What are the common mistakes in writing an erotic sex scene story?

One common mistake is being too explicit. It can make the readers uncomfortable and might even seem like cheap thrills. Another is not connecting it to the characters' emotions. A sex scene should be more than just a physical act, it should tell something about the characters' relationship. For example, if it's just described in a mechanical way without any feelings involved, it's a mistake.

One common mistake is lack of communication. For example, if partners don't talk about their boundaries or preferences before, it can lead to an uncomfortable or 'disaster' situation. Say one person is into something and the other isn't, it can quickly go wrong.

One big no-no is having a confusing plot. Make sure your story flows logically and readers can follow easily.

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First, plan your story well before you start writing. Then, avoid cliches and stereotypes. And always keep your audience in mind.

Well, in writing dialogue in a novel, some writers make the mistake of writing unrealistic conversations. People don't usually speak in long, perfectly formed sentences all the time. Another mistake is ignoring the power of silence in dialogue. Sometimes what a character doesn't say is just as important as what they do say. And not being consistent with a character's voice throughout the novel can also be a big mistake.

A big mistake is having inconsistent or illogical world-building. The setting and rules of the fictional world should make sense and be consistent throughout. Another is using too much exposition or info-dumping, which can bog down the narrative and make it less engaging.

Avoid info-dumping. Don't just throw a bunch of background info at the reader all at once. It can be overwhelming and boring.

Another mistake might be the unrealistic portrayal of the effects of hypnosis. In some stories, hypnosis is shown as an all - powerful tool that can make people do things completely against their nature or without any resistance, which is not how hypnosis really works in real - life sexual or otherwise situations.

One common mistake is including too much detail. Remember, it's a summary, not a retelling. Another is failing to identify the main theme or message. For example, if the short story is about friendship but the summary doesn't mention how the characters' friendship developed or what it means, that's a problem.