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Please update faster. This is one of the funniest stories I have read it doesn’t matter if your grammar is bad but I just find this novel funny.
Its a great comedy. You should write more chapters, while sometimes the story is a litlle weird its that that males this story so fun. __________________________________________________ ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------so im waiting for more chapters
This Novel is awesome it's mainly comedy but not in the over-the-top way I highly recommend you read it and I hope the author continue the story even if he doesn't it's worth a read
Great story but lacks updates..... The rest after this is gibberish so I can get 140 characters..............ehcisbjdjvsnofyzhhekfhxbdki mhfuzhdnxky s to ugsnvkcgsntjvjgzmficgsh nmsj gejeiftwuqozkmx mjdk,icb as ny c vavqiZlsoqnxhfow🤣🤣🤣🤣h fr🙂😙🙂ehsbjsbae wicjdb
*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: I suggest keeping the lengths of your chapters from 1k-2k words each due to that being what's most liked on this site, though the story isn't lacking in my mind, I feel that the first 5 chapters are likely a bit on the short side. Also, for the last two chapters you have gaps of time that you did not explain to us that you would have ahead of time, this will reduce your score in stability of updates, I suggest you try to keep updates more regular, or to let us know what we should expect as far as when new updates will occur. Positive feedback: You had stable updates for all but the last two chapters, and you did well in all other arias of this novel... keep up the good work.;,;. Personal Feedback: I will continue to read this novel at a later date.;,;. Score: WQ&SoU 4/5 SD,CD,&WB 5/5
well... there are 40 chapter but after 8 of them i can't read anymore... The story goes far too fast and the author try to joke a bit but it isn't funny at all... maybe it'll be better later but it's too much for me we don't know anything about the MC and it's like a reproduction of other novel so no thank you I like original novel but this time... I won't read further Good luck in the futur
You need to learn grammar and spell check it it hurts my eyes looking how sloppy this work is go **** yourself your not qualified to write. Go back learning basic and importantly your words are **** like heavey what the **** is that spelling .
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I don't even know how to find good original novels anymore (the rating score is always misleading), it's like climbing an arduous journey through extremely trash grammar 50% of the time. Normally I'd do an in-depth review on why I don't like a certain novel, but this novel is pretty self-explanatory. Writing Quality: 1.5/5 (My eyes are bleeding) Stability Of Updates: 5/5 (I'll give you this) Story Development: 2/5 (MC has a very steep learning curve) Character Design: 2/5 (Look one line above) World Background: 3/5 (Well, there's a world and it's not too bad, I can faintly picture an image.) If anyone wants me to do an in-depth review, simply @reply to me in one of my reviews and I'll do a truthful in-depth review if I can actually understand the flow of the writing. (I write these reviews so that the section for determining whether someone reads a story is actually truthful and not full of deceit.)
Ok I'm confused is this mc brain dead or he's to arrogant he claims to read novels in his past life but this is the dumbest he's been I mean what mc have acted like this well his personality needs a little work I mean he has two lighting in him but I don't remember a system or artifact a artifact would be a good twist well thank you for for the good work
Our dearly beloved protagonist is a hilarious and talented young master. His tolerance and determination knows no limits ...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
This is great so far but please stop making the mc afraid of the Tang girl it's sad to see he need to man up many she can help him find his mother but I think ur building by there relationship it seems like she the reincarnation of the girls he saved maybe she still died I don't no but I hope it's the case thanks for the hard work
Amazing novel keep up the good work.. No harem please also try getting someone to proofread for you.............................................................................................................................. ......
Just some typo mistakes correction ,the story will be more amazing. English is not my first language, but i understood what you want to deliver . Keep going, best wishes *****
I read the first few chapters an i was like meh but i read more and i laughed until tears came out . But you should edit the first chaptes and write more about cultivation realms and thier level. Good job and keep writing
Your novel is quite interesting and the synopsis is also fine background's fine on the minus side i just want to add that just write more words in order to elaborate more ^^ x
When I read the synopsis I was pretty impressed. So many information and events in just a few lines, so I thought if I could really get what you want to say on this novel, but when I started the first episode it made me laugh, and I think it's a really good thing! because I understood what style of writing you have and it's very fresh, Keep going!
The novel is light-hearted and somewhat humorous. The typos and lack of capitalization are annoying, though. Feels like a first draft. Also you should flesh out the cultivation levels more. Keep working hard!!!
As the author of this novel i thank you for reading my novel , i hope that all of you will like this novel . I will try my best to improve.
Hello! Your ideas and story are actually really good! The humour even in chapter 1 is nice haha! I enjoyed it alot. Once you use a spell checker and proof read stuff a bit, it'll be even better :)
Not a bad start, but could use way less swearing. And what is with the looking to see if his dick is still there? Are you going to make the MC a pervert? Have to say that pervert's stopped being amusing several stories back.
When is the author going to start updating again really like this funny novel. Can anybody recommend good novels to read I can’t find good one.
