How does Snape react when he finds Hermione crying in the fanfiction?

He may show a rare moment of kindness. Given his own past traumas and experiences, he might empathize with Hermione on some level. He could offer her some words of wisdom or even some form of magical assistance to help her get better.

She probably comforts him right away. Hermione is a very empathetic person. She might give him a big hug and let him cry on her shoulder.

She might be initially shocked. After all, Draco is usually seen as this tough Slytherin. But then she could feel sympathy. For instance, she might offer him a handkerchief without saying much at first.

He might immediately go into a protective mode. He could use his potions knowledge to quickly make a healing draught for her. After all, Snape is very skilled in potions, and Hermione being hurt would likely trigger his instinct to help.

Often, Harry will offer her a handkerchief or a tissue if there is one available. He might also put his arm around her in a comforting gesture. In 'The Common Room Crisis' fanfic, he does just that and then stays with her, listening intently as she pours out her feelings. He is patient and understanding, which is in line with his character in the original books. He tries to make her laugh or at least smile by sharing a joke or a funny memory. This shows his deep friendship and care for Hermione.

Sirius would probably be very concerned. He might immediately ask her what's wrong and offer her a handkerchief to dry her tears. He has a bit of a wild side, but he also has a big heart, especially when it comes to those he cares about or sees as in need of help.

Snape would likely be shocked and then enraged. Harry is supposed to be the hero of the wizarding world, and seeing him drunk would be a huge disappointment. He would most likely drag Harry to his office, lecture him about propriety and the expectations placed on him as a wizard, and probably assign some form of punishment like a long detention. But as he observes Harry more closely during this time, he might start to wonder what drove Harry to this and if there are deeper issues that need to be addressed.

Snape might be suspicious at first. He might think it's some sort of trick or part of a bigger plot. However, as he observes Hermione more closely and realizes the genuineness of her situation, his attitude could gradually change to one of reluctant assistance. He might even offer some words of wisdom, albeit in his typical sarcastic way, to help Hermione regain her strength.

He is often very suspicious. He might immediately think it's some kind of trick by the Marauders or their descendants. He'll likely try to figure out how to use it to his advantage against those he dislikes.

She might be initially defensive. Hermione is a proud and independent character. So, when Snape finds out about her arm, she could be worried that he'll use it against her in some way, like taking away house points or using it as an excuse to give her extra work.