Well, a bad first draft in a novel is acceptable because it serves as a foundation. Think of it as building a house. The first draft is the rough structure where you figure out the basic plot, characters, and settings. It gives you something to work with and build upon in subsequent drafts.
Of course, writing a novel could be done by submitting a manuscript. This was a common way of writing. Manuscript was a way to record thoughts and ideas. It allowed the author to better express his thoughts and feelings, and at the same time, it allowed the readers to better understand the plot and characters of the novel. If a lot of ideas and inspirations were generated in the process of writing a novel, they could be recorded in the manuscript to continuously improve and modify the novel. In addition, submitting the manuscript could also allow the author and readers to better communicate and promote the development and progress of the novel's creation. If they were willing, they could share their manuscripts with other authors or readers to communicate and share ideas with them. This would also help their works gain more recognition and improvement.
It can be quite rough. A first draft is often full of plot holes, inconsistent characters, and grammar mistakes.
In a bad first draft novel, often there is inconsistent writing style. Sometimes it's too formal, other times too casual. There may also be an overuse of clichés. And not enough world - building. If it's a fantasy or science - fiction novel, for example, the setting may not be well - defined. Additionally, the dialogue can be stilted and unnatural.
A bad first draft can be beneficial as it allows for total freedom of expression. You can write without self - censorship, which helps in exploring all possible ideas.
Often, the first draft of a novel is far from perfect. It might lack proper structure, have weak dialogue, or not convey the intended emotions effectively. But that's normal - it's just the starting point for improvement.
Sometimes writing bad fiction can be a learning process. It helps you figure out what doesn't work and grow as a writer.
The main reason is that a first draft is mainly a raw expression. Rereading it frequently can limit your creativity and prevent you from exploring new and better directions for the novel.
First, read it through objectively. Look for major plot holes, inconsistent characters, or unclear themes. Then, start by fixing the plot structure. Make sure the story has a clear beginning, middle, and end. For example, if your first draft jumps around too much, re - order the events to create a more logical flow.
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Author: The Whitest Crow The following is a detailed introduction of these novels: 1."Book of Troubled Times": A f * cking new novel. It's still the same familiar flavor. Classic saintess, classic strong woman, weak man, picking up girls. Classic treasures weren't important. Beautiful women were the most important. Although it's really well written, I'm still reading it now... But I always felt that some of the descriptions were a little pretentious. Maybe it was the voice-over part, but it didn't affect it. Give 8 points 2."Spirit Realm Traveler": -[Continuing-]--Top 3500 likes next time! System, Infinite Style, Dungeon, Strange The newspaper seller's new work was different from the subject matter he had written before. It was a new attempt. (But it was quite similar to what his writer friends wrote.) The main character's brother mysteriously disappeared, and the main character received the card he sent. Then, he could enter the Spirit Realm, complete the dungeon, obtain rewards, and level up himself. At the same time, he would search for the truth of the world through exploration. The setting of this book was not bad. The main character needed to clear the Spirit Realm dungeon and find clues from these strange maps to avoid being hunted down. The main character was set to have hypermnesia, which was a cheat. It allowed him to remember many details of the past, but it was also a double-edged sword that would lead to negative effects. The other character settings were also quite interesting, such as a gentleman boss who spoke in a translator's accent. Although this book contained supernatural elements, the author himself said that this book would not focus on supernatural elements, so it would not be particularly scary. Moreover, the style of selling newspapers was humorous, and the style of the book was relaxed. Moreover, the newspaper seller would also make jokes in supernatural places, so it would not be particularly scary. Overall, the book was excellent so far. There were no logical errors, and the plot and worldview were relatively complete. However, it was still a seedling after all. He wanted to see if the author could write a better architecture. 3.<<The Tang's Table>> The people of the world and the affairs of the world are just the dishes on the table of the Tang people. Although the original ingredients had the original flavor of food, Yun Chu still believed that the most delicious food still needed to be divided, cooked, and handled. The food that was finally served on the table was the food that most suited the stomach of the Tang people. Steaming, braising, stir-frying, stewing... There were many cooking methods in the kitchen. Whether it was Goguryeo, the Turks, Tubo, Tuyuhun, Xue Yantuo, Tiele…or even whales, tigers, sharks, and hungry wolves, the Great Tang was a furnace that could cook them all into peerless delicacies… In addition to Li Zhi, Wu Wei, Zhangsun Wuji, Chu Suiliang, Li Ji, Cheng Yaojin, and other peerless seasonings, there would always be one thing that you would never forget, regardless of color, fragrance, or taste. Yun Chu hoped that she would definitely have a seat at such a luxurious banquet! Now, the delicious food had been cooked. Yun Chu laid out the napkin, picked up the deer knife, and closed her eyes. She was ready to enjoy an unprecedented feast to satisfy her hungry stomach. 