The Hashiras would likely show concern. Some, like Shinobu, would immediately start looking into possible medical solutions. Giyuu might be more reserved in his worry but would still keep a close eye on Tanjiro. The other demon slayers would also be affected. They look up to Tanjiro, so his sickness would lower the morale of the group. They would try to support each other while waiting for Tanjiro to recover.
Sasuke would probably be very guarded at first. He's not used to dealing with something so innocent and vulnerable. He might be suspicious of the baby's presence and think it's some sort of trap.
Sasuke would be furious. He's always been protective of Naruto in his own way. He would immediately start looking for her, using all his skills and resources. He might even go on a rampage if he thought Naruto was in serious danger.
On the other hand, Sasuke could be very stoic about it on the surface but internally be in turmoil. He might start to analyze his own actions and whether he had missed any signs from Sakura. He could also be the type to immediately start thinking of ways to win Sakura back if he realizes he can't stand the thought of her with someone else.
Sasuke might be initially surprised. He is used to the Sakura from his past, so seeing a different, more mature future Sakura could catch him off guard.
I think young Sasuke would have a very intense reaction. He was so consumed by his hatred for Itachi at that young age. A Sasuke vs Itachi fanfiction would be like a trigger for him. He would be eager to see how the fictional fight is portrayed. If Sasuke in the fanfiction is shown as strong, it might fuel his own ego and make him strive even harder to become powerful. However, if the fanfiction shows Itachi as superior, it could enrage him. He might feel that it undermines his own goal of defeating Itachi and he might even want to find the writer to correct their 'wrong' view.