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समता प्रेम नम्रता इमानदारी पवित्रता यह होते हैं मानवता के गुण मानवता इन्हीं गुणों का पालन हजारों और लाखों सालों से करते आ रहे हैं इन्हीं गुणों से मानव मानवता और मानवीय सभ्यता ने कई ऊंचे ऊंचे मुकाम हासिल किए पर यह सब तरक्की दैत्यों और दानवो से देखी नहीं गई उन्होंने छल कपट साम दाम दंड भेद की नीति अपनाते हुए मानव जाति और मनुष्य के बीच में नफरत के बीज बो दिए और फिर मनुष्य ने आपस में ही जंग करना शुरू कर दिया और इस कारण मानवता कमजोर हो गई और इसी कमजोरी का फायदा उठाते हुए राक्षसों और दैत्यों ने मानव जाति पर आक्रमण कर दिया और जब तक मानव जाति कुछ समझ पाती उसके पहले ही राक्षस पूरे मानव जाति के हुकुम शाह बन गए एक बार सत्ता हाथ में आ जाने के बाद उन राक्षसों ने मानव जाति पर अननवित अत्याचार किये उन्होंने मानव जाति के अपनी नफरत के कारण पूरी मानव जाति को अपना गुलाम बना दिया सारी मानव जाति एक वक्त के खाने के लिए भी तरसने लगी और इसी पेट की आग के चलते मानव जाति एक दूसरे पर हमला करने से भी पीछे नहीं हटने लगी किसी भी घर की औरतों और किशोर महिलाओं को वह राक्षस कभी भी उठाकर ले जाते और उन पर जबरदस्ती करके या तो उनको छोड़ देते यार फिर उन महिलाओं को मार कर उनको वह कच्चा ही खा लेते राक्षसों के अत्याचार के कारण पूरी दुनिया में त्राहि-त्राहि मत चुकी थी आखिरकार मानव जाति है देवों के देव महादेव की शरण में जाने का निर्णय लिया उन्होंने महादेव की भक्ति करना शुरू कर दिया मानवता ने 2000 साल तक महादेव की भक्ति की आखिरकार मानवता की उनकी भक्ति के कारण वह खुश हो गए और वह धरती पर प्रकट हुए धरती पर प्रकट होते हैं उनकी आंख गुस्से से लाल हो गई अपने भक्तों की ऐसी दुर्दशा देखकर उनकी आंखों से गुस्से की धधकती ज्वाला उठने लगी आखिरकार उन्होंने अपनी तीसरी आंख खोली और उन्होंने तांडव नृत्य शुरू कर दिया वह जैसे-जैसे तांडव नृत्य करते गए वैसे वैसे उनके शरीर से अलग अलग मानवी और पशुओं की आकृति बाहर निकलती गई और वह आकृतियां दुनिया में मौजूद सारे दानव और राक्षसों का सफाया करने लगी वह जैसे जैसे तांडव नृत्य करते गए वैसे वैसे इस दुनिया में मौजूद सारे राक्षस और दानव मरते गए उनके तांडव नृत्य को देखने के लिए सारी मानवता उनके सामने उनके दर्शन करने खड़ी हो गई महादेव के शरीर से निकली हुई उन आकृतियो ने सारे दैत्यों और राक्षसों के बीच में हाहाकार मचा दिया था और वह अपनी जान बचाने के लिए यहां-वहां भागने लगे पर वह कितना भी कुछ क्यों ना करते पर वह सारे महादेव के प्रकोप से बच ना सके उन्होंने राक्षसों के सारे राजा महाराजाओं को मार दिया उन्हीं राक्षसों में एक 4 महीने का बालक था जिनके माता-पिता को उसकी आंखों के सामने उन आकृतियों ने मार डाला अपने माता-पिता को ऐसे असहाय मरता हुआ देखकर उस बच्चे के मन में मानवता और महादेव के प्रति गुस्से की धधकती ज्वाला जल उठी अपने माता-पिता के शव के सामने वह राक्षस बालक रेंगता गया उन शवों को देखकर उसकी आंखों से आंसू छलक पड़े और वह अपनी आंखों में आसूं लिए हुए महादेव की तरफ देखने लगा असहाय बालक को देखकर महादेव को भी उस पर दया आ गई और उन्होंने उस बालक को क्षमा करने का निर्णय लिया उन्होंने उस बालक के आंखों में अपने खुद के प्रति नफरत के भाव को भी देखा था एक नवजात बालक की हत्या करने को महादेव का मन राजी नहीं हुआ और उन्होंने उसे जीव दान देने का निर्णय लिया वैसे भी वह इस दुनिया में सिर्फ अकेला ही दानव बच गया था सारे दानवो के खत्म होने के बाद महादेव इस दुनिया से फिर से अदृश्य हो गए पर इस दुनिया में एक दानव बालक अभी भी जिंदा था और वह भी मानवता के प्रति अपनी प्रतिशोध की अग्नि के साथ उसने घने जंगलों में पनाह ले ली और अपने शरीर के अंगों को काट काट कर फिर से राक्षस जाति को बढ़ाने लगा महादेव के तांडव नृत्य से प्रेरणा लेकर उसने अपने कबीले का नाम तांडव कबीला रख दिया और फिर से उन्ह राक्षसो ने मानव जाति के बीच में घुसपैठ करना शुरू कर दी उन्होंने कई सारी अलौकिक शक्तियां फिर से हासिल की और फिर उनको पता चला कि दुनिया में एक राजकुमार के पास महादेव का आशीर्वाद है और उसका जन्म दुनिया में से राक्षसों को फिर से खत्म करने के लिए हुआ है तो उसके शरीर को उन्होंने नींद में ही आत्मा विहीन कर दिया राक्षसों ने मान लिया कि उनका दुश्मन खत्म हो गया है पर उस राजकुमार ने 900 सालों बाद फिर से एक दूरस्थ देश के एक अनाथ कमजोर लड़के का शरीर धारण कर लिया क्या एक अनाथ लड़का एक कमजोर शरीर के साथ सच में राक्षसों का सामना कर पाएगा या फिर वह फिर से राक्षसों के छल का शिकार बन जाएगा जानने के लिए पढ़ते रहिए कहानी मेरी सच्चाई (यह कहानी समानांतर दुनिया में एक कल्पनाविलास है)
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Librarian of the Eternal Library

Librarian of the Eternal Library

