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Short stories to accompany you.. STORY-1: Falling For The Antagonist, Mr. Choi! Seeing her father getting killed right in front of her eyes, Na Ae Ra swears that she will avenge her father. 12 years later, she finds the person who killed her father, was none other than her first love, Choi Yu Shik. What will Na Ae Ra do? Will she avenge her father or not do anything? STORY-2: Love Me Harder Song Yu Qi, a high school graduate gets married to a man whom she barely knows. Without knowing much about him, she soon falls in love with him. Since then, a cute give and take relationship starts in between the two. STORY-3: The Promise Baek Ji Ah and Kang Minhyuk were living happily married for a year until, Baek Ji Ah's long-lost childhood friend, Lee In Joon appears and their married life crumbles. Will Ji Ah be able to amend her broken heart by finding love in her childhood friend's embrace or get back with her husband? STORY-4: An Unexpected Proposal Han Sora always had a crush on Lee Yi Kyung since high school and she even encourages herself to propose him on the graduation day but instead gets proposed by Yi Kyung's elder brother, Lee Junsu... Will Sora's heart melt with Junsu's flowing love? Or Does Junsu's heart gets broken into pieces? STORY-5: Love Amidst Investigation Park Ji Hyun is a detective who has been framed for killing her own brother. While running away from being caught, she meets a handsome young man, Han Seo Jun, who helps her all the time. She falls in love with him and investigates the murder of her brother. STORY-6: I Travelled Into A Comic and Made The CEO Fall For Me Son Mina is a young university students who gets body shamed for being fat and ugly. One day while reading her favorite comic, she travels into that comic world. Her soul gets swapped with the comic's female lead's body. And with that she makes the CEO fall for her.... STORY-7: I Hate You, I Love You Park Ji Sang always loved Kim Yeon-Ah but never expressed his feelings towards her and they remain friends. Due to a certain incident, Yeon-Ah slaps him and starts to hate him. Five years later, they meet again and this time Ji Sang tries his best to express his feelings towards her. STORY-8: Forbidden Relationship Despite of being married, Choi Ah-Yeong cheats behind her husband’s back. Not because he is a bad person but because she again has feelings for her ex who returned back. Will Ah-Yeong leave her husband, Jung Sang Hoon for her ex, Kang Dae Hyun? STORY-9: Feelings Rekindled Byeon Da-Jung and Yang Woo-Jin were married to one another but they divorced soon after four years. Four years later, they meet again due to some circumstances and realize the mistakes they did and that they still have feelings for one another. Will they get back with one another or go separate ways? NOTE: This book is still under progress so, I apologize to make you all wait! Thank you for your love and support! Stay safe and take care y'all!!!

A series of short stories, of different genres. Simple yet thought-provoking reads.

Looking back, I had nothing in every single life. I had been covered in the darkness, because of a single star, shining brighter in my fate. But Now... If my enemy had a hero, I had a heroine by my side... If the enemy had a powerful demon by their side, I had a descendant of angle by my side. If the enemy had a demon lord by their side, I had a Goddess by my side. If the enemy had a noble behind him, I had the princess of that country by my side. If the enemy had a king behind her back, Then I had an Empress by my side... There is nothing, I could ask for as I have a rental girlfriend by my side. Dating those beautiful ladies, made my days worth living them... But I had a mission to save a world, so guys will you read this novel of mine, filled with love, lust, action, and adventure of a boy in the Isekai world? The picture doesn't belong to me, for this competition. I hope the artist will allow, me to use it for my novel. If not, please contact me inside the novel;

A collection of stories from another word

A collection of paranormal short stories ... These stories prove that... Some things which can be beyond your imagination and are mysterious....

　We always think that if we could go back to the past, had our time again, we could make the difference and control our destiny. 　But you have to believe that all meetings and departures have their own reasons.　　 As the long years pass, we finally get used to no longer having each other, living alone in our own worlds, no longer yearning so much, and no longer feeling so many regrets. 　If one day, we meet again at a corner of the city, will we still recognize each other, the person we once loved so deeply at first sight? No one knows. We always think that if lord gives us another chance, allowing us to go back to the past, to start over, we can correct our mistakes, control our fate, and have our time again, not realizing that in the myriad of timelines, we may have already reached a fork of the destiny, we have been losing each other. Everything that will happen, will happen eventually. So let's move forward, because that's our life.

A collection of wild, weird, and wondrous tales that will intertwine with time! The world of Enverdolmal is on the edge of war as dark and menacing powers begin to make their moves from the Shadows, slowly tilting the balance of Aether -the magical energy that fuels everything in existence- in their favor.  Demons test their prison seals... Witches gather seeking chaos and anarchy... Monsters are on the march under strange and unknown banners... The long-lost Elemental Dragons are due to return... Our story is told through the eyes of approx 15 characters, starting with a knight by the name of Bastion Ridder who finds himself in the middle of it all. Garth Verlore -the famous and sprawling school where he was set to teach- falls under siege by forces that no one seemed to see coming, and he must do all that he can (while fighting alongside staff and students alike) to see to it that he doesn't become the one last knight... With classes like "Dragon Slaying 101" and "Goblin Battle Tactics" Bastion knew that this would be no small feat... It all started so well, but eventually everyone falls...Be it in love or war. Or even the classroom! Knights & Mages. Dragons & Goblins. Spirits & Demons & Witches And so very much more awaits you in this tale of triumph, chaos, love, war, betrayal, and loss. Are you ready to turn one last page? Read one last story? lose one last knight? -----

Hola queridos lectores! Quiero compartir que estoy feliz que webnovel ya haya incluido el idioma español, agradezco a quienes continúan leyendo desde el inicio y pues espero puedan regalarme comentarios para saber que les parece la novela. Es la primera que hago así que espero la disfruten al leerla tanto como yo al escribirla. Más que una historia simple de amor, hay conspiraciones, identidades secretas, traiciones y batallas, con tecnología ficticia y una protagonista que pudiera parecer débil pero es más fuerte que ninguno. Tenemos tres protagonistas masculinos, el eterno mejor amigo enamorado Carlos, el compañero de batallas Benedek y su primer amor que desapareció misteriosamente Alejandro. "El amor es importante pero las paz lo es más" Elena. ¿ quien ganara esta batalla? ¿ quien conquistará a la impredecible Elena? La imagen no es mia, derechos de autor a quien le corresponda. Gracias por leerme!!!

One night she gets drunk and mistakes the most well-known Mafia boss for a Host* and intends to sleep with him. Oh my! What should I do? Best to run away! After two years, she is working as an elevator lady who works in one of the biggest companies in China. She often gets harassed by handsome colleagues while working. “Wei! Wei! Wei! I don’t want to play, this is not fun at all!” “Finally I found her! You little brat, two years ago you ran away, two years later I swear to “eat you up”, until not even bones are left.”

These are some of my short-stories