What constitutes bad writing in fiction?

When Yohan woke up in the morning, he had a beauty in his lap and in his bedroom. It was like a dream come true for him until reality struck him. It was then he remembered that he had been cursed by a goddess in the game he had been playing before sleeping. In his sleep-deprived state, he had offended the goddess and as a result, he had been cursed to become a 'no-good' man who could only provide 'support' to the 'heroines' of this world. Thinking nothing of that curse beforehand, Yohan went to sleep, only to find his world changing from that day onwards. His normal and mundane life was no longer going to be as such as more and more fantasy creatures began to show up. And a female voice awoke him with a notification *Ding dong ding. Congrats on unlocking the fiction system. From here on, the user will experience the full scope of the logic of the fiction world. May the user use his PP and conquer everyone.* And it was then Yohan realized - he was no longer in a world governed by science but one that followed the laws of magic. And the only way to survive was to utilize these so-called 'laws of fiction' to his advantage. And the best and worst part of it all? The more he let his desire go, the stronger he became. — — — 500 PS/150 GT = 1 extra chapter Gifts above 1000 = 1 extra chapter instantly Show support for a faster release rate. . — — — Additional Tags: Evil Mc(Will develop) - Intelligent Mc - Shameless Mc - Scheming Mc(Later on) - Smut - No NTR - But Contains Netori - Legal Loli - Succubus - Elf - Angel - Vampire - Cat Girls - Dragon Girls - Fox Girls - Monster Girls - Slaves - Milf - Princess - Beautiful - YANDERE - Seinen - Mature - R18 - 18 - Sex Stories - Beastality - Hentai - NSFW - Pregnancy - Incest - Domination Play - Controlling Emotions - Corrupting Righteous Characters - Gore - Transmigration - Mana - Devil - Demon - Necromancer - Death - Dungeon - Evolution - Threesome - Hints of Yuri — ー ー Warning: Read at your own risk.

(Chapters re-written: 7,8) (Chapters to re-write:from 1 to 6, 9 to 61) Born in a rather particular family situation, Ethan finds himself having to face life with the desire of making his parents proud of him, from heaven. But, he didn't manage to do so because of an unfortunate accident, which caused his death. Now outside his own body, Ethan was afraid of having to meet his parents again, without having been able to fulfil his desire, but it is precisely at this moment that a voice speaks to him. [Would you like to be reincarnated?] Hearing these words, Ethan had various thoughts in mind, but, he understood that, with this, he could have another chance to satisfy his desires, and this, brought him to instantly say yes... [Your wish to be reincarnated into the world 1042, titled {Danmachi} has been authorized and granted by God] --- My own discord ID: watashiwavdesu#2029 (Author Notes: I will post one chapter a day) You should enter my server discord. https://discord.gg/cpVr5X8 *I do not own Danmachi and the cover*

Immortal. All-powerful. A singular existence in the cosmos. The Phoenix. Thoughtlessly leaving comment on a forum one night, had Phenex thrust into the world of Planetos, as a being of nigh-unlimited power. And with his arrival the destiny of Westeros and the rest of the world will never be the same. ................................ This Fan-Fiction is about the Game of Thrones Series with minor elements from the books. It is a slow paced story and therefore a bit different than my other works. There will be a multi-pairing, but not in a typical harem setting. Meaning the MC will have multiple partners, but they do not necessarily stay with him and are not his silent trophies. Though he will of course have permanent partners. I will upload this story monthly, but more than 35 advanced chapters of this story are on my p@treon account, which I update daily. This account isn't a priority of mine and just exists to stop others from stealing my intellectual property. (My p@treon-acc: www.p@treon.com/GodOfFreedom; Don't forget to change the @ for an a...) Last, but not least, I don't own anything but my own characters, as I do not own the cover image, which I found on the internet. If you are the creator and want me to take it down, just send me a message or leave a comment. Enjoy!

Warlock of the Magus World, the world full of deceit, bloodshed, betrayal, backstabbing, logical thinking, profit oriented mindset and myriad of phenomenal mysterious entities. In this world a soul is reincarnated and we embark on a journey of a lifetime, as his ups and downs would be written in the annals of history of the whole Magus World. A man and a myth would make use of his knowledge of the future, leaving behind the mindset of the past embracing his new identify in a new World. What would we see? Where will this journey lead? For all the fans of WMW out there, this is your salvation and a chance to once again swim in the deep intoxicating waters of the strange yet intoxicating Magus World. _______ I would like to request my dear viewer to give a chance and at least solider through 50-60 chapters, This was a totally new experience for me and please pardon my insolence. Glory To The Warlocks. Your Guide through the bizzare world, Keetarp I don't own anything relating to Warlock of The Magus World. The cover is courtesy of an amazing reader, Amon. {A/N : If you want to support me or read more chapters in advanced consider becoming a patreón: patreón.com/keetarp and if you want to join the discord server: https://discord.gg/5TjDmwUWuG}

A young otaku who did not die naturally, was teleported to many worlds that laughed, cried, found love and hate. Along with his curse that he can not die, he looks for a place where he can call home and form what he has sought in many worlds, a homely place. [This fan-fiction will contain an MC OP, along with different powers of its multidimensional journey. like One piece, Seirei tsukai no blade dance, among others.] [This is my first novel, my English is not my main language, which is Spanish, but you have to try it, right?] [This novel is made with the sole purpose of having fun, reading and resting from what surrounds us.] [I do not own any novel like: One Piece-seirei tsukai no blade dance, Highschool Dxd among others.]

An ordinary young adult of the age 20, Ryan was reborn in the modern family universe. His cheat allowed him access to ready-made scripts for movies and tv shows as long as he participated in the modern family plot. He could get system points through which he could buy scripts. Not to mention that although he was born into a relatively wealthy family, the system will also provided him with a minimum wage, which would automatically improves as his net worth increases. With so many ways of making money, Ryan decided he didn't want to be ordinary in this life and walked down the path of a legendary scriptwriter.