How to develop a good antagonist in a story?

Qiao Nan: Crap! I am your biological daughter, yet I am treated as if I was picked up from the streets. In fact, you treat me worse than that! Mother Qiao: Qiao Nan, you are not as pretty or smart as your elder sister. You are not as blessed as her. You have no right to study, marry, or to have your happiness! Qiao Nan: Why am I not allowed to study, marry, or to seek my happiness? I will find a man right now and marry him! Qiao Nan is dumbstruck upon discovering that the man right beside her is a powerful figure in the quad—the person who has the most promising prospects to be the future Chief. Qiao Nan stares at the well-built man in front of her. He has firm abs and cold, chilling eyes. She swallows the lump in her throat as she says her greetings, "Good Morning, Chief!"

I was humiliated.. I was killed.. My family abandoned me.. My sister and lover betrayed me.. At the very end of my last breath, I swore. I swore to the heavens. I swore to all the Gods. No matter how many lifetime pass, I will come back and collect the debts they owed me. Even if I have to sell my own soul. I, XuanRong shall definitely return. ------------ I rule under the heavens, I rule above the earth. I am ruthless against my enemy, But I am shameless when it comes to her. I am the ruler but she is the law. People kneel when they see me But I only bow down and worship her. She was frozen like a winter snow, But her smile was warmer than the summer's spring. I, Xu Fei Yi will definitely conquer her. ------------ [Author's Note:] A typical rebith-revenge type of novel. Read it in your own volition. Slow paced romance and story outline. CLICHÉ NOVEL--- DO NOT READ. This novel contains violence and sexual abuse scenes that may not be suitable for very young readers. Strict Parental Guidance is advised. [PLEASE ADOPT ME \(T^T)/ and DONATE @ paypal.me/sayurihyuuga] Book Cover: Pristine Editor: Avi/Prikkrang and Supremetobs ------------ The author [Sayuri] is a novice writer, not a native American and has no proper training in writing a novel.

(Completed) Is there hate at first sight? Takeuchi Rie is a hikikomori who rarely goes sees the daylight. If she wants food, she will order it online. The love of her life is a manga character. Unless her house is on fire, she refuses to go outside. Kamiyama Kiyohira is the arrogant and proud CEO of Kamiyama Groups. When he meets her for the first time at the funeral of his father and stepmother, she is cursing him to rot with genital diseases at his father's funeral. He breaks her door, destroys her house, and nearly sends her to the prison. She sticks to him like a koala and blames him for taking advantage of her during sleep. They certainly hate each other, but they can't keep their hands off each other? He is the wicked CEO. She is the hateful Hikikomori. She is the wicked Hikikomori. He is the hateful CEO. Who is the wicked one here? It depends. Who is at the bottom and who is on the top? They are quite a match in words, bed, and hate. They hate each other so much that they keep sleeping with each other? By the way, if MC and ML are mutually sexually harassing each other, is it sexual harassment? ----------------- Author's Note: Not the usual CEO love story. Warning: Explicit language, 18+ scenes, NSFW *HIKIKOMORI = An acute antisocial person/ Shut-in/ A person who rarely goes outside. ----------------- The interview with The Wicked CEO: Author: How do you draw a Hikikomori out? CEO: Demolish her house. Author: How do you trick a Hikikomori to sign a legal document? CEO: Use difficult vocabulary. If she didn't study hard in school, she won't understand a word. Author: I see. How do you make her so mad that she tries to kill you right after she wakes up? CEO: Tell her that you have slept with her. Make sure that she misunderstands. Author: How do you seduce a Hikikomori? CEO: Read the novel and find out. Hikikomori: How dare you throw me in bed with my enemy? Come here, Author. I won't beat you to death. Definitely, won't beat you to death. Author: Have fun in bed. Mr CEO drags his Hikikomori wife away before she kills the author. ----------------------------- Proofreader/Editor: TheTalkingCupcake Picture credit: Photo by Joel Overbeck on Unsplash Instagram: Koch_Norah Goodreads: http://www.goodreads.com/norah_koch ****Full list of my novels******* Novels with Interconnected Worlds: 1. The Love That Remains (Completed) 2. His Mischievous Time-Traveler: How to capture a celebrity husband? (Completed) 3. His Devious Harbinger: How To Tame A Wicked God? (Completed) 4. Supernatural Investigation 101: Chronicles of Nakashima Wakana  5. When A Ghoul Falls In Love 6. Hunting for a Husband in a Vampire Apocalypse Standalone Novels:  Her Wicked CEO: How To Seduce A Hikikomori Wife? Miss Chicken & Her Mister The Villainous Emperor is My Pet? (Available on Goodnovel.Com) Bad x Bad: My Dear Hana (Available on Goodnovel.Com)

