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How can a 'Percy Jackson Fear of Drowning' fanfiction be made more engaging?

2024-11-22 07:40
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Create a really vivid and detailed underwater world. When Percy is facing his fear of drowning, the reader should be able to feel like they are there with him. Describe the coldness of the water, the way the light refracts, and the strange creatures that lurk. Make his fear palpable through the description of his surroundings. Also, give Percy a clear goal that is related to his fear. Maybe he has to retrieve an important item from the bottom of a dangerous underwater trench, and the only way to get it is to face his fear head - on.

People with Superpowers Don’t Want to Be Popular

People with Superpowers Don’t Want to Be Popular

Question: What would you do if you had omnipotent superpowers? To dominate the world? Or do whatever you want? Or maybe... Kamikawa Ren’s answer was that he wanted to be an ordinary person. As a creature with true superpowers, he always tries to be like ordinary people. During class, listen carefully to Mafuyu’s Sensei lecture like a normal student. After class, he patiently lectured the Nakano quintuplets about the topic like normal students. After school, like ordinary members, worked hard to help President Shinomiya solve her problems. After returning home, he friendly played games with Gabriel like normal friends. In this way, he has worked hard to become an ordinary person. However, what made him a little confused was, would the lives of ordinary people be the same as his?
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Transmigrator Commander of Girls Frontline must not be a Reckless man

Transmigrator Commander of Girls Frontline must not be a Reckless man

The Commander who claimed to be a Transmigrator said to have traveled through several different worlds, and even blew up a planet with his bare hands, and tore off his system with his own hands... Even them Tactical Dolls were not willing to believe such outlandish claim. But seeing how this guy even wanted to unscrew and taste a bottle of Collapse Fluid... They felt that this is most likely true, and their commander...was more like a complete reckless man! -XXXXX- A Google Translated Fic from the Chinese Fic of the same name with some slight edits here and there for fixing, there seems to be a lacking of GFL fanfics and even with those present have too much gloom and this fic is pretty much a breath of fresh air and pacing. I just want to port this so people can see this gem that ive found in the rare GFL fanfics that ive come across. Original CN name; 少女前线的穿越者指挥官必不可能是个莽夫! Disclaimer: I aint own anything, and a mere 'translator' or 'editor' to show gems.
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Naruto, Be My Son

Naruto, Be My Son

Synopsis: After the Summit War, once hailed as one of the Four Emperors of the New World and the world's strongest man, "Edward Newgate," believed that today he would rest in peace at the Marine Headquarters. However, when he opens his eyes, he finds himself in a place called the "Ninja World" and encounters a child named "Naruto." "Gurarararara Kid, do you have parents?" Trembling in the presence of the giant-like Whitebeard, the five-year-old Naruto was scared, "N-No, I'm Uzumaki Naruto, and I... I'm an orphan dattebayo" "Naruto, be my son!" "Huh???" Note: This is a Chinese Translation 鸣人,做我儿子吧 Release Schedule: 7 Ch/Week ================== You can support me on Patreon and Read 50++ Chapters in advance pat reon.com/GMadman
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Harry Potter: BE a GOD

Harry Potter: BE a GOD

Murphy, whose worldview has been solidified by materialism, arrives in the materialistic world of magic and, unable to adapt to the world, decides to change it. And in order to travel to the end of magic, he must pool his resources, pull together talent, build an organization, fiddle with human nature, and become the mastermind behind it all. Murphy: "Technology for wizards, magic for muggles. All for the greatest good!" Aurora: "Nice words, abusing the three unforgivable spells, nibbling on big melons everywhere, violating the secrecy law, infiltrating the Ministry of Magic, and controlling the Ancient Spirit Pavilion, and you're still saying that you're not a black wizard?" Pit avoidance guide: 1, the beginning of the bitter fight workers, grumpy and irritable. 2, the early part of the screwing money, big capitalist. 3, Hogwarts school part, the fourth volume only began. Pit guide: 1, technology wizard, a lot of theory to complete. 2, self-research a variety of ways to reach the gods, currently the main route of transformation. 3, huge brain hole, behind the scenes. 4, do not want to see how Tom step by step to become the savior? ----------------------- It's 1 chapter per day at 1 p.m. (Arizona) in every novel I upload. 3 daily chapters in each novel on patreon! p@treon.com/INNIT ----------------------- DISCLAIMER The story belongs entirely to the original author.
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I Don’t Want To Be a Hero

