry to see that it's been a month since the last update. The story has potential, its fluently written and reads naturally. I recommend the author to continue the story.
I liked it it was vary vary refreshing I would like to to read more the whole hero villain thing is awesome keep it up 😍 It reminds me of the arrow with steet wise smarts unlike the arrow show were it's got it's Rich boy bules type
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A creative take on the Marvel world. I can appreciate that the author is taking time to develop the character and his struggles. A gritty anti-hero tale is a nice approach.
Woe what a story i used to be in the system but 18 years later here i am baby free to expose my self in the comfort of my own home whos gonna tell me to stop no one thats who not the government not the police not that two bit hissy that broke my heart at fudruckers nobody. Im getting stronger but ye it good read should read it.
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This is an outstanding novel I’d recommend to anyone. Aside from the updating speed and the few chapters this novel could be counted among the best I’ve seen. I particularly enjoy how the protagonist starts out with dealing with street level threats rather than the more unrealistic rendition of joining the avengers or high level marvel organizations or groups right if the bat. If you’re a fan of dc or marvel this is a must read this guy really knows his stuff and both the pace and world building is on point.
Hello, Unfortunately I see signs of Hiatus. I have no doubt that this quite interesting Fan-fic is going to be ( has been ) dropped. Enjoy reading those few chaps and then go cry.
good novel but removing characters has large influences on the later part on the story like friend whit the psyik girl that my be destroyde by this part
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Cool, awesome, tops, number one, blue ribbon material, gold medalist, first place, the best, aged to perfection, Five Stars, Ten out of Ten, must read!
This story is great, I hope it doesn’t get dropped. This is the first redhood fan-fic I have ever read and I am not disappointed. It’s very interesting seeing how red hood thrives in the marvel universe.
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This story is unique in this webnovel things!So i went more.......i'll edit my review after you quicken your pace of update...also i want to tell the author that we love your work.....it's worth our time so guys give it a try......for now chps are not much so can't tell much but plz author don't make MC op too fast ,it's just i liked the mc who work hard and earn what he work for and there are many novel where mc is OP too fast and destory the story interest(just my opinion) i'm not judging the author work or whatsoever...... i'm just expressing my feeling for this work.....Still Hope You Update fast cause i don't know when will i die??? GOOD JOB AUTHOR!
Read the story to chapter three. The character development was unique, the concept of persona infusion is something I've seen before, but not in such a literal way. Grammar mistakes are pretty common, replacements of the words and with an, and an with a; are common. They're minor, but they do detract from the story. As for the actual story, if try to describe what it is exactly you're adding. I haven't read much of the D.C comics, so I'm unfamiliar with the first character introduced. So not much to say about that, though the off hand remark about the second robin does give information. Contradicting myself, i'd say not to go over the top with descriptions or asinine plot points. The blend of Marcel and mcu is nice. It'd be nice to see the Juggernaut because he is definitely one of my favorite characters. Some information about the system would be appreciated. As Im unsure if it is just reserved for DC characters, or if It pulls from other sources of not. No big detractions from the novel so far, keep up the good work! Wrote a 'review' a day or so ago pretty much right after my dog I'd had for 13 years died. Wanted to write an actual review cause I wasn't myself that day.
The instructional numbers of a doctor and a good one to be one in one direction is one of the one who does it is one of the main switch between white ppt and brown
I love system novels! I can't wait to start reading this one. Wish there were more chapters, but what are you going to do? Waiting for a chapter can be fun, especially when testing one's own imaginations. As an author here, I find it to be a good pass time to read other's work for inspiration when stuck between a rock and a hard place. 5/5 until further notice! cx
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I need more I need more I needed more..hoped this is dropped.it really good. ........great story.deeez nut Soo never gonna give you up