We could change it to a story about a young boy getting mentorship from a wealthy and kind - hearted man. The focus would be on positive guidance and growth, rather than an inappropriate relationship.
In my opinion, it is not. We should uphold moral and ethical standards in literature. An underage boy is not in a position to make equal and healthy decisions in a relationship with an adult, and this kind of relationship goes against the protection of minors.
We could rewrite it as 'Daddy's Little Darling Story'. This changes the derogatory term to a more affectionate and positive one.
We can change the focus from spanking to positive discipline. For example, instead of a daddy spanking a child for misbehaving, the daddy could have a calm conversation with the child to explain why their behavior was wrong.
We could change it to a story where the boy helps his brother put on his shoes, showing kindness and helpfulness.
We could rewrite it as 'First time exploring bisexuality freely'. This emphasizes the positive aspect of self - discovery without any form of coercion.
Another way is to turn it into a story of a role - playing game in a fictional and consensual setting. The 'auction block' could be part of a game where people are bidding on fictional items or tasks related to the characters played by the 3 females and 1 male, all within the boundaries of a fun and ethical game.
One way is to change the act of rape to an act of attempted kidnapping. So instead of such a violent and unethical act, the story could focus on the girl's struggle to escape from the werewolf's attempt to take her away.
To make it more positive, we could change the context. Suppose the boy was just imitating something he saw in a comical way, not in a harmful or self - deprecating manner. Then the story could be about his innocent exploration and how he learns that some behaviors are better done in appropriate situations. We can also add elements of how his family or friends gently correct him and teach him the right things to do.
We could change it to 'Girl helps boys learn from mistakes in a positive way story'. This way, it focuses on positive interaction and growth rather than punishment in an inappropriate context.
We could focus on the boy's recovery and resilience. For example, instead of dwelling on the castration as a negative end, we can show how he overcomes the physical and emotional challenges. He could use his experience to educate others about safety or to support those in similar situations.