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How to effectively write characters' thoughts in a story?

2024-09-29 00:26
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You can do it through internal monologue. Just have the character think to themselves and describe their thoughts as they come. It's simple and direct.

How Am I Still Alive?

How Am I Still Alive?

Spiritual Qi Resurgence, Gods descending? Continuous disasters, all living beings suffering? What does it have to do with me? I'm just a patient with an incurable disease, who's been given up on treatment and has a countdown to death. Embarking on the path of exorcising demons and annihilating immortals with my crippled body is not for the sake of protecting my family and country, but because the hazardous duty pay is too tempting, especially the compensation... "This Evil Gods profession system is cursed, even if there's smooth progress in the early stages, the practitioners will eventually commit suicide..." "Give me a set." "This Demon Sword poisons its user and has already taken ninety-nine lives..." "Give me two, and also that man-eating demonic helmet, soul-devouring blood claws, get me a set." "This Magic Potion is harmful to heaven and earth..." "Enough talk, I'll take them all!" However, the problem is, why am I still alive after taking on all these high-risk missions, stepping on every risk, and doing every deadly task? 【Congratulations, congratulations! Ranked first among the Top Ten Heroes Who Moved the World...】 "...Heavens, wasn't the average life expectancy in this line of work three and a half years? I've been here for one cycle of three years after another, I'm almost an S-level hunter, the first of the top ten heroes! Why am I still alive? I just want to make an honor sacrifice, scam some compensation! Is that so hard?!"
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The Little Ancestor Teaches You How To Live

The Little Ancestor Teaches You How To Live

The ancient Divine Beast Susu descended to endure trials and became the youngest daughter of the Qin Family, who were nearing eighty years old; young in age but high in seniority, even the men in their twenties had to call her auntie. Susu was also the only girl in three generations of the Qin Family, cherished by her parents, doted on by her brothers, and her nephews would fight over holding their auntie and protecting her. Protect her? Susu said she didn't need it, for she was a mighty and ferocious Divine Beast! With her around, no one would dare to bully the Qin Family members! Those who bullied her family got sent flying; those who coveted their fortune got sent flying; those who tried to kidnap her got sent flying. The kidnappers who captured Susu were frightened by her and willingly handed over their cell phones for her to call the police. "How do I unlock the cell phone?" Susu asked. "It requires fingerprint unlocking, you can use my finger," explained the kidnapper. "How do I use your finger? Chop it off?" Susu asked again. "No! No need to chop, it can be used while still attached to my hand!" the kidnapper wailed. Chop off a finger! What kind of thought process was that? Way too scary! Ever since the lucky-buff-carrying Susu had come to their home, the family's luck had improved, their business prospered more each day, and the previously naughty young masters had become much better behaved, truly a little lucky star. It was just that boy from the neighbor's house, who kept thinking about kidnapping Little Susu, causing the Qin Family men quite a bit of concern. Maybe they should just break his leg again?
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How to effectively write characters' thoughts in stories?

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2024-10-16 08:22

You can also show their thoughts through actions and reactions. For example, a character frowning or sighing might indicate certain thoughts. And describe the character's expressions and body language to hint at what's going on in their mind.

How to effectively write characters' thoughts in fiction?

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2024-10-15 20:51

You can use internal monologues. Let the character think and talk to themselves in their mind. This gives readers direct access to their thoughts.

How to write thoughts effectively in a story?

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2024-10-03 15:33

You could show thoughts through actions and reactions. For example, a character's nervous fidgeting might reveal their anxious thoughts. Also, descriptive language can help paint a picture of what's going on in their mind.

How do you effectively write characters' thoughts in a story?

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2024-09-28 08:56

You can use inner monologue. Just have the character think directly to the reader in their own words.

How to effectively write out thoughts in a story?

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2024-10-16 11:21

Well, you need to make the thoughts relatable and clear. Use simple language and describe the emotions behind the thoughts.

How to effectively write thoughts in a short story?

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2024-10-11 19:41

You can do it by using vivid language and imagery. It helps the reader understand the character's thoughts more vividly. Also, show the internal conflict or dilemma within the thoughts to add depth to the story.

How to write inner thoughts effectively in a story?

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2024-10-11 06:15

You can use internal monologue. Just have the character speak their thoughts directly to the reader. It's simple and straightforward.

How to effectively write down thoughts in a story?

1 answer
2024-10-09 07:10

Just let your imagination flow and write whatever comes to your mind. Don't worry about grammar or structure at first.

How to effectively write thoughts in a novel?

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2024-10-11 13:09

You should make the thoughts relatable and engaging. Try to show the inner conflict or complexity of the character's mind.

How to write thoughts effectively in a novel?

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2024-10-07 18:27

Well, one way is to make the thoughts relatable and genuine. Let the readers feel like they could have the same thoughts in that situation.

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