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With a father as strong as the highest heavens themselves, Gravis wasn't required to step into the cold and ruthless world of cultivation. But when Heaven used him in a scheme to get back at his father, Gravis realized that he needed strength to gain true freedom. As long as he remained his weak self, he would always remain beneath Heaven’s oppression. Only true power brings true freedom. To gain strength, Gravis ventured into the lower worlds to start his cultivation under true life and death tempering. Only a strong will, which had been forged in striving for every resource available, would allow him to reach the peak. Heaven’s strongest weapon was Lightning of Divine Punishment, and only if he made this weapon his, would he have a chance. So, to overthrow Heaven, Lightning Is the Only Way! Yet, the path to power is painful. Not everyone reaches the peak. But Gravis will! No matter how much pain he feels along the way! -- There will be 2 chapters a day -- Thanks go to Noel, Raikyodeus and Chaotic_Luck for Proofreading! Cover by: digitalrowye

English is not my first language so please take care of me and if you find mistakes in it tell me I fix it as soon as possible. Max Winchester died due to an "accident" while reading the novel after his death he meet God who allowed him to travel through and do whatever he think best but on condition to make Protagonist's life miserable. He also gives him the strongest system [Netori system] that help him steal Protagonists Woman, Chances, Luck, etc Why does God want to make that Protagonist's life miserable? And why [Netori system] given to the max let's find out. (English will get better after chapter 38.) I don't own a book cover, I find it online, If creator wants me to change it just message me, I will remove it.

Jiang Ping transmigrated to a world of the cultivation and became the chief of a deteriorating cultivation family. Most importantly, he had three cute and playful daughters. Because the world of cultivation out there is too dangerous and his daughters are too young, Jiang ping chose to hide their identities and live in a small town of ordinary people. He kept warning his daughters that the world out there is too dangerous, so don’t make any trouble. “Daughters, you must remember that there are tons of bad people out there! Their favorite thing to do is to kidnap little girls like you and use you for evil cultivation methods.” “In this world of cultivation, the most important moral to follow is to stay low-key and hide. As long as we don’t cause any trouble, we’ll never be in any danger. Until one day, when a supreme divine cultivator came to seek revenge, Jiang Ping smacked him down on the ground and completely crushed him over and over again... His daughters asked, “Daddy, was that person you just beat up a Divine Cultivator?” Jiang Ping said, “Nop, that was just a bad person who was trying to disturb our happy life. Daughters, the world outside is too scary, we didn’t even go out and danger came knocking on our door!” His daughters asked, “Daddy, do you think that we’re all idiots?” The servants he hired all said, “So the family chief is the real supreme cultivator?”

From being betrothed at the age of ten, betrayed by her lover, to seeing her brother dying in front of her eyes, Anna suffered everything at the age of thirteen! But at last, she chose to leave the underworld and live her life as a normal human being. Her heart's door is closed because of whatever happened in the past. On the other hand is Alex, famous for being the playboy of the school but unknown to all of them, he is deeply rooted in her past and her 'named' fiance. Who exactly is he!? No one has any idea about it, except being feared in the whole school. What happens when they both come together to fulfill her bucket list but end up falling for each other? Is this accepted by society? Is her love a hurdle on the way to her revenge for her brother’s death?! And most important, how will Anna react when she gets to know that Alex is not someone she knew all along? Let us read and know about what Anna faces in the line of Underworld and love when responsibility comes on her shoulders at an early age!? .... "Hey, what are you doing?" asked Anna as Alex's grip on her wrist was becoming more strong. "Listen An, no one else except me is allowed to touch you or see your shoulders." Coming closer to her ear, he whispered as his hot breeze lingered on her earlobe. "You are just MINE." The dominance was quite evident in his voice as her wide eyes stared on his face. "Get Lost." "Yes, Baby lets get lost in each other's world." Alex replied while he was simple looking at his love with adoration. Anna narrowed her eyes as she spoke, “You are just shameless!! How idiot of you!" A small smirk came on his face as his eyes showed the gentleness, "Only for you, Love." ............................ *Check Out my Another novel, * You can follow author on Social Media pages Instagram- Amaira_Knight Discord- Amaira_Knight#1314 PS- Novel cover isn't mine, its taken from Internet.

Uchiha Sasuke, younger brother of the last Uchiha heirs to a billion-dollar empire, is a normal University student. By a stroke of luck, he winds up saving an injured animal of what he thought was a dog. Meet Naruto, the youngest son of Hagoromo Gitsune. In debt to his saviour, Naruto offers to pay back the debt through one request. A misunderstanding occurs when Sasuke says "Be my lover." What happens when the naïve fox takes it literally? Warning: Boys love and ratings may go up (if not already). Don't like don't read.

In an alternate timeline where Paragus reacts more passionately to Broly's execution, he and his friends band together and flee Planet Vegeta! What will this do to the timeline? How will the change in upbringing affect Broly? Find out in Dragon Ball Revised! https://www.patreon.com/EveryLittleHelps - Please consider tipping if you like the novel, I really appreciate it The Fanfiction is written so that even if you are not a fan of Dragon Ball you can still understand what is happening. DISCLAIMER: Broly isn't the main focus until chapter 40! Broly is the main character but there are 40 chapters worth of backstory! Broly however will still be doing Broly things! Also! There are many OC's! The main cast of the story will be made up of the main character in the anime and manga but more than a few OC supporting characters will be introduced! Bare with the wait! DISCLAIMER PART 2!!!: I am a Broly fan as much as the rest of you so I can assure you that Broly will be wiping the floor with the frost demons and stomping his enemies into the dirt, however! My Broly will not a cruel and heartless MC that kills his enemies excessively. Broly, by all means, seeks peace but rest assured there is no shortage of people for him to overcome. Announcement: This novel is not dropped but currently under reconstruction I didn't like the trajectory the story was following so changed it, if some of the plot around the 120-140 chapters seems jumpy, this is why.