Some Death Eaters might be angry. They have a certain self - image and ideology in the original story, and if fanfic distorts that in a way they don't like, they would not be happy. For instance, if a fanfic makes them out to be weak or cowardly, they would likely react negatively. However, others might be more open - minded and see it as an interesting alternative view of their world, but this would be a minority among them, as they are generally quite set in their ways.
Stray Kids, on the other hand, would also be very concerned. Bang Chan, as the leader, would take charge. He might start asking questions to figure out what exactly happened. Felix could be bringing water or something to make Y/N feel better. Lee Know would be standing guard, making sure no further harm comes to Y/N while they are in a vulnerable state.
Y/N should have their own goals and dreams. If they're interested in becoming an Auror, that can shape their actions and decisions. Their reactions to Draco should be based on their personality. If they're a shy person, they might be more hesitant around him. And make sure their dialogue is natural. Don't make them say things that are out of character just to move the plot along. For instance, if Y/N is a studious type, they're more likely to talk about books or spells when interacting with Draco.
The Hogwarts students would be divided. Some would be in disbelief and would still hope that Harry has a good reason for joining. They might secretly support him. Others, especially those who have lost family members to the Death Eaters, would be furious and see Harry as a traitor. Harry's old enemies at Hogwarts, like Draco Malfoy, would also be confused. Draco might initially think that Harry has finally seen the 'right' side, but as he realizes Harry's true intentions (if they are good), he would be conflicted as well since he's been brought up in a Death Eater - influenced family.
The wizarding world would be in shock. Harry was seen as the 'Chosen One' to defeat Voldemort. If he joined the Death Eaters, the Order of the Phoenix would feel betrayed. They might try to rescue him or think he's been an undercover agent all along. Hogwarts would be in chaos, and students would be confused and scared.
She usually resists. Hermione is known for her strong will. So in most of these fanfictions, she'll use her intelligence and magic skills to fight back. For example, she might use clever spells to escape or mislead the Death Eaters.
Voldemort himself, of course, is the most prominent in a sense. But in the fanfiction, his relationship with the other Death Eaters could be different. He might be more distrustful or have different expectations of them. And then there's Barty Crouch Jr. He could be a major player in the fanfiction, with his skills in disguise and dark magic. His actions could drive some of the major plotlines in the fanfiction.
The Order of the Phoenix would see Harry's joining of the Death Eaters as a major setback. They would likely view it as a sign that Voldemort has become even more powerful. Dumbledore, if he were still alive, would be very concerned and would try to understand what led Harry to this decision. He would also be devising a plan to get Harry out of the clutches of the Death Eaters.
A possible motive could be self - preservation. If they believe that Voldemort's downfall is inevitable and that by saving Harry, they can gain some form of leniency from the side that opposes Voldemort. They might think that Harry has enough influence to spare their lives if they help him.