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Is this destiny?

Is this destiny?

Sarah Hill is an introvert who does not want to attract attention. Other than mad coding skills, Sarah knows how to throw a punch. She believes that her biggest problem is the existence of the hacker Omega and her world flips upside-down when the most popular guy on campus approaches her. What does he want? Why her? (Ah, Sarah, that is only the beginning.) JoAnna Hill easily makes friends with her bubbly personality. Some call her a mad scientist, but she prefers ‘Dr. Hill’, because that is what she is. JoAnna is an excellent markswoman who can snipe out any target and she is wondering if her prince charming will ever come. Sophia Hill is the voice of reason, their pillar of support. She is a confident CEO who knows how to get what she wants. Sophia’s degree in law combined with amazing capabilities to analyze the situation and plan ahead make her the perfect strategist (to achieve a goal without ending up in jail). This is a story of three Hill sisters who are navigating through challenges while they uncover the complicated story behind their maternal side of the family. And their father is not a simple man either. Every sister is different, and so are their relationships. They all have in common: trust and belief that if they work together, anything is possible. Mature content! 18+ ***SPOILER? - START *** The story starts with a focus on the youngest sister (Sarah). After about 100 chapters, the oldest sister (Sophia) gets in the romantic spotlight. JoAnna finds herself pulled into romance last, at about 200 chapter mark. ***SPOILER? - END *** Excerpt from the novel... "Do you believe in destiny?", Sarah broke the silence. "Destiny?" Aiden didn't expect such a question. "Yes. The thing that is meant to happen, and there is nothing you can do to prevent it. And when it does happen, everything feels right." "Why would you ask me such a thing?" "Until a few weeks ago I would say that there is no such thing as destiny. That we are all masters of our lives and that everything depends on our actions, or lack of it. But I can't help but wonder: why did I not push you away? ... Why does it feel like everything will be OK as long as we are together? ... You are a piece of me that I never knew was missing. Is this destiny?" "Mmm... if that is destiny, then I approve it.", Aiden lightly kissed Sarah's shoulder and rested his chin on it. --- 1st WARNING!!! Contains descriptions of intimate scenes. If you are not comfortable with that, don’t read it! --- 2nd WARNING!!! This is my first novel! :) --- ***** I own the cover. ***** Check out my other novels: * "Accident Prone" * "Amara - Reunion" * "The Alpha's Bride" * "The Supreme Alpha"
4.9
2127 Chs
The Golden Elixir is A Star, and You Call This Cultivation?

The Golden Elixir is A Star, and You Call This Cultivation?

My name is Qi Yuan, and I am a time traveler who now holds the esteemed title of the eldest martial brother at Seven Colours Peak. I am armed with a game jade slip capable of connecting realms across the heavens, and blessed with the ability to unveil hidden information through my discerning eyes. [A seemingly ordinary blade of grass reveals secrets of a clandestine meeting between True Man Ku Mu and Empress Dashang that transpired just three days prior.] [Her name is Ruan Yixi, who appears to be your beautiful master on the surface, but she may have a deeper connection, perhaps she is even your wife.] [This is Heavenly Dao of the World, a Spiritual Object renowned for its significance in Foundation Establishment] [This is a lifeless planet, a potential vessel for the creation of a Golden Elixir]. So my road of cultivation turns gradually strange. "Heavenly Dao? A Spiritual Object for Foundation Establishment?" "So many desolate planets, all refined into Golden Elixir!" The Heavenly Dao is used as the foundation and refining stars into Golden Elixir. I am Qi Yuan, I become the origin of all things. My name is Jiang Lingsu, a fellow disciple at Seven Colours Peak. My Senior Brother is mentally ill. He is never focused on work. Nor does he like cultivation. He only loves simulation games. Senior Brother says, "Playing games is like cultivation. It can also create a world." One day, there is one more sun in the sky. I ask him what it is, he says, "That is my Golden Elixir!" This book is also titled 'Cultivation: The Jade Slip's Universe' and 'The Golden Elixir I Cultivated is a Planet,'
3.1
1183 Chs
Return To The Past: I Won't Choose Humility This Time!

Return To The Past: I Won't Choose Humility This Time!

