A big mistake is having inconsistent or illogical world-building. The setting and rules of the fictional world should make sense and be consistent throughout. Another is using too much exposition or info-dumping, which can bog down the narrative and make it less engaging.
Avoiding inconsistent pacing is crucial. Sometimes the story might move too fast or too slow, making the reading experience uneven. Also, not proofreading thoroughly for grammar and spelling errors can turn readers off.
Another mistake is creating flat characters. Readers need to be able to relate to or be interested in the characters. If they're one-dimensional, it can make the novel less engaging. Also, not editing thoroughly can lead to grammar and spelling errors that detract from the quality of the work.
Don't rush the plot. Make sure it unfolds naturally and keeps the readers engaged.
One common mistake is poor character development. If the characters aren't fleshed out and relatable, readers won't be engaged.
One common mistake is having a weak plot. If the plot lacks direction or is too predictable, readers will lose interest. Another mistake is creating flat characters. Characters without depth or growth are not appealing. Also, over - using complex language just to seem sophisticated can be a turn - off for readers.
One common mistake is not varying the pace of the run. If it's always 'he ran' without any variation like 'he jogged', 'he sprinted' or 'he dashed', it can get boring. Another is not connecting the run to the character's emotions or the plot. For example, if a character is running just because the writer wants some action, but it doesn't serve any purpose in the story.
One big no-no is having a predictable plot. YA readers want excitement and surprises.
One big mistake is creating a convoluted plot that's hard for readers to follow. Keep it simple and engaging.
Avoid using too much exposition. Let the reader discover things through the actions and dialogue of the characters. And make sure your writing style is engaging and not too dry or wordy.
One common mistake is poor character development. If your characters aren't well-rounded and relatable, readers won't be engaged.