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"I'm not going to let him take you away from me again!! Not in this lifetime or even the next one and the next! You can only be mine! Only mine!" ... If you were given a chance to return ten years back in time, what would you do? In every dramatic story, the wronged and scorned MC would definitely wish to spend that chance to rise again as someone smarter, wittier and stronger to seek success and revenge. That is a given. However, for Luo Xiaolei, the world rotates clockwise for her. In her previous life, Luo Xiaolei was the badass avenger. She spent her youth climbing up to the top, reclaiming what was supposed to be hers and destroying the people who tortured her when she was young, mercilessly taking revenge on the people responsible for her mother’s death. She was a survivor. However, in the end, when she finally succeeded in attaining both her revenge and goals, just when she thought that it was time for her happy ending, on her wedding night, the cycle of revenge continued and another avenger rose to take her life. In the end, she was cornered until she fell off the veranda. But she didn’t die. She miraculously returned to ten years ago. She was given the chance to re-live her life again- what will she do? Will she take the path of revenge all over again? ___ Yu Chen, the man dubbed as 'the devil' of the business world and rumored to be heartless and ruthless was the type of man in every girl's dream. He was gorgeous as hell, ultra rich and powerful, but he was rumored to be bent because of his dislike to women. But one night, a girl finally caught his attention. He decided to pursue her because he thought it was boring to get her by force. However, before he could even begin to do anything, the girl appeared before him and suddenly proposed to him. .... Thus, the pursue game, no, the pursue war began. *** Instagram @kazzenlx.x This author's other book: > I Love You, Monster > Hellbound With You *** *cover is mine so don't use it. Art by @azihidalgo

“Commander Lu, there are rumors that we are sleeping together, we have a fling!” He looked up from under the blanket and slowly got up. “What do you want from me?” “Deny it, say it’s fake, stop it from spreading…” He pushed her against the wall, blocking her mouth by a rough kiss. “Mrs. Lu, we have to substantiate the rumor.” Before she was born again, what she had been doing was staying away from him! After she was born again, what she always wanted to do was give him offsprings! Lu Xingzhi strived for two personal mottos his entire life: First, it was illegal to undermine military marriage. Two, Jiang Yao was his in this eternity, till death do they part.

# GAMEALTERNATEWORLD # RELAXING # PRIEST In that year, the entire world mutated. The game descended into reality while demonic catastrophes rampaged. For the sake of survival, everyone had to pick up a job class and level up their skills frantically. They worked hard to be more powerful. Lin Ye acquired the special talent of Reversing. He could reverse and strengthen any effect that was targeted at the host. For instance, he could turn damage into healing and buffing into debuffing. As such, he changed his job class and became a priest. He challenged an opponent, “Come at me! Attack me with any of your forbidden curses or divine techniques. I will admit defeat even if I lose a bit of blood.” He then said, “So, your attack has no effect on me? It’s my turn to attack now. Healing Spell!” [Notification: you attacked your opponent with a healing spell and caused 100 million points of critical damage. The other party has been afflicted with the negative status effects of anti-treatment, poison, burn, silence and fatigue.] Lin Ye’s opponent was befuddled.

Him - "You took away my first kiss, you have to be responsible for it" Her - "That was my first kiss too Senior. Am I asking you to be responsible?" Him - "Ask me... I am waiting" Her - "Shut up, get away otherwise I will call my brother" Him - "I am sure he will support his friend, atleast for this" Her - "You- BROTHER" Bro - "Yes my lovely sister" Her - "Brother this friend of yours is asking me to be responsible for his first kiss" Bro - "Serene I taught you since we were young that we should be responsible for our deeds" Her - "But that was just an accident, you told me too, that I shouldn't be bother with it!" Bro - "Well I didn't knew it was him" Him - "Love can you stop getting angry" Her - "Who is your love!!" Him - "Except you, no one was, no one is, no one will and no one is allowed to be." Her - "Ahhh... Don't talk to me." (Not a part of story but how the character is designed and how story it would be.) A love story between two college students Serene and Soham. Serene's childhood was messed up because of her struggled childhood with her brothers in orphanage. And Soham's life was too peaceful that it irritates him. There first encounter was not good but the last will be sweetest. There story doesn't have those lots of up and down in relation or life but it do have some spice. This story isn't like FL settings up an empire from scratch or anything related to business or revenge or creating her identity to show to the world (because she already have everything) but a cute love story with some love hate relation initially and then about persuading someone to accept him. This is more or less all about love. How a egoistic man fell in love with her who don't even give a damn about his presence even though they both are each others first kiss. ML hated her for snatching away his first kiss but in span of time, he was the most grateful person in the world for having that moment with her. But he wants her to be around him only... But she didn't even recognized him as a acquaintance in her life, leave, not even a human being relate to her in her life... poor him.... Initially it was love hate and later it was love in the air. Initial chapters will be little fast to show her and her siblings love for each other. Later it will be cute little love story. Hope you will like it. If you can than just try 10 to 15 chapters. Might you like it #I am writing another book too... please check out... OPPOSITES ATTRACT MY LOVE... #English is not my first language. And I can't afford to say it as my second one either, so don't be pissed by it. It is at least bearable. #Cover photo doesn't belong to me.

Bagaimana rasanya menjadi seorang putri, menikah dengan pangeran impian? Ternyata...kenyataan tak seindah buku cerita. Life isn't a fairytale. Itulah yang dirasakan Alesha, gadis 18 tahun yang polos suatu saat bertemu dengan pangeran idamannya, Pangeran George, putra Raja William. Seorang pangeran tulen dari Inggris. Keduanya jatuh cinta seiring berjalannya waktu akan tetapi... Sang pangeran sudah bertunangan? Tunangannya benci Alesha! Tak cukup sampai disitu, ibunda George juga tak menyukainya! Meski banyak tentangan dan godaan, keduanya berhasil menikah dan hidup bahagia...tidak untuk selamanya Lolita, sahabat dekat George yang miskin suatu hari muncul dan menyita semua waktu George Pernikahan kedua sejoli semakin diambang kehancuran. Akankah keduanya berhasil mempertahankan pernikahan mereka atau justru...kandas begitu saja? Apakah alasan dibalik perhatian George pada Lolita dan dapatkah Alesha menerima kenyataan ini? Jalan menuju kebahagiaan kekal seperti di dongeng"...ternyata penuh duri. Still, I Love You Prince... ****** Warning 21++ Diharapkan kebijakannya dalam memilah novel yang sesuai. Cerita ini berisi adegan dewasa jadi sangat dilarang bagi yang belum pantas. Nafasnya memburu, jantungnya berdetak kencang, badannya gemetar, keringat dinginnya mulai bercucuran melihat sosok tinggi yang ada didepannya. Dia tidak percaya pada penglihatannya, sosok itu pun semakin mendekat kearahnya dan dengan gerakan yang sangat cepat tapi lembut sosok itu menekankan badannya ke tubuhnya yang masih membeku shock itu. Sosok itu kemudian meraih kedua tangannya dan memposisikannya keatas kepala. Dengan tatapan penuh gairah yang sudah tak tertahan lagi dia melumat bibir ranum seksinya seakan tidak ada lagi hari esok.... fb #Asya ardenia.

" What else do you want from me Mei Ling? I love you and I do every fucking thing possible to show it why can't you just let me in?" "Teach me to hate you" "What?" "After all you've done you want me to love you? Fine then you won,I love you but I swear with every drop of blood in me , with each strand of hair I'm going to change that love to hate...it's a promise" she pushed him off her body dragging the sheets along with her leaving the man naked in bed as he painfully stared at her retreating figure letting out a loud curse. P.s: this is not my cover