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She is one of the best thieves that the world has seen in the 24th century. However, not even in her wildest dreams had she imagine that she'd be reincarnated as a good-for-nothing orphaned Seventh Miss of the Vermilion Bird Family. She finds herself stuck in a family that mistreats her, as well as an unfamiliar place with no support system. In a world of magic, she finds that the strength and talent within her would not only shock the world but also put every prodigy in that world to shame. As she learns to control her power, she vows to take revenge on those who had wronged her and to eventually rule the world. Equipped with only her new memories, quick wit and thieving skills, follow her as she embarks on a journey where she'd navigate mean relatives, magical beasts, rulership, and maybe even… love?

Lin Qi transmigrates to a world of immortals. In this world, there are sword immortals who can behead a person from a thousand miles away, peerless great demons who burn mountains and boil the seas, and ancient gods and devils who can divine the heavenly secrets. As a disciple in charge of miscellaneous chores in the Skysword Sect, Lin Qi doesn't have any cultivation talent. A hundred years had passed in a flash, and seeing that he has nothing to do with such a great world, Lin Qi is incomparably depressed. Just as he is about to die of old age, he suddenly awakens a cultivation system. Unlocked One-Click Cultivation System: Limitless cultivation speed boost, one major realm per second! Unlocked One-Click Technique Practicing System: Cultivation technique instantly maxed out. Cultivate 10,000 techniques at the same time! Unlocked One-Click Clone System: 100% of the actual body's strength. Can self-destruct, can teleport, can fuse! As a result, Lin Qi begins to cultivate again with his hundred-year-old body, becoming invincible under the heavens.

A god is bored. This is never a good thing, especially if you are chosen to relieve that boredom. Two people that argue over a fan-fiction are selected to enter a world this god created and prove their arguments by living them! One, a male that realizes that this brutal world is a chance to live out his desires, the other, a female that holds up Earth's values and morals, believing that just because the world changes, a person does not change their personality. This story follows the male's point of view. If you want to support me for some advanced chapters. https://www.patreon.com/Chado_Sama Thanks to Tales of Demons and Gods Wikia, I pillaged like a Viking. https://tales-of-demons-and-gods.fandom.com/wiki/Main_Page Obviously, this is a TDG fan-fiction with systems from other novels, so credit goes to original authors. Also, this is a work of fiction. Names, characters, businesses, places, events, locales, and incidents are either the products of the author's imagination or used in a fictitious manner. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental.

Foo, a bright young man that happens to be a computer genius, who excels in life by taking shortcuts when possible. If life was a game, he would definitely pick the easiest mode. Exams in school? Just read all the books once, and make sure you don’t forget the contents. Looking for a job? Make sure everyone around the boss knows just how perfect you are for the job. Having others bragging about your excellence is more trustworthy and gives plausible deniability. Quiz time? Let me just start my special search engine's voice recognition. Competing in soccer? Aw, how unfortunate, the opposing team 'somehow' got their clothes filled with itch-inducing powder, leading to a walkover. Playing a FPS game? Well, lets just have my own mouse driver software get some headshots while I watch a movie. It’s perfectly legit, as it just speeds up the response time so that it clicks before I even get to the computer. Gambling sites and online casinos? Data-mining, number-crunching and image recognition! By utilizing computer knowledge, solving problems is easy! Some might get jealous, but hey! Just be like me, and use your brains for once! However, in the modern era, the gangsters and other shady businesses are moving their turfs towards the internet and gaming circles. What happens when they realize that Foo was a threat to their profits? Well, no suspense here, they killed him. That’s the end of story... if you are to believe the god that greets him after his death. However, can this story get a fresh new start when Foo somehow ends up in a game-like medieval fantasy world? Or will the lack of modern tools, like his beloved computers or other modern conveniences, cut his story short yet again? ------------------------------ Also, thanks to SageDrunkKitty and Remteldanmarkius for proofreading the synopsis! Any errors still there are their fault! The fact that I might not have listened on them does not automatically make it my fault, okay?

he! After crossing the Pirate World, the infinite lottery system was awakened! he! Open the novice spree! Directly learn the six navy styles and reach full level instantly! Easily abuse Qiwuhai! he! At the beginning, I drew Kuchiki Byakuya's Zanpakuto Senbonzakura in the plane of death! After the swastika, the three major generals were abused in an instant! he! It even possesses the abilities of multiple devil fruits at the same time! Even the world government is afraid of it! he! That god-like strength can't be matched by the Four Emperors Alliance! And he! Known as the god of death Lin Tian by everyone! And the pirate group he formed is also called the symbol of "unknown" by the world! who is he? ! His legendary story will be revealed for you in this book!

Chen Yi, who was in the process of writing a new novel, encountered an idiotic editor. The editor claimed that even though the writers would not get paid for publishing on their site, the writers could extract the powers owned by the main leads if their books were popular. Chen Yi trusted none of the nonsense spouted by the editor. To prank the website, Chen Yi uploaded a novel with censored content in it. In the end, the next morning, he was shocked by the transformation that occurred to his body.