At first, Draco might mock Harry a bit out of habit. But as Harry reveals more about the Dursleys, like how he was locked in a cupboard, had to do all the chores, and was constantly belittled, Draco's attitude could change. He might realize that Harry's home life was far from the idyllic picture he had in his head. This could lead to a transformation in their relationship. Draco could become less hostile and more understanding. He might even try to help Harry in his own Draco - like way, such as by getting him some better - quality school supplies that Harry couldn't afford because of the Dursleys' stinginess.
Draco might be initially skeptical. But as Harry goes into details, he could become more empathetic.
The wizarding world would likely be in shock. Harry was seen as a hero, and this act would completely change their perception of him. Some might think he was finally getting revenge for all the abuse he endured, but many would condemn his actions as murder is still a serious crime in the wizarding world.
They would likely be disgusted. The Dursleys are so anti - magic that any form of fan - created stories about the magical world would be abhorrent to them.
The Dursleys' reaction would be complex. Vernon would be enraged and might even try to burn any fanfiction he found. Petunia would be conflicted. Part of her would be disgusted, but a small part might be a bit curious as she has some connection to the wizarding world through Lily. Dudley might be more interested than his parents, especially if the fanfiction had some action or adventure that appealed to his more adventurous side.
Maybe it was an accident. Like a wrong Floo Powder destination or some kind of misfired spell that landed Draco right at the Dursleys' doorstep just as Harry was there.
They would be devastated. Harry has many friends and allies. People like Hermione and Ron would be heartbroken and would probably seek revenge. The Hogwarts faculty would also be deeply affected. Dumbledore, if he's still alive in the fanfiction, would feel a great sense of guilt for not protecting Harry better. There might be a split in the wizarding community, some believing the Dursleys were acting on their own, others suspecting a darker conspiracy.
They'd probably be horrified. The Dursleys are very much against the idea of magic, and fanfiction might introduce even wilder ideas about the wizarding world.
Hermione would be heartbroken. She would probably try to find out the exact cause of Harry's death, suspecting the Dursleys' negligence or worse. Ron would be furious with the Dursleys and would want justice. Dumbledore would be deeply saddened as he had placed so much hope in Harry. The Weasley family would also be in mourning, having considered Harry as one of their own. And Voldemort would be triumphant, thinking that his greatest obstacle was removed.
Draco would probably be extremely angry. He might feel a deep sense of hurt and betrayal, especially if he considered Harry a friend or at least an acquaintance he could trust. He could start plotting revenge against Harry, using his own cunning and Slytherin skills to make Harry's life difficult at Hogwarts.
Draco would likely be disdainful at first. He has a high opinion of himself and might not like how some fanfictions depict him. Harry might be more curious and open to it, as he's always been more accepting of different ideas.
Draco might immediately become defensive. He would probably try to shield Hermione from his father's wrath at first. He could also be filled with fear, knowing how strict and unforgiving his father can be.