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Mr. CEO, Your Wife is A Hidden BOSS!

Mr. CEO, Your Wife is A Hidden BOSS!

Five years ago, Qiao Nian was schemed against by her sister, Qiao Xin. After spending a night with a stranger, Qiao Nian got pregnant. She did not know who the father of the child was, and eventually gave birth to a stillborn. Under the machinations of her mother and sister, Qiao Nian was stripped off of her shares in Qiao Group and sent to a mental hospital. Five years later, her younger sister, Qiao Xin, was going to be married off to the Second Young Master of the Gu family. He was rumored to be extremely ugly. On the day he was born, the doctor predicted that he would not live past twenty years old. Her mother could not bear to see Qiao Xin marry such a person and thought of Qiao Nian, who was still locked in the mental hospital. Overnight, Qiao Nian was taken out of the hospital to replace Qiao Xin in her marriage into the Gu family. Her mother said, "It's a good thing that Qiao Nian, this good-for-nothing, can replace Xin'er to be a living widow in the Gu family. If Xin'er were to marry into that family, I would be heartbroken." Qiao Xin said, "Mom, don't say that about Sister. If it weren't for her, I wouldn't know what to do. I'm just worried that Sister wouldn't agree." Her father said, "Xin'er, you're too kind. Have you forgotten how Qiao Nian slandered you five years ago? She has no self-restraint. She got pregnant before marriage and even gave birth to a stillborn child. We're treating her well enough by letting her marry someone from the prestigious Gu family! What right does she have to be picky?" Qiao Nian sneered. Back then, the scheme against her had only succeeded due to a freak combination of factors, causing her to suffer. She was going to get back at all of them! Everyone thought that her actions were borne from a combination of a loser's mentality and mental illness, but little did they know that this marriage would be a strong union as impactful as Mars crashing into Earth! Taking advantage of her brilliant skills in medicine, Qian Nian made various trashy people and scumbags eat their words. In the blink of an eye, her multiple identities shocked the world as each of them got exposed. It turned out that she was rich enough to rival a country! Later on, Second Young Master Gu placed a pair of Qiao Nian's miniature clones in front of her. Faced with these two children who resembled her and Gu Zhou, Qiao Nian blinked in shock. "When did I give birth to your children?"
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Editing Your First Person Short Story: Tips and Tricks
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2024-11-29 15:46
First, read through your story carefully. Look for any grammar or spelling mistakes. This is a basic but crucial step. Then, focus on the voice. Since it's a first - person story, make sure the narrator's voice is consistent throughout. For example, if the narrator is supposed to be a young child, the language should be simple and naive. Also, check the flow of the story. Are the events in a logical order? If not, you may need to rearrange some parts.
What Are the Common Mistakes to Avoid When Editing Your First Person Short Story?
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2024-11-29 16:47
A big mistake is not establishing the narrator's personality clearly enough. The reader should have a good sense of who the narrator is from the start. Also, not paying attention to the pacing. If the story moves too quickly or too slowly, it can lose the reader's interest. And don't forget about the setting. In a first - person story, the narrator's perception of the setting is important, so describe it in a way that fits the character. For example, a detective might notice details that an ordinary person would miss.
Editing first draft short story: Tips and Tricks
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2024-12-14 03:41
Trim the excess. First drafts often have a lot of unnecessary words or descriptions. If a paragraph can be summed up in a few sentences without losing the essence, do it. This makes the story more concise and engaging.
What are the essential steps in editing your first novel?
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2024-11-03 01:43
First, read it through carefully to check for overall plot consistency. Make sure the story flows well from start to finish. Second, look at the characters. Ensure their development is believable and their actions are in line with their personalities. Third, check grammar and punctuation. Simple mistakes can distract readers. Fourth, pay attention to the pacing. If it's too slow in some parts, it might bore the readers.
Editing first draft short story: How to Improve the Plot?
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2024-12-14 08:39
First, check if the plot has a clear beginning, middle, and end. If it seems muddled, try to identify the main events and reorder them. For instance, if the climax occurs too early, it might be better to build up more tension before it.
Should You Publish Your First Novel Without Professional Editing?
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2024-12-01 12:55
It's a bad idea. Even if you think your writing is great, a professional editor can offer a fresh perspective. They can spot plot inconsistencies, weak character development, and other issues that you might miss. It's an investment in making your first novel the best it can be.
Tell Me Your First Person Wedgie Story.
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2024-11-19 12:27
I was at a sports event. I was sitting on the bleachers and when I stood up quickly to cheer, my pants got stuck on the bench and gave me a wedgie. I was so red - faced. I had to quickly sit back down and fix it while trying to act normal.
How to tell your story in the first person effectively?
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2024-10-17 02:43
Just be yourself and describe your experiences and feelings directly. Let your true voice come through.
What does the first person in your story mean?
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2024-10-16 14:25
The first person in a story usually means the narrator is a character within the story and tells it from their own perspective.
How to introduce your character in a first-person story?
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2024-10-13 16:15
One way is to describe your character's appearance and personality traits as they look in the mirror or reflect on themselves. Also, mention a memorable incident from their past that shaped them. These combined can provide a good introduction.
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