Ascend The Tower: Where Gods are Born, Legends Unveiled, and Myths Come Alive. In the realm of The Tower, where gods forge destiny, legends awaken, and myths transcend reality: Nox, a brilliant detective, is thrust into a realm beyond imagination. A relentless seeker, he yearns to unveil the truth of his origins — a quest for his lost parents. Luke, an enigmatic force, stands as the very apex of existence, yet aches for the familiarity of home on Earth. Bound by the threads of fate, Nox becomes the Librarian of the Eternal Library, a conduit between worlds. Here, amidst forgotten tomes and arcane secrets, he encounters Luke, a captive of eternity. Luke's longing to reunite with his parents resonates with Nox's search, but Luke holds knowledge beyond Nox's reckoning. United by destiny, their paths intertwine, setting in motion a tidal wave of change. The Tower's denizens watch as the tapestry of lives shifts, unraveling mysteries and rewriting destinies. Can Nox navigate this enigmatic realm to uncover his lineage and fulfill Luke's yearning? With every step, the Tower quakes, and its people are stirred. The Tower is a crucible, forging both heroes and gods. As Nox and Luke tread its labyrinthine passages, they'll not only shape their destinies but also reshape the very essence of The Tower. Prepare to witness a metamorphosis like no other. For in this saga, The Tower itself will be transformed, and at its heart stands Nox, bound to unravel not only the Tower's secrets but his own existence. Embark on a journey where mysteries converge, dreams take flight, and The Tower and its inhabitants are forever altered. _________________________________ **Warning:** The protagonist begins with strength and grows stronger over time. At the start of the story, the main character feels confused and struggles to adjust to the Tower, much like an ordinary person. While the main character is kind and affectionate, there are moments when he become angry and behave selfishly or maliciously. This story doesn't feature a perfect "Knight in shining armor" protagonist. He is human too, like you and me. If you're seeking shallow characters, you won't find them here. Every character, no matter how minor, has a backstory. Nox, too, holds a intricate past that will gradually unfold throughout the novel. _________________________________ This novel has taken inspiration from some of my favorite novels, such as: Leveling with the gods Second Life ranker Omniscient reader's viewpoint Solo Leveling and many more.... Even though most writers use the top books as inspiration, they do not say it aloud, like me. But, I love the novels I used as inspiration wholeheartedly. Even though all I can do is try, I will provide the readers with the best story possible. _________________________________ P.S: This is my first webnovel. Please do give me some time so that I may improve. I am also always open to suggestions. Thank you very much!! ** I know the story's pace is a bit slow. I apologize for that. I assure you that the pace increases in the later chapters. _________________________________ The art is not mine. If you are the artist, please let me know if you want me to take it down or give you credits. My Discord: MythicBunny#7072 My Instagram: mythicbunny06
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How do character flaws in the character flaws list fiction affect the plot?
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2024-11-22 23:59
Character flaws can drive the plot. For example, if a character is overly ambitious (a character flaw), they might make decisions that lead to their downfall. This creates conflict and moves the story forward. If a character is too trusting, they could be easily deceived, which can start a whole chain of events in the plot.
Celebrating Years Plot Flaws
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2024-12-24 16:59
There were some loopholes in the plot of the TV series 'Celebrating the Years.' Some viewers pointed out that there were some illogical plots in the play. For example, in the first episode, Wu Zhu said that everyone in the city was killing her (Fan Xian's mother). This sentence was wrong because there was a difference between chasing and killing. In addition, after Fan Xian came to the Fan manor, his father asked him what he wanted to do. Fan Xian suggested some modern ways to make money, but he was told that his mother had already done these things. There were also some modern words that appeared in the mouths of ancient people, but Fan Xian did not suspect that his mother was not an ancient person. The audience felt that there were logical loopholes in the plot. In addition, some viewers mentioned that Northern Qi, as a defeated country, had made things difficult for the Qing envoys and that there were loopholes in the plot, such as the capture of prisoners. In general, there were some problems with the plot of "Celebrating Years," but there were also viewers who thought that these loopholes might have been intentional by the screenwriter and contained deep meaning.