I Don’t Want To Be a Hero

What happens when a lazy person with no desire of being a hero gets reborn into the One Punch Man world as Tatsumaki and Fubuki's brother? But for the sake of surviving he had to get strong. Join Ye Zai in his journey through the animeverse. I don't own the image cover or even anything in here tbh... __________________________ First of all, I'm not the original author of this fanfiction, I'm just a translator. This fanfiction has 900+ chapters so this is going to be a long ride. Original Author- Salted Fish With Rice Link To Raws- https://sj.uukanshu.com/book.aspx?id=137375 He would be having multiple women from various anime worlds but he doesn't accept them at first due to him thinking that he wouldn't be able to return to said anime world but that gets solved later on so don't worry. Also, this is a weak-to-strong novel so don't expect him to instantly defeat Saitama or something. He would eventually reach that level but not in the start. Also mostly the rewards from the system are unsatisfactory but it doesn't stop him from getting strong so don't worry. I hope you enjoy~ Also, you can consider the anime worlds AU since there are some minor changes here and there. If you realized this is a synopsis from my fellow translator -ExReality anyway imma steal your synopsis nyehehe~ (hehe jk I'm too lazy to even write synopsis on my own anyway my original purpose was just to read this fanfic with MTL but I might as well help y'all by putting the translation here I'll also edit the chapter if i feel like it anyway peace~)
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I cannot be Martial Ancestor, then I will be Emperor Yan.

I cannot be Martial Ancestor, then I will be Emperor Yan.

After traveling through Wu Dong, Lin Yan immediately went to the small pond behind the Lin family to search for the ancestral stone, hoping to take it away from Lin Dong. Unfortunately, he arrived late and Lin Dong had already taken the ancestral stone. Just when he thought he could only practice step by step, suddenly the voice of the system sounded. 【Ding! Congratulations to the host, the login system has been successfully unlocked.】 【Successfully completed registration at the small stone pond behind the Lin family and obtained the Yao Lao Ring.】 Since then, Lin Yan continued to register and received several rewards from other planes. Lin Yan: "I may not be able to become a Martial Ancestor, but does Emperor Yan seem to have a chance?" So the question is, who is better between Emperor Yan and the Martial Ancestor at the same time? If you want to read the chapters in advance and support me, here is my Patreon. patreon.com/johanssen10 Chapters on my Patreon Soccer: I have the attributes of Messi in his Prime (up to chapter 85) I cannot be a Martial Ancestor, then I will be Emperor Yan. (up to chapter 75) Dou Po: Tie Xiao Xun'er at the beginning and get ten times feedback (up to chapter 47)
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What are some good 'Percy Jackson Fear of Drowning' fanfictions?

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2024-11-24 03:33

One good fanfiction could be 'Overcoming the Fear' where Percy has to face his fear of drowning in a really unique underwater quest. The author does a great job of showing his internal struggle.

How can 'percy has cancer fanfic' be made more engaging?

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2024-12-10 17:10

By adding complex characters. Besides Percy, create other characters with their own motives and backstories. For example, a doctor who has a personal vendetta against cancer because of a lost loved one. This doctor could have a unique relationship with Percy.

How can a Michael Jackson x fan fanfic be made more engaging?

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2024-10-28 18:10

Add a lot of emotional depth. For example, if the fan in the story has some personal struggles, like dealing with family issues or self - doubt, and Michael Jackson's presence and words help them overcome. This makes the story more relatable.

How can a 'Percy Jackson is alone' fanfic be made more interesting?

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2024-11-29 10:31

To make it more interesting, you could introduce a new and mysterious character that Percy meets while alone. This character could have a hidden agenda or a special connection to Percy's past.

How can 'Percy Jackson Mind Control Lemon Fanfiction' be made more appropriate?

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2024-11-26 05:49

If we want to make 'Percy Jackson Mind Control Lemon Fanfiction' more appropriate, we need to ditch the 'lemon' which usually implies adult content. For the mind control part, we can make it more of a moral or ethical struggle. Maybe Percy is mind - controlled by an ancient magic that makes him question his values. His friends could then be the ones to help him see the light again through their love and support, much like how they always support each other in the original books.

How can 'hypnotized baby fanfiction' be made more engaging?

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2024-11-30 00:34

Involving other characters in an interesting way can make it more engaging. Maybe there's a character who is trying to understand what the baby is experiencing during hypnosis. They could be an older sibling or a parent. Their reactions and attempts to communicate with the baby can add depth to the story. Also, creating a sense of mystery around the hypnosis itself, like not revealing all at once why the baby was hypnotized or what the full extent of its effects are, can keep the readers hooked.

How can monkey and human fanfiction be made more engaging?

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2024-11-27 10:16

Adding a lot of vivid descriptions. For example, if the story is set in a forest, describe the lush greenery, the sounds of the animals, and the smell of the damp earth. This makes the setting more real for the readers.

How can 'difficult birth fanfiction' be made more engaging?

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2024-11-26 10:35

Adding vivid descriptions of the emotions involved can make it more engaging. For example, describe the mother's fear, the father's anxiety.

How can a 'Naruto is heartbroken' fanfiction be made more engaging?

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2024-11-07 02:19

To make a 'Naruto is heartbroken' fanfiction more engaging, focus on his emotions deeply. Describe how his heartbreak affects his daily life, like he might stop eating or training. Also, add some flashbacks to happier times to contrast with his current state.

How can 'abused gamzee fanfiction' be made more engaging?

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2024-11-04 09:46

By developing strong characters. Make Gamzee's character multi - dimensional, with his own hopes, fears and quirks. Also, create interesting antagonists if there are any involved in the abuse situation.

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