4."King of Familiars": 9 points Who would be the undisputed king of familiars in this new era? He had read many beast taming books, but there were not many books as detailed and non-toxic as this one. All kinds of strange exotic beasts emerged one after another. It was really dazzling and exciting. 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Whether it was fantasy, genius, daily life, or multiple female leads, this novel could satisfy the different needs of readers. The heroine in the story had a distinct image and different personalities, which was unforgettable. The author's writing was smooth and the plot was complicated, making it very enjoyable to read. All in all,"Wait, Heroine" was a rare masterpiece. Whether it was a fantasy, genius, or multi-female protagonist reader, it was not to be missed. 8:"Mantang Colorful": The author's new book, historical text, the opening is very exciting 9."Hidden Dead Corner":"Hidden Dead Corner" is a fascinating novel. Although the pace is not fast, it is not boring. The story began with an ordinary person obtaining a special ability. He transformed and grew step by step in the foreign world, reaching the extreme. The plot was compact and fascinating, giving people a lot of inspiration. Compared to the previous books, this book's cheat was relatively slow, but the plot was still compact and interesting. The author's update speed was also very fast. The settings were clear, and the protagonist's personality was also very attractive. Overall, this book was a highly recommended work. Final Divine Duty: Average 3 Stars After the explosion of technology, humans stepped into the interstellar era. More and more unknown life forms were discovered, but everything was crushed by the power of technology. Everything could be measured by data, and everything could be analyzed by data. Genetic warriors, cyborgs, and intelligent life forms were the trend. Let's see how a young man can ascend to the peak of martial arts and reverse the Connate Realm to achieve the body of a Fiendgod. "Beyond Time":"Beyond Time" was a particularly good novel. It was a new book with a big ear and was also the last of the trilogy. This book is not just a novel. It inspires people to think about the difference between life and death, and what is waiting for us outside of time. This was Er Gen's sixth novel after "The Rebel Immortal","Seeking the Demon","I Want to Seal the Heavens","One Thought of Eternity", and "Three Inches of Humanity". The theme of the book was heavy, but the author's writing was excellent, making people immersed in it. Although the quality of the later chapters needed to be improved, overall, Beyond Time was a novel worthy of recommendation. "This Game Is Too Realistic":"Sanjiang's recommended novel for testing poisons" Ranking index: [Tagged: Wasteland, Behind-the-scenes, Farming Construction] The protagonist transmigrated to the apocalyptic wasteland world and unlocked the sanctuary system. He could summon players from the world before he transmigrated and develop in the foreign world. The author was a god, and the writing, plot, and setting were all quite normal. 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The sun in the sky was also destroyed by the natural disaster. After 100 years of darkness, humans paid a huge price to create an artificial sun to bring light back to the world. The darkness would breed terrifying creatures, and only the fire energy could protect humans. Therefore, everyone had to be angry at night.🔥 There were no stars in this world, but there was the Spiritual Realm, subspace, and the deep sea. The author's imagination was very big, and there were many secrets in his worldview. As the protagonist explored, he slowly deciphered them. The main characters and supporting characters were all intelligent, and those who liked to decipher the code could not be missed. He wasn't sure if there was a female lead, but there were quite a lot of girls, and they weren't ambiguous. The female character was created quite well. It was worth a look! The protagonist has three views. I guess the follow-up should be to clear all kinds of evil cultists in the foreign world and lead the survivors to build a new world. 19."Cultivation in the Chaos of the Demonic Martial World":"Cultivation in the Chaos of the Demonic Martial World" is a fascinating novel. The author used a unique perspective and creativity to combine immortal cultivation and the chaotic world of demonic martial arts to create a shocking story. After the protagonist Fang Xi transmigrated to another world, she displayed a different mentality from the cultivation world, as well as a firm determination to pursue the Dao.🐶The story was filled with philosophy and inspiration, making people ponder their own path of Dao. In addition, the author's mysterious calamity also left a deep impression on people. Compared to this novel, it was more refined and fresh. Overall, this was a work that made people's eyes light up and was worth recommending. "Who told him to cultivate!" It's funny, but it has a more rigorous setting. This kind of story should be like this. The simple fun and the rigorous and serious style are not attractive You can read these novels on Qidian Chinese Network.
The first draft is often more of a rough outline of the story. It might have plot holes, underdeveloped characters, and basic writing. The second draft, on the other hand, starts to refine things. Characters become more complex and believable. Plot holes are filled, and the overall writing quality improves. For example, in my first draft, I just got the basic story down, but in the second draft, I added details to the main character's backstory to make their actions more understandable.