Please update faster. This is one of the funniest stories I have read it doesn’t matter if your grammar is bad but I just find this novel funny.
Its a great comedy. You should write more chapters, while sometimes the story is a litlle weird its that that males this story so fun. __________________________________________________ ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------so im waiting for more chapters
This Novel is awesome it's mainly comedy but not in the over-the-top way I highly recommend you read it and I hope the author continue the story even if he doesn't it's worth a read
Great story but lacks updates..... The rest after this is gibberish so I can get 140 characters..............ehcisbjdjvsnofyzhhekfhxbdki mhfuzhdnxky s to ugsnvkcgsntjvjgzmficgsh nmsj gejeiftwuqozkmx mjdk,icb as ny c vavqiZlsoqnxhfow🤣🤣🤣🤣h fr🙂😙🙂ehsbjsbae wicjdb
*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: I suggest keeping the lengths of your chapters from 1k-2k words each due to that being what's most liked on this site, though the story isn't lacking in my mind, I feel that the first 5 chapters are likely a bit on the short side. Also, for the last two chapters you have gaps of time that you did not explain to us that you would have ahead of time, this will reduce your score in stability of updates, I suggest you try to keep updates more regular, or to let us know what we should expect as far as when new updates will occur. Positive feedback: You had stable updates for all but the last two chapters, and you did well in all other arias of this novel... keep up the good work.;,;. Personal Feedback: I will continue to read this novel at a later date.;,;. Score: WQ&SoU 4/5 SD,CD,&WB 5/5
well... there are 40 chapter but after 8 of them i can't read anymore... The story goes far too fast and the author try to joke a bit but it isn't funny at all... maybe it'll be better later but it's too much for me we don't know anything about the MC and it's like a reproduction of other novel so no thank you I like original novel but this time... I won't read further Good luck in the futur
You need to learn grammar and spell check it it hurts my eyes looking how sloppy this work is go **** yourself your not qualified to write. Go back learning basic and importantly your words are **** like heavey what the **** is that spelling .
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I don't even know how to find good original novels anymore (the rating score is always misleading), it's like climbing an arduous journey through extremely trash grammar 50% of the time. Normally I'd do an in-depth review on why I don't like a certain novel, but this novel is pretty self-explanatory. Writing Quality: 1.5/5 (My eyes are bleeding) Stability Of Updates: 5/5 (I'll give you this) Story Development: 2/5 (MC has a very steep learning curve) Character Design: 2/5 (Look one line above) World Background: 3/5 (Well, there's a world and it's not too bad, I can faintly picture an image.) If anyone wants me to do an in-depth review, simply @reply to me in one of my reviews and I'll do a truthful in-depth review if I can actually understand the flow of the writing. (I write these reviews so that the section for determining whether someone reads a story is actually truthful and not full of deceit.)
Ok I'm confused is this mc brain dead or he's to arrogant he claims to read novels in his past life but this is the dumbest he's been I mean what mc have acted like this well his personality needs a little work I mean he has two lighting in him but I don't remember a system or artifact a artifact would be a good twist well thank you for for the good work
Our dearly beloved protagonist is a hilarious and talented young master. His tolerance and determination knows no limits ...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
This is great so far but please stop making the mc afraid of the Tang girl it's sad to see he need to man up many she can help him find his mother but I think ur building by there relationship it seems like she the reincarnation of the girls he saved maybe she still died I don't no but I hope it's the case thanks for the hard work
Amazing novel keep up the good work.. No harem please also try getting someone to proofread for you.............................................................................................................................. ......
Just some typo mistakes correction ,the story will be more amazing. English is not my first language, but i understood what you want to deliver . Keep going, best wishes *****
I read the first few chapters an i was like meh but i read more and i laughed until tears came out . But you should edit the first chaptes and write more about cultivation realms and thier level. Good job and keep writing
Your novel is quite interesting and the synopsis is also fine background's fine on the minus side i just want to add that just write more words in order to elaborate more ^^ x
When I read the synopsis I was pretty impressed. So many information and events in just a few lines, so I thought if I could really get what you want to say on this novel, but when I started the first episode it made me laugh, and I think it's a really good thing! because I understood what style of writing you have and it's very fresh, Keep going!
The novel is light-hearted and somewhat humorous. The typos and lack of capitalization are annoying, though. Feels like a first draft. Also you should flesh out the cultivation levels more. Keep working hard!!!
As the author of this novel i thank you for reading my novel , i hope that all of you will like this novel . I will try my best to improve.
Hello! Your ideas and story are actually really good! The humour even in chapter 1 is nice haha! I enjoyed it alot. Once you use a spell checker and proof read stuff a bit, it'll be even better :)
Not a bad start, but could use way less swearing. And what is with the looking to see if his dick is still there? Are you going to make the MC a pervert? Have to say that pervert's stopped being amusing several stories back.
When is the author going to start updating again really like this funny novel. Can anybody recommend good novels to read I can’t find good one.