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After being sent to another world because of a god's mistake, Lin Fan obtained the ability to...tame? "What? As long as I raise affection, I can tame anything? Even gods?" "Could I even make a harem with this power?" ------------------------------------------------------------------- Come follow me on twitter: https://twitter.com/DXHaseoXD Come check out my stream: https://twitch.tv/dxhaseoxd Please check out my new book out for Fantasy Carnival: Between World Restaurant! Every 250 Power Stones is an extra chapter for that week! Up to a maximum of 5 extra chapters a week!

You can read my new book "Lord of the Time: I Can Reincarnate Infinitely." Fein is a transmigrator who finds himself in a world filled with monsters and demons. Fortunately, he has a unique ability that allows him to upgrade his talents in everything. Alongside his companions Aoi, Sofia, and Voli, he uses his newfound abilities to fight against the dangerous foes that threaten the safety of humanity. In this world, humans and beasts alike use the powerful energy known as degu to fuel their abilities, which can strengthen their bodies and weapons. Beasts are ranked based on their rarity, with common, golden, legendary, mythical, and god-level beasts being the most powerful. However, despite their strength, the beasts are not invincible and must be carefully fought. Fein himself can understand the laws that enabled him to gain powers such as space manipulation and the all the laws such as time, darkness, light, death, fire, etc... Space Manipulation allows him to create and control rifts in space, warp reality, and move through time. Meanwhile, Aoi has the power of ice and snow, which can freeze her enemies and create powerful blizzards. Sofia uses her power of destruction, and Voli wields the power of lightning to strike his enemies with devastating bolts of electricity. As they face off against the dangerous demons and monsters that threaten their world, Fein and his companions must use their abilities and their wits to survive. The battles are intense and the stakes are high, as even the slightest mistake could mean the difference between victory and defeat. Will they be able to save their world and protect humanity from the dangers that lurk around every corner? Only time will tell. You can buy my priv: Extremely Low Price at: Tier 1: Advanced 2 chapters- 1 gold coins. Tier 2: Advanced 10 chapters- 100 gold coins. Tier 3: Advanced 20 chapters- 150 gold coins. Tier 4: Advanced 35 chapters- 200 gold coins. Tier 5: Advanced 50 chapters- 250 gold coins. Disclaimer: The cover is not mine. The art is rightfully owned by Jenny Ann. However, if the artist wants to communicate to take it down, please DM me on my Discord--- UnluckyGuy#3859

Su Ming was reincarnated as a white wolf. He thought he would live an ordinary life as a wolf, but he realized that the world was quietly changing The snow leopard has grown long teeth, the brown bear's hands will petrify, the golden eagle can summon lightning, and even the northern goat will emit poisonous mist. Just as Su Ming had no idea what to do next, a notification appeared. [Known Evolution Paths] 1. Moon Herd Silver-clawed Wolf 2. Frost Bosch Wolf 3. Ancient Battle Mark Wolf

Qin Lin was playing a nostalgic game called “Ranches Story” when he was electrocuted. He suddenly discovered that he had the ability to enter into the game. He could even bring a watermelon he had planted in the game back to reality. At first, his plan was to sell watermelon for 2 yuan a catty. In that case, he could earn 20,000 yuan by planting 10,000 catties worth of watermelon in the game every day and selling them in reality. Later on, he discovered that by leveling up his ranch, he could obtain high quality crops that surpassed that of the real world. If he reared livestock, they were of far higher quality than that of reality. After he built factories, he obtained various recipes that far surpassed that of the real world. Everything changed after that.

Disclaimer : I don't own TDG or Cultivation ! I Augmented my statuses to unlimited duration . Lin Langtian was a common servant of the Sacred Family of Glory City . Due to his red soul realm he put up with the abuse and ridicule for 10 years . At the age of 13 , he had gathered enough money to buy himself out of servitude . Shen Ming , an elder of the sacred Family got offended that such a lowly servant dared to leave his magnificent family and crippled Lin's dantian . In his last moments of Death , the resentment and hatred he had for the sacred family caused his soul to form a Heart Demon and breath life into his body as a Soul From Earth possessed the body of Lin Lingtian . Now Lin Lingtian takes a meal and gains the status [ Satiety ] [ Satiety : Restores 1 Stamina per minute . Duration : Infinity ] He no longer has to eat . Taking pills , gaining soul force , refining the body , nurturing the soul and increasing life expectancy ... He only needs one pill for the status to take effect for the rest of his life . Those crippling secret techniques that boost power for three seconds but result in three year feebleness ? They are now the most powerful and most amazing Techniques ! ( Join my discord : https://discord.gg/gCkNpKf9 ) ( You can support me on P.A.T.R.E.O.N https://www.patreon.com/Adamo_Amet . You can read my one shots , drafts and advanced chapters by being a patreon )

[COMPLETED] "Are you going to shoot me, baby?" "Don't tempt me. . Mia Vincent only wanted one thing: Kill Anthony Murray. Kill the person who murdered her parents. Only his death would satisfy her thirst for his blood. When she was assigned the task of infiltrating his gang, she agreed willingly and started plotting the ways to destroy him. Yet she failed... miserably at that. How could she fall in love with a man who caused her so much pain? So. she ran... as fast as the wind, hoping to never see him again. When Anthony met Mia, he fell in love with her feisty attitude and thirst for adventure. He loved her with every fibre of his being. Yet in his world, loving someone was a risk, a danger to his empire. So, he chose to hurt her... made her stay far away from him. However, he soon realized how important her existence was. He couldn't live without her. Betrayals. Mobs. Guns. Violence. Will Anthony and Mia survive the wild ride? - - - - - Read my other works: 1. Cornered by the CEO - Complete 2. Autopsy of a Mind - Complete 3. Alter Ego: His Sultry Lover - Complete 4. Phoenix in the Moonlight - Hiatus Story Discord: https://discord.gg/bG7YsaRRbs Author Instagram: @sunscar9