There would also be fans who appreciate the boldness of such a plot. It shows a different side of the story, a more tragic and bittersweet end that can add depth to the overall fanfiction universe. They might praise the author for taking risks and not following the typical happy - ending route.
She'd probably be shocked at first. But then her face would light up with joy. After all, she and Percy have been through so much together.
Percy might be a bit flustered and embarrassed. He's protective of his relationship with Annabeth, so having Magnus walk in might make him feel like their privacy has been invaded. He could quickly try to shield Annabeth or just look really shocked.
At first, Percy would likely be angry. He's a fighter, and being betrayed by someone he loves would fuel his rage. He might go after Annabeth to demand an explanation. But as the reality sinks in, he could become very sad and withdrawn. He might isolate himself from his other friends as well, feeling like he can't trust anyone anymore. He would constantly be thinking about what he did wrong to make Annabeth turn on him.
He would probably be shocked. Percy has always trusted Annabeth, so being stabbed by her would be completely unexpected. He might initially be unable to believe what's happening.
Annabeth would likely be furious at first. She has been through so much with Percy, and for him to leave her for Calypso would seem like a betrayal. But then, she might also start to reflect on their relationship and what went wrong. She could become determined to win Percy back or to move on and prove that she doesn't need him.
Percy would feel a deep sense of guilt as well. He might think that he should have been there to protect her. So, he would be determined not only to free her but also to make sure whoever is responsible pays for what they've done. He would use his powers over water to his advantage, like creating distractions or using water to weaken the enemy's defenses while he tries to reach Annabeth.
He could be a bit shy. Since he also has feelings for Annabeth but was too nervous to make the first move. So when Annabeth asks him out, he blushes and stammers a bit, like, 'Uh, yeah, Annabeth. That sounds great.' And then he would be really happy inside, thinking about all the things they could do together on their date.
Annabeth would probably be very hurt at first. She has a strong bond with Percy, and his leaving for someone else would be a huge blow to her self - esteem and her heart.
On the other hand, there could be fans who are interested in seeing the drama and conflict that would come from this. They might enjoy seeing how the characters would deal with such a complex and emotional situation. It could also open up new ways of exploring the personalities of Percy and Artemis.
Some fans might be intrigued. They could see it as an interesting exploration of 'what if' scenarios, even if it goes against the grain of the original story. However, a large number of die - hard fans would probably be quite upset as it goes against the strong bond that was built up between the two characters throughout the books.