The potential problems are numerous. Firstly, it goes against the values of respect for individual freedom and safety. It may also create a negative and oppressive atmosphere in the fictional world it portrays. Moreover, it could desensitize readers to real - life issues related to kidnapping and false imprisonment, which are serious crimes. Fanfic should strive to be more positive and ethical in its themes.
No. Holding someone captive is an unethical and often illegal act in real life, and promoting such themes in fanfic can be disturbing and send the wrong message.
The story could be made positive by having the men realize their mistake quickly. For instance, they might overhear the girl talking about how she was just in the wrong place at the wrong time. This makes them feel guilty and they immediately release her. Then, to make amends, they offer to help her achieve her own goals, like getting to a far - away place to reunite with her family.
Perhaps the men are part of a secret organization that believes the girl has a special power. They hold her captive to study her power. However, the girl uses her wits and kindness to make the men question their actions. In the end, they team up to use her power for good. For example, if her power is to heal, they work together to heal the sick in a war - torn area.
Well, without having read the 'holding you captive novel', it might be a thriller where the main plot revolves around someone being held against their will. It could also be a love story where one person feels 'held captive' by their love for another in an intense way. There are so many possibilities.
Luke might hold Percy captive to gain some sort of leverage. Maybe he wants to use Percy as a bargaining chip with the gods or Camp Half - Blood. He could be thinking that by having Percy in his hands, he can force the others to give in to his demands.
She could pretend to be sick or injured. This might make the kidnappers lower their guard as they deal with the situation. Then she could find a chance to escape when they are distracted.