Hard Time Retelling a Story: What Can I Do to Improve?

After being awakened from their slumber, billions of people found themselves dispersed in various sealed crypts. Surrounded by earth, they each had only a shovel. They had to dig their own tunnels in order to advance to the next crypts. Nobody could predict whether it was a crypt full of supplies or monsters ahead! Klein was also forced to join in the digging, but he could see hints. [Dig further and you will end up in magma.] [It’s not a bad idea to dig to your right. After you enter the crypt, dash for four meters and stab the underground creature in slumber to death with a spear.] [A baby lamb is awaiting you on your left.] While everyone else was still exploring cautiously, Klein was already loaded with supplies and was dominating the underground world. While the rest were still stressed over their next meal, Klein was already trading with others with his leftover food...

A chance to change, challenge destiny, make dreams a reality, and live a legend! A regular man gains a system that allows him to turn into a fish! In the modern world, a young man gains an unconventional system that gives him the power to transform into a fish! With this strange power, he shoots for the stars!

When Su Mu woke up, he realized he had been transmigrated to a game and became the lowest-ranked NPC, a farmer. In a world of endless war, Su Mu would not be able to protect himself as a farmer. However, he suddenly came to realize that he could change his job as many times as he wanted. In his first job change, he became a Militia and gained the ability to fight. In his second job change, he became an Archer and gained the ability to make long-ranged attacks. In his third job change, he became a Lancer and gained the ability to pierce armors. In his fourth job change, he became a Heavy-armored Knight and gained the ability to switch between defense and attack with ease. In his fifth job change, he became a Holy Knight and gained the power of Holy magic. Su Mu completed countless job changes and managed to gain infinite power. When the game and the real world merged, Su Mu was already the renowned Dragon Rider that had conquered lands and built the strongest kingdom to have ever existed.

Gin is a simple man. but extraordinary salesman workers. live without family and try to live in peace. after living life as usual and life is almost stable. suddenly died from rescuing a small child who fell from the 5th floor and then turned on by the goddess to live with Satou Kazuma as his younger brother "Maybe my own life first but now I have a family. Fine !! I'll take care of my older brother" Gin is excited. A few days later. "Gin, please ..." Kazuma with a burnt face and crying because forgetting to eat anything in his room. "Yosh. Now my life just wants to relax. But why is my big brother having trouble with something constantly? Troublesome" gin with a tired face but still trying to help because he saw his brother's troubles how does the MC's life suddenly have to be Kazuma younger brother and what fate will be accepted after this? --------------------------------------------- This novel is just a fanfic and not character origin. if you want to know the original story please watch Konosuba. thank you cover image not my but if the creator does not accept I used it. I will get Reid that too. English not my language but I will learn for best writer novel for now. I Will update 7 chapter/1 week thanks for you read my novel -------------------------------------------------------------- if you want support me and you can get access advance next chapter here : https://www.patreon.com/Daunloco if u want to join me my chat grup: https://discord.gg/CT2rxwK

What would you do if you were Severus Snape in his time at Hogwarts? Benedict Clarke, an actor who played the young Severus Snape in one of the last sagas of the Harry Potter films, now finds himself in the body of 16-year-old Severus Snape and begins to live like one in the world of Harry Potter. Time plays a trick on his life and his knowledge of the future confuses him even more. The future, the past and the present get mixed up. What does Hermione Granger have to do with all this? A FF in which you will have romance, action, drama, magic and two people who do not belong to the magical world of Britain in 1976, but still go ahead and seek to live their lives and improve the lives of others in their way to end the Dark Lord who threatens the lives of all. Each chapter will be between 2000 and 3000 words. There is no system! This is a Fanfic that only focuses on the canonical world of Harry Potter, all the previous past of Severus and the other characters in the story is canonical, it will only vary and change once Severus starts to change and use his new knowledge. Severus/Benedict, will have a great intellect, talent and creativity for magic as described in the canon, all this added to his new knowledge, he will be a powerful wizard, but it will take quite some time to be as powerful as Voldemort or other wizards of that caliber. Severus/Benedict, the protagonist of this article, knows the world of Harry Potter, but he is in a decade of which he does not have much information, so he will try to use his knowledge about the possible future of this world to advance in life. As I said, there is not much canonical information about the 1970s in HP, so to make Severus have a past as canonical as possible I used all the canonical information about the 1970s and only added information to the blanks left by the canon, so the plot of Severus' past would be as canonical as possible, it may change a little bit due to my intervention in the blanks, but in short, the general trend of Severus' past does not change and the small trend may change. The pairing for the end of this story is already decided, but before being with this person Severus will go through many situations and relationships, so you can vote the pairings that Severus will have before reaching the right person, if you want to give ideas, you are more than welcome to share them. Disclaimer: The original images do not belong to me, as does the content of the Harry Potter characters, books or movies. All belong to their respective creators and owners. I stated that I do not own the rights to anything other than the FF idea.

THIS NOVEL IS NOT MINE AND ITS A TIPICAL CHINESE NOVEL, DON"T READ IF YOU CAN"T STOMACH CHINESE WAYS, OR ACTIONS. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED. This is not mine, i found it and im only posting it here so others could see it too. All the credit belongs to the original author. Note: if the author want's me to take it down, write a message or review here and i would. Thank you.