How to write a successful private eye novel?

Zhao Feng works hard to prove himself better than peers in the Martial Arts Training Ground, but just when he's about to give up, a mysterious black, marble-like, object fuses with his left eye, granting him the powers of the ancient gods. With his newfound powers, Zhao Feng embarks on the journey toward becoming the greatest martial artist of all time.

Levelling also known as cultivation is the thing that the entire world revolves around. Lex had no family and was found alone at the crash site, is an absolute trash with a weak body and was bullied and abused by those his age. On the verge of death after he was nearly killed by his bullies he gave up on life until.... {Ding, host has gained the Eye System}. From then he began his journey exploring the universe and chasing after the girl he loves all while getting stronger and finding out more about himself. But life isn't that simple and fate is unpredictable. With infinite realities Lex has to make his way up from the bottom wherever he is all with the Eye System. Gaining more and more Eye Powers, while unlocking more and more mysteries, will Lex make it to the top. Author Note: Planning for a long novel with an ever growing world and MC and his personality and strength will grow and change throughout so I wouldn't judge the entire novel off the not great beginning chapters and throughout the novel you see the mc change an improve in ideals, personality and strength. Discord Server: https://discord.gg/TtnGfdKanr Note: I do not own cover art

Our MC used to be an idol, singing, dancing and seducing were all in the job description. Unfortunately, a fan was a bit too enthusiastic about him and kidnapped him. Spending time in a crazy woman's sex dungeon was surprisingly fun but that’s beside the point. He ended up dying to a different woman that had found him chained up. Without explanation, he woke up in a far more attractive body in a world full of attractive women. There is no world better suited for out protagonist. …He also had an Eye Power System but who cares.

A story about a guy who gets 3 wishes and reincarnates in Legend of Korra as an earthbender prodigy. I always wanted to write fanfiction and the idea for this story kept popping up in my head so here we are. My main goal right now is to upload a chapter at least once a week and that becomes a lot harder when English isn't my first language. Besides that please be gentle with me as actually posting this took a lot of courage for me. I own nothing besides the OC.

Synopsis.

WARNING my stories generally lack spirit i write for fun and to free my head from this particular plot. Expect inconsistency bullshit power ups and messed up logic and also don't expect good grammar.