How to write a story like giving treasures?

Disclaimer I did not create or own this novel I have helped smooth out some of the translation but this story was created by 喵星人家的汪 I am only putting this on here because I enjoyed it myself and thought others might want to give it a read as well.

Su’en is the most senior disciple of the Dao Sect in the Heavenly Domain, despite being of average talent. However, he stumbled upon a Critical Compensation system: Whenever he gave up his opportunities to others, he would obtain Critical Compensations, multiplying his gains and rewards. [Congratulations on giving up a Foundation Establishment Pill. You have unlocked a hundredfold Critical Compensation. You have gained 100 Foundation Establishment Pills!] [Congratulations on giving up a Xuan Rank technique. You have unlocked a thousandfold Critical Compensation. You have gained a Heaven Rank technique!] [Congratulations on giving up the egg of a Nine-tailed Owl. You have unlocked a Critical Compensation. You have gained the egg of the divine beast: the Vermillion Bird!] … Su’en’s junior Ye Lingyun declared, ”Senior, you have done so much for you. In order to repay you, I must marry you!” The other disciples of the sect announced, “We, the younger generation of the Dao Sect, will bow to no one but Senior Su!” The Empress of the Sky Demon Sect demanded, ”You gifted me the Emperor Rhyme Purple Gold Lotus, the only one of its kind in the world. And you claim I am nothing to you?” Su’en looked at the two divine maidens—one good, one evil, both beholden to him in devotion. He said, “Maybe I am selfish after all.”

A story about a guy who gets 3 wishes and reincarnates in Legend of Korra as an earthbender prodigy. I always wanted to write fanfiction and the idea for this story kept popping up in my head so here we are. My main goal right now is to upload a chapter at least once a week and that becomes a lot harder when English isn't my first language. Besides that please be gentle with me as actually posting this took a lot of courage for me. I own nothing besides the OC.

Act like a saint. Tempt like a slut. Talk like a boss. Kill like a Gentleman. Elliot was given a task, and that was to infiltrate the mansion of the richest family in the country. Of course, he got in, but what he saw inside was a family secret that he was not supposed to find out. "Death never looked so fucking classy."

Synopsis.

A teenager named Ivan Mason is reincarnated in the magical world of Harry Potter and goes to Hogwarts school! With only his knowledge of the future and his great talent for magic, he took the path to the top of the magical world, only to find that every time he took a step, everything changed! if anyone wants to support me: https://www.patreon.com/inferno303 For those who want to read the full novel, you can search for it in webnovel, or in the links left in the description. https://es.mtlnovel.com/novel-author/miaoxingrenjiadewang/