The setting can play a role in showing the betrayal and hurt. Imagine a scene where they are all in a familiar place, like the Pokémon Center they used to frequent together. But now, because of Ash's actions, there's a coldness in the air. Haruka and Dawn are sitting at a table, looking dejected, while Ash tries to approach them but they shrink away, indicating the deep hurt and the sense of betrayal they feel.
It could be portrayed through their interactions. For instance, if Ash betrays them, their facial expressions when they see him next could show the hurt. Haruka might look away with a pained expression, and Dawn could have tears in her eyes. Their words could also be sharp and accusatory, like 'How could you do this to us, Ash?'
In fanfiction, a story of Ash, Haruka (May in the English version), and Dawn could involve betrayal and hurt in many ways. For example, perhaps Ash makes a promise to both Haruka and Dawn about their Pokémon journey together, like he'll always be there to support them in battles and training. But then, he might break that promise by suddenly leaving them for a more 'glamorous' opportunity in another region without any prior notice. This would make them feel betrayed and hurt, as they relied on him not just as a friend but also as a partner in their Pokémon adventures.
When writing about Ash, Haruka and Greninja's betrayal in fanfiction, you can start with a normal day in their journey. Then, something unexpected happens that leads to Greninja's change of heart. You need to build up the tension and drama. Use dialogue effectively to show the conflict between the characters. For instance, the conversations between Ash and Greninja when the betrayal occurs. And Haruka can be the mediator or the one who takes action to fix things. Also, think about the setting and how it can affect the story. A spooky forest or a mysterious cave might add to the atmosphere of betrayal.
Well, they could be betrayed by a new acquaintance in a strange town they visit during their travels. This new person could pretend to be friendly, but then steal their Pokemon or important items.
The writer can also use flashbacks. Show the good times Ash, Haruka, and Hikari had before the betrayal. Then contrast it with the current situation where there is tension and mistrust. This will make the betrayal more impactful for the readers as they can see how far the relationships have fallen.
One possible scenario is that Greninja is tricked into believing that Ash is endangering its kind. So it decides to turn on Ash. Haruka, on the other hand, having known Ash for a long time, might try to convince Greninja of Ash's true nature. However, Greninja's loyalty is so shaken that it doesn't listen easily. In the end, Ash has to prove his worth and friendship to Greninja all over again.
The antagonist could be a powerful and devious Team Rocket member who has infiltrated the Kalos and Alola regions. This member could manipulate Haruka, perhaps by blackmailing her with something from her past in Kalos. In Alola, the Team Rocket member uses Haruka to get to Ash, making her betray Ash without really wanting to.
Well, one possible plot could be that in the Kalos region, Ash makes a new powerful rival. Haruka, being in Kalos for some reason, gets influenced by this rival's charm and power. In Alola, Ash discovers that Haruka has been secretly helping this rival against him, thus feeling betrayed. Maybe the rival promised Haruka something she couldn't resist, like a rare Pokémon or a chance to become a top - tier trainer in a different way.
Communication is key. Ash could realize his mistake and sit down with Dawn to have an honest conversation about why he acted the way he did. He can apologize sincerely and promise to never let it happen again. Dawn, being the understanding person she is, might forgive him.
One possible plot could be that Ash discovers Haruka and Hikari have been secretly working with a rival trainer. They've been sharing Ash's training secrets in an attempt to make the rival more successful. Ash feels betrayed because he thought they were his friends and trusted them with his strategies.
Another interesting topic could be Ash Haruka's family background. You could delve into their family's history, how it has influenced them, and any secrets or traditions within the family. This would add depth to the character and create an engaging fanfiction story.