Good fanfiction in this genre also has great dialogue. The conversations between Hermione and Ron should feel natural, like their banter in the books. It should also capture the essence of their relationship, whether it's the unspoken attraction, the friendship that turns into love, or the deep emotional connection they have.
One great 'hermione loves ron fanfiction' is 'The Unspoken Bond' on FanFiction.net. It beautifully explores their relationship with a lot of sweet and tender moments between them.
Good 'hermione loves ron fanfic' usually has well - developed characters. Hermione should still be the intelligent and strong - willed witch we know, and Ron should be his loyal and sometimes bumbling self. Their relationship development should be believable, not too rushed.
Ron is probably oblivious at first. He might not notice Harry's feelings for Hermione. He just focuses on his own relationship with Hermione. In the fanfic, Ron could be seen as a bit self - centered in terms of love in the beginning.
The exploration of their individual growth is also a theme. Ron might have to overcome his insecurities and Hermione might have to learn to be more open to her feelings for Ron. Through Ron's love confession, it's a moment of realization for both of them about their own development as well as their relationship.
There's 'Hermione's Heart for Ron'. In this fanfic, it starts with Hermione realizing her true feelings for Ron during a particularly difficult time at Hogwarts. It delves into how she tries to come to terms with her love while also dealing with all the magical chaos around them. The story is full of little details that make it feel very true to the original Harry Potter world.
Another great one is 'The Confession'. In this fanfiction, Ron's love confession to Hermione is set against the backdrop of a dangerous adventure they are on. The author does a wonderful job of showing how their relationship has developed over time and how this confession is the culmination of all those shared experiences.
Well, one key plot point could be Harry's internal struggle with his unrequited love. He might constantly be in a state of conflict, trying to hide his feelings while still being a good friend to both Hermione and Ron. Another point could be Hermione's obliviousness to Harry's feelings as she is so focused on Ron. And Ron, he might be completely unaware of the whole love triangle situation, just going about his normal life, which adds to the complexity of the story.
One possible story could be that in these 10 months, Ron and Hermione are on a mission together. They face many challenges that test their relationship. Maybe they have to deal with a dark wizard threat and in the process, their bond deepens as they rely on each other's strengths.
It shows Harry's pain. He loves Hermione, but she doesn't return his feelings. This is a classic case of unrequited love. Harry might be constantly sad or jealous when he sees Hermione with Ron. It makes the readers feel for him.