What are the main points to consider in a review of 'How to Walk Away' novel?

Su Yang was an average university student in Shanghai when he received a system that allowed him to add points to things. The point system provided him with missions and by clearing them, he would gain points. Add a point into an object, the object will receive a special ability; add a point into a plant, the plant will come alive; add points on himself, he will get talents or superpowers. With the mysterious point system in hand, Su Yang aimed to become rich and alter his fate. On his path towards success, he encountered many interesting matters and people, including famous actresses and business tycoons. Fueled by determination, Su Yang set his sight on adding points into all things to help him achieve his goal.

A normal boy’s soul from Earth traveled to the Naruto world. There he is known as Uchiha Tatsumi. He wanted to live a normal life, until reality hit him hard in the face. He was in the timeline when Minato was in the academy, the second war still had to happen. He must survive the 2nd and 3rd Ninja War to meet the characters from the original story. ----------------------------- The words you read here are the supreme truth. Don't try and refer to the original timeline. ----------------------------------------- (This is an mtl and I am just editing it.) Author : Qing Ya Link for mtl : www.mtlnovel.com/konohas-50-years

A story about a guy who gets 3 wishes and reincarnates in Legend of Korra as an earthbender prodigy. I always wanted to write fanfiction and the idea for this story kept popping up in my head so here we are. My main goal right now is to upload a chapter at least once a week and that becomes a lot harder when English isn't my first language. Besides that please be gentle with me as actually posting this took a lot of courage for me. I own nothing besides the OC.

Ed is not from this world. Last he remembered, he had been on a quest to save someone's life, a debt he must repay. But he was deceived. stuck in a lace called the mist, a bridge between worlds, time and space its self, a place gods would not go, he must not only find his way home, he must find out who he is, that the entire universe aims to kill him. With past lives to uncover and companions that should not walk any world. Will he loose himself to the mist or become what he has forgotten? both roads lead to doom, but whose?

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This is the story of an Illegal Pharmaceutical Scientist Otaku who died, and was reincarnated into DXD as pure blood devil. "If people got themselves reincarnated into another world, usually they would try their best to fix the plot into better one right? Me? Sorry I think I'll just taint or rape all the beautiful women that are my type. (Not for Kids high amounts of rape :3!)