SSR-ranked killer Mu Hui died in an explosion, only waking up to find herself transmigrated into the body of a vicious female supporting character in a book. The original Host was as stupid as a pig. As the lover of the villain, she helped the male protagonist steal the important documents from the villain and backstabbed the villain for the male protagonist. The ending was, of course, being attacked by both the male protagonist and the villain, and, dying miserably. And the point where Mu Hui transmigrated was the moment when she stabbed the villain and ran to the male protagonist's side— What could she do to change her fate? Mu Hui made a prompt decision and placed the knife that had stabbed the villain onto the male protagonist's neck. "The scene just now was deliberately acted out by my man and me. Return the document to my man immediately!" The male protagonist: ""???"" The antagonist: ""???"" Later on, Mu Hui constantly helped the villain Fu Siye fight monsters and level up, just so that she could live longer and return to her original world. However, one day, after a bath, the villain came up to her. "You've been my lover for so long. When are you going to consummate your marriage?" Mu Hui: “???” This was not how it was written in the book! [Even if it is meant to be, it can be changed step by step.]

A/N: Newbie author here! I wrote this synopsis in haste so it might change in the future. I have a rough outline of the plot progression, but nothing has been set in stone! PLEASE NOTE: I explore the story as I write!!! I don't claim my story to be good even though I have burned my body, heart, and soul! SYNOPSIS: Like waking up from a dream, Ben was transmigrated into a fantasy world; in a cruel forest, which was hell in itself. But, after fighting death many times, he finally came out of it and found a human town after 6 months. He also got to meet his 'family' of this world. But something was wrong with his body... Why was every woman attracted to him? And why their men thanked him even though he cucked them? Whatever may be the reason, it's good for him, so he doesn't care. Why would he, when he can just **** almost anyone he likes? Embark on a lewd journey with Ben... WARNING: Just as the name suggests, this is a lewd wish-fulfillment novel. It also contains in-cest. So you have been warned. Note: 1. English isn't my first language. 2. Don't take this story too seriously. 3. No NTR, no r*pe. 4. MC is not Evil. 5. MC is not so smart like those of cultivation novels. Though he isn't dumb. Discord: https://discord.gg/tpZUwe5cFT (updated) (Reference images added) Support Me: Ko-fi.com/ drakyvampire TAGS: R-18, adventure, in-cest, transmigration, fantasy, ne-tori, milf.

[The story will resume from 1st of March] [Currently under heavy Editing. I will be back sometime in the future once I am done with editing the starting chapters through and thorough. Sorry for the inconvenience. (No. of chapter Edited 0/100) Although the major errors are like in the first 30-40 chapters, I will still look a bit further for smoother reading experience. The errors are highlighted in a pinned review.] ........................... 'Every Mistake has a price' Visca, a playground for the 'Gods', is a world where 'Gods' nurture their champions to fight for them. Reincarnators, Transmigrator, Regressers, people with system and other cheat characters, all roam the world of Visca. Then, HE was brought into this world. And THAT, was the mistake the 'Gods' shouldn't have done. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- Disclaimer: He reincarnates in a world that has its own laws and rules. A vast world where different species rule over different kingdoms. A world where magic decides your future. There is danger lurking everywhere. Thousands of secrets undiscovered. What happens when a genius among geniuses reincarnates into that world with only a pathetic amount of magic within him? What would happen to someone who only wanted to live a plain life with his wife and family? What was the reason for his reincarnation? and what will he do next? Find out as you follow a magical journey of myths and Legends, as threads of fate unravel themselves at the hands of the 'weakest' mage. ................................................................. [Chapter 1-18 is 0th ark. (A form of intro ark) It has many information dumps and there could be grammatical mistakes in them, so please bear with it. Chapter 19+ is the first ark. It is where the main story actually starts. Thank you for coming here] .................................................................. Other important points: •This isn't a weak to strong type of novel. Our protagonist is strong from the beginning. The story would revolve around him and his brothers along with the future allies and the choices they make as they explore the world. •The first 18 chapters will have a lot of foreshadowing, world-building and other explanations. It will cover at least half of the world area that you should expect to be explored in the future. •Also, you might feel like it started somewhere from the middle with so many things going on in the background and that's because it is so...Don't expect things to finally kick into motion after the MC appears... .................................................................. [I do not own the Cover and if the creator has any issues, please message me at deathscavenger97@gmail.com I'll credit or remove it]