critic reviews for divergent book novel

Transmigrating only to end up in the body of a notorious and blacklisted dated movie queen? Accused of bribery, plastic surgery, being a mistress and diva, and even having sex for favors? The number one spoiled and domineering queen returns with a vengeance! To kick out the movie kings and queens and to dominate the entertainment industry! Nothing will stand in the way of the empress to get rid of that bastard emperor—not even transmigration! But… F*ck! What the hell? That darn husband of hers is the spitting image of that bastard emperor…

*This work has been reuploaded and edited please check new* In a universe shaped by an enigmatic entity known as the Oracle, a singular species emerges: the Dyyx. Born to fulfill the grand cosmic process called 'The Cycle Of Evolution', the Dyyxs wield the destiny of planets. The Cycle Of Evolution, a universal phenomenon, marks a planet's ascent to a new era through evolution. Orchestrated by the Oracle, the process mandates the arrival of two Dyyxs, reincarnated without memory, on the chosen planet. Guided by an unknown force, they tread distinct paths: one as the protagonist, the other as the antagonist. Their clash is destined, with good triumphing over evil, and the protagonist steering the world towards its destined future. But for X-204, a Dyyx awakening with fragmented memories, fate takes an unexpected twist. He, alongside counterpart Y-204, is thrust into pods of uncertainty, bound for Earth. Amidst the journey, a glitch resurrects X-204's memories, unshackling the truth of his creation, the relentless cycle, and the Oracle's manipulation. As revelations flood his consciousness, X-204 confronts a pivotal decision—to break free from the Oracle's puppet strings and carve a destiny uniquely his own. *** I really hope this novel gets a lot of follow up this time, as I would really like to continue with it. and I also hope you the readers enjoy it as well. the story might start off at quite a considerable slow pace but please bear. stories with enough screen time to small things always turn out to be the best. patience is a virtue that pays off and I can promise this will eventually pay off. and yes there's a villain tag, that's because the storyline actually revolves around two mcs one the protagonist and the other the antagonist although we start off with the protagonist.

In a universe shaped by an enigmatic entity known as the Oracle, a singular species emerges: the Dyyx. Born to fulfill the grand cosmic process called 'The Cycle Of Evolution', the Dyyxs will determine the destiny of planets. The Cycle Of Evolution, a universal phenomenon, marks a planet's ascent to a new era through evolution. Orchestrated by the Oracle, the process mandates the arrival of two Dyyxs, reincarnated without memory, on the chosen planet. Guided by an unknown force, they tread distinct paths: one as the protagonist, the other as the antagonist. Their clash is destined, with good triumphing over evil, and the protagonist steering the world towards its destined future. But for X-204, a Dyyx awakening with fragmented memories, fate takes an unexpected twist. He, alongside counterpart Y-204, is thrust into pods of uncertainty, bound for Earth. Amidst the journey, a glitch resurrects X-204's memories, unshackling the truth of his creation, the relentless cycle, and the Oracle's manipulation. As revelations flood his consciousness, X-204 confronts a pivotal decision—to break free from the Oracle's puppet strings and carve a destiny uniquely his own. ps. my naming skills are not top notch, but in my defense everything including the bad names have a meaning which would be revealed in later chaps. the story def starts slow but picks up after Stares goes to the academy

Saranie is a woman who grew up as an orphan. Then she fought in a war. It left her alone to fight at the end. After her introduction, I write different ideas and throw Saranie in those situations. I wanted to give myself a place to write random ideas that come to mind. I do have cross overs with my other stories, but most are just self contained.

This story is about Ziv. A boy who has lived with technology, his parents, and lots of reading material. After his introduction, I write different ideas and throw Ziv in those situations. I wanted to give myself a place to write random ideas that come to mind. I do have cross overs with my other stories, but most are just self contained. Some ideas that I have made so far: The two cross over stories, LoH and EMW. Ziv has control over two bodies A time travel story. A grid like world. A one shot based around fighting/combat. Ziv takes over a body on an injured person - though there is a warning for that chapter. Nothing bad, but there are implications that most people (myself included) find disgusting. I wrote it in good faith though. Ziv becomes an AI. A combat Story.

[Lucas Level 08] [Adam- Level 01] [Mark - Level 01] What the... Why am I seeing names and levels?" [Your true father - Level 100000..??] "What the hell is going on?" A young man feeling shocked and confused as he looked at unknown places and people. ********************************************* Asterion, or Ash, was a scammer and low-life person who had a meaningless life in a futuristic world filled with destruction and malice. But one day his life took a turn as a mysterious group of guys appeared, and he lost his life in an escape. With that, he thought finally his shitty life was over. But fate or something more mysterious had other plans for him as he awakened in a new world that was filled with secrets and mysteries that seemed to be deeply linked to his old world. Follow Ash's journey as he awakens mysterious power and finds the truth about his past and present life in a world that appears to have unspoken secrets and have an unimaginable connection with his life.

Written for readers as a magical fantasy adventure where readers get to choose what kind of story they want to read, will you discover the truth behind the universe or delve in becoming a god of slaughter, the possibilities will not end there. It’s time to let you decide.

Brahk, a man forced into a harsh life. He finds the things he can do and remembers the past that was taught to him. Thinking of those that made it possible. That past caught up to him as he did the same as those who helped his mother. After his introduction, I write different ideas and throw Brahk in those situations. I wanted to give myself a place to write random ideas that come to mind. I might have cross overs with my other stories, but most are just self contained.

Elliot was the most brilliant geneticist of his age, but a tragic accident puts all of his skills to the test just to survive. He awakens into a weird and wonderful world that wasted the wonderful advances he made for humanity, and now they are on the brink of destruction. Can a lone scientist save the future of Earth?

Who says that the main character recieving the System Would be invincible? Who says that they would reach the peak of their life ? If anyone were to say this in front of , Arthur was sure that he would fight at least 69 round with the person . Sigh. He too thought that he would reach the peak when he received the System a few years back but if he would be invincible how the F*ck he died getting hit by the legendary Truck-Sama. Or is the System 'Weak' in front of the Mighty? Arthur had nothing but curse for the F*cking Cruel World.