In this type of fanfiction, Hermione could reject Harry because she feels that their values don't align completely. For example, Harry might be more inclined towards using brute force or traditional wizarding methods in some situations, while Hermione is a firm believer in using knowledge and research - based solutions. She might also be worried about the public attention that would come with being in a relationship with Harry, the famous Boy Who Lived. The pressure of being in the spotlight as his partner could be overwhelming for her, so she rejects him.
Well, it might be that Hermione has seen Harry's impulsive side a bit too much. She's a very logical person, and Harry's tendency to jump into dangerous situations without fully thinking things through could be a turn - off. In the fanfiction, she may also feel that Harry has too much of a hero complex, and she doesn't want to be in a relationship where she's constantly worried about him getting into life - threatening situations. Maybe she also values her friendship with Harry so much that she's afraid a romantic relationship could ruin it and she decides to reject him to preserve their friendship.
Well, it could be that Harry Potter makes a big mistake in fanfiction. For instance, he accidentally endangers his mates. This would lead to them feeling angry and rejecting him. Also, differences in beliefs or goals can play a part. If Harry starts to pursue a path that his mates don't agree with, like getting too involved with a certain type of magic that they consider dangerous, they might reject him.
One reason could be a weak plot. If the story doesn't have a clear and engaging plotline, it might get rejected. For example, if it's full of random events that don't lead anywhere. Another reason is poor writing style. If the grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure are all over the place, editors won't be interested. Also, if the characters are not well - developed, like they lack depth or motivation, the novel may be rejected.
One reason could be a misinformation campaign. Some malicious wizard or witch might have spread false rumors about Harry, making everyone believe that he has done something terrible like being in league with Voldemort again.
One possible reason could be a misunderstanding. Maybe his mate misinterprets something Harry does or says. For example, if Harry is often away on dangerous adventures, his mate might think he doesn't care about their relationship and reject him.
One reason could be the author's desire to rewrite the relationships in a more edgy way. They might think that making Hermione mean to Harry will attract more readers who like drama.
One reason could be his status as the Boy Who Lived. In the original story, Harry has this special aura about him, and in fanfiction, Hermione might be drawn to that in an obsessive way. Also, his bravery and leadership qualities could be factors that make Hermione overly interested in him.
One possible reason could be differences in their personalities. Harry is often portrayed as more down - to - earth and Fleur as more haughty in the books. In fanfiction, this might be exaggerated, causing her to reject him. Maybe she doesn't like his fame either, as Harry is 'the Boy Who Lived' and always in the spotlight, which she might find tiresome.
In the fanfiction, Maryjane could be in love with someone else at the time. Even if she has some feelings for Peter, her stronger feelings for another person make her reject Peter. Also, Peter might have done something in the past that Maryjane can't forgive, like lying to her, which results in the rejection.
One possible reason could be that Kakashi might misjudge Naruto's abilities in the fanfiction. Maybe Naruto shows some new or unorthodox skills that Kakashi doesn't understand at first and thus rejects him. Another reason could be a misunderstanding. For example, Naruto might be involved in something that looks bad from Kakashi's perspective, but is actually a misunderstanding.
One possible reason could be that there are cultural differences between Harry and the elf. Elves might have different values and traditions when it comes to relationships. For example, their society might have strict rules about mating or partnering with non - elves.