In her previous life, as Yun Xi lay on her deathbed due to a terminal illness, her famous painter husband said to her heartlessly, “Yun Xi, let’s get a divorce. I would never marry you if I knew that your sister was the one who saved me.” Yun Xi was dumbstruck. It was actually her who saved Mo Ran! She struggled to look at her sister, Yun Lian to see what was going on. Yet, what she saw made her heart sink into her stomach. Yun Lian lowered her gaze as she said, “Sister, I’m sorry. My Brother-in-law and I truly love each other. I’ve been hiding this for so long now, and I can’t hide it any longer.” Yun Xi suddenly felt her world spin, and the past flashed through her head. Her sister had always asked her about how she saved Mo Ran in detail and constantly stood between her and Mo Ran. He gradually became more distant from her - was that all for the sake of today? Yun Xi and Yun Lian are twins, but because Yun Xi was always been better in her studies and had a better husband, both society and their parents showed their bias toward Yun Xi. However, Yun Xi would always tolerate and dote on Yun Lian, giving Yun Lian most of her opportunities, including the precious chance to go to school. Staring at her husband’s icy expression, Yun Xi dragged her sickly body to the window and jumped down. When she opened her eyes, Yun Xi realized that she was not dead. Instead, she had returned to that summer day when she was competing with Yun Lian for an opportunity to go to school. It was on this day that Yun Xi offered her most precious opportunity! Now that she was given another chance at life, Yun Xi swore to take back what was hers. Whatever Yun Lian took from her, she would have Yun Lian pay everything back! As for her ex-husband, Mo Ran, Yun Xi decided to let Yun Lian have him. Yun Xi did not want him anymore. However, the new Yun Xi, who had now become more aloof instead of her old humble self, was further loved by the world. Even that unattainable man started paying her attention?!
3.9
1020 Chs
This is us review: Kate needs a better story. What could be done to give Kate a better story?
1 answer
2024-11-30 22:47
One way to give Kate a better story could be to explore more of her personal growth outside of her weight issues. For example, her career aspirations and how she overcomes obstacles in her professional life. This would add more depth to her character.
This is us review: Kate needs a better story. Why do you think Kate's current story is not good enough?
3 answers
2024-12-01 06:13
Kate's current story might not be good enough because it seems to be overly focused on a single aspect, like her weight. It can get a bit repetitive and one - dimensional, which makes it less interesting.
The version of The Three of Us is better
1 answer
2024-09-16 20:52
There were many versions of " The Three of Us ", and each version had its own unique characteristics and style. If you want to choose one of the versions, I suggest choosing the paper version or e-book of The Three of Us for better reading and preservation. Paper edition: The Three of Us is a collection of essays by Mr. Yang Jiang. The paper edition is of high quality and easy to preserve, allowing readers to feel the beauty and profoundness of Mr. Yang Jiang's words. E-book:" The Three of Us " is the work of Mr. Yang Jiang. After digitizing, it can be easily read online and also easy to carry around to enjoy the pleasure of reading anytime and anywhere. Regardless of whether you choose a paper version or an e-book, it is recommended to choose the original version in order to better understand and feel Mr. Yang Jiang's thoughts and emotions.
What's the review of Kate Bush's The Whole Story full album?
1 answer
2024-10-05 17:19
Kate Bush's The Whole Story full album is truly remarkable. The production quality is top-notch, and the songwriting is incredibly creative. It's an album that stands the test of time.
Are there really aliens among us? A review of 'aliens among us fact or fiction books'.
2 answers
2024-12-13 02:26
It could be fact. Some of these books might present evidence like unexplained sightings or abduction stories. However, there's no conclusive scientific proof yet. So it's also likely to be fiction. The books might be just for entertainment or exploring the concept of extraterrestrial life.
Injustice: Gods Among Us Review - Graphic Novel
3 answers
2024-12-14 18:40
The 'Injustice: Gods Among Us' graphic novel is a thrilling read. It presents a dark and alternate take on the DC universe. The art style is dynamic, with detailed illustrations that bring the characters to life. The story is filled with intense battles and moral dilemmas, making it a page - turner for fans of superhero comics.
Can novels make us better humans?
1 answer
2024-10-06 22:33
Sure. Novels have the power to make us better humans by helping us develop emotional intelligence, expanding our worldview, and teaching us valuable life lessons through the stories and characters.
Give a better 40-year-old self a review
1 answer
2024-12-19 07:25
The book," A Better Self After 40," was the author's thoughts and suggestions when he was 40 years old. At this age, she began to focus more on herself. She calmed down to observe life, take care of herself, accept herself, please herself, and find new interests. Through 48 small details, she slowly left the role of " mother ", streamlined all aspects of life, let go of the obsession in her heart, and began to calmly become the protagonist of her life. This book included some lazy lifestyle techniques, new habits to cultivate, things that I've always wanted to do and finally did, and new life experiences. No matter what age you are heading to, one day, you will graduate from the role of a good wife and a good mother. Before the age of 40, he could only work hard for his family, child-rearing, marriage, and work. After the age of 40, he would no longer do it for anyone else. Everything was for the sake of living a more comfortable and comfortable life. The content of this book was close to life and suitable for women to read. There were also many fresh illustrations in the book, making it especially easy and enjoyable to read. By reading this book, you can learn to be the protagonist of life and put the focus of life on yourself. This is a kind of wisdom. Regardless of age, we should stop and think, objectively understand ourselves, and live a better life from the heart.
What is the review of the whole Scarlet Better novel?
2 answers
2024-10-03 23:00
Overall, the Scarlet Better novel offers a unique and immersive reading experience. The story is rich in detail and the writing style is captivating. However, some readers might find the pacing a bit slow in certain parts.
Can you give a brief review of Kate Mosse's latest novel?
2 answers
2024-10-29 01:26
I haven't read Kate Mosse's latest novel in full yet, but from what I've heard, it has an intriguing plot with well - developed characters.
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