Celebrating Years Plot Flaws
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2024-12-21 12:49
There were some loopholes in the plot of the TV series 'Celebrating the Years.' The audience pointed out some illogical plots. For example, the story of Fan Xian's mother being hunted down did not match the actual situation. Fan Xian's modern methods of making money had been told by his mother, and modern words appeared in the mouths of ancient people, but Fan Xian did not suspect that his mother was not an ancient person. In addition, some viewers mentioned that Northern Qi, as a defeated country, had made things difficult for the Qing envoys and that there were loopholes in the plot, such as the capture of prisoners. In general, there were some problems with the plot of " Celebrating Years," but there were also viewers who thought that these loopholes might have been intentional by the screenwriter and contained deep meaning.
The Flaws of Celebrating the Past Years
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2024-12-20 22:20
The shortcomings of the novels celebrating the new year were as follows: long, too much description, boring plot, inconsistent character settings, and unreasonable plot adaptation. Some people thought that the novel was too long and the details were too detailed, which made them feel tired when reading. In addition, some of the character settings were inconsistent with their behavior, and some of the plot adaptation was unreasonable.
Celebrating the Flaws of the Past Years
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2024-12-18 22:28
There were some loopholes in the plot of the novel, Celebrating Years. The audience pointed out some illogical plots. For example, the story of Fan Xian's mother being hunted down did not match the actual situation. Fan Xian's modern methods of making money had been told by his mother, and modern words had appeared in the mouths of ancient people. The existence of these plots made the audience think that there were logical loopholes in the novel.
Celebrating the Flaws of the Past Years
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2024-12-14 16:07
There were some loopholes in the logic of the novel 'Celebrating the Years.' The audience pointed out some unreasonable plots. For example, the protagonist's personality was considered shameless, a sinister wolf, leaving people in the lurch, and extreme selfishness. This kind of personality did not match the protagonist's identity. The protagonist's martial strength was also thought to be too high to make up for his ruthlessness. In addition, there were some modern terms that appeared in the mouths of ancient people, but Fan Xian did not suspect that his mother was not an ancient person. In addition, the audience also mentioned that Northern Qi, as a defeated country, had made things difficult for the Qing envoys and that there were loopholes in the plot, such as the capture of the exchanged prisoners. In general, there were some problems with the plot of " Celebrating Years," but there were also viewers who thought that these loopholes might have been intentional by the screenwriter and contained deep meaning.
Celebrating Years Plot Flaws
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2024-10-24 12:26
There were some loopholes in the plot of the TV series 'Celebrating the Years.' The audience pointed out some illogical plots. For example, the story of Fan Xian's mother being hunted down did not match the actual situation. Fan Xian's modern methods of making money had been told by his mother, and modern words appeared in the mouths of ancient people, but Fan Xian did not suspect that his mother was not an ancient person. In addition, some viewers mentioned that Northern Qi, as a defeated country, had made things difficult for the Qing envoys and that there were loopholes in the plot, such as the capture of prisoners. In general, there were some problems with the plot of " Celebrating Years," but there were also viewers who thought that these loopholes might have been intentional by the screenwriter and contained deep meaning.
What are the flaws of comic books?
2 answers
2024-10-03 09:11
One flaw could be that some comic books have overly simplistic plots that lack depth and complexity.
The Harmful Flaws of Online Literature
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2024-08-22 11:38
As a new form of literature, online literature has many advantages, but at the same time, it also has some disadvantages and disadvantages. 1. The wide range of audiences of online literature is easy to form the phenomenon of "cultural garbage". Due to the relatively convenient way of spreading online literature, many contents lacked depth and thought. They only existed to cater to the tastes of readers, which easily led to the production of cultural garbage. 2. The quality of online literature was uneven. Many online literature authors lacked professional literary attainments and writing skills, making it difficult to guarantee the quality of their works. At the same time, because the creation and spread of online literature relied on the network platform, the communication between authors and readers was not sufficient, which would also affect the quality of the works. 3. The tendency of online literature to be commercial is serious. In order to cater to the readers 'tastes, some online literature authors would often write works that were highly commercial. These works lacked literary value and only existed to earn high royalties. 4. The influence of online literature on the mental health of teenagers. Due to the relatively convenient way of spreading online literature, it was easy for many teenagers to read online literature through online platforms and come into contact with some inappropriate content. Such inappropriate content may have a negative impact on the mental health of a minor. Therefore, although online literature has many advantages, there are also some dangers and shortcomings. Parents, schools and society need to work together to strengthen supervision and management to ensure the healthy development of online literature.
Reviews for True Story: Are there any flaws in it?
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2024-12-03 12:46
In 'True Story', there are instances where the story tries to cover too much. It jumps from one aspect to another without fully exploring each one. This can make the narrative feel scattered. Another aspect is that some of the dialogue may seem a bit forced, not flowing as naturally as it could, which takes away from the overall authenticity